Suthaveli vs Cred - SUTH WINS

[Orc]

THE WINTER CLASSIC
The Premier Text Battling Tournament

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Sunday,
• Voting ends Thursday,
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 48 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 24 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 24 lines

General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in IS mandatory -- if there's no check in by Friday, you will be replaced.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Suthaveli @Cred

[Suthaveli]

Edit- 18 on deck.

[Orc]

@Cred has until tomorrow to check in or he will be replaced

[Cred]

Cash.

[Suthaveli]

Listen here ya broke fuck, u're even poor at releasin carnage
Cred tried ta Cash his check-in but Orc informed him it's being garnish
Compare da odds.Stare real hard at ur rec 2 this glarin lose
Then send a bunch'a ghost threats my way on some "Suth, I swear ta god..."
No remorse.Blow da torch w.joltin force 2 fold this dork
That shit'll make 'em takeoff- Now he's on stage performin MotorSport
Is it laptop or strap-cocked? Pairin 2 fix it or carry ballistics?
Urkel's not da only nerd n the Chi usin computers 2 switch his characteristics
Let him talk his shit. Ur ends w. a dr. when I'm finna ta pop ya
Stalk my prey, then turn it into a predator scene when I get 2 da choppa
U'ra whhhole biter. Homie doesn't even own his own fire
Most his bars are copywritten... well, copied writtens of URLs knwn writers
When the generic gunbars die off, what da hell's ya plan?
Right now they're ya walkin cane- Those sticks is what's helpin ya stand
Yea, I said he's nothin. All that gun action, I bet he's bluffin
Just'a soft animal tellin us a bunch'a stories... U'za Teddy Ruxpin
Weak hits bruise this freakin nuisance.Feeble moves can beat this dood in...
^That's just me being dwn fwrd, □ <-- He'll lose 2 this weak Hadoken
Allow me 2 make some confessions: 1) U're fake w. aggression
w.ur tender face, my hands'll keep swipin right constantly makin connections


Issa 20

[Barcotic]

copywritten hit hard
walking cane was ok
dwn fwd square was dope

not really feelin the rest

[Suthaveli]

Hey @Barcotic appriecate the feed. If u hv time lmk what u didn't like about the other bars. Thx.

[WRATH]

*garnished

Also wtf at the second line?

Picks up from copywritten on