WRATH vs Ender - Wrath Wins

[Orc]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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@WRATH @Ender

[Ender]

Check.

[WRATH]

Phone check homie

Ya verse in the pic roast was a big joke, the wheres waldo bar had me snoring
Now THAT was a flatline, only reason we'd be dead from your bars is due to actual boredom
This texts' villain, dark side got bitches on sex missions
Yo girl could light up the room for a fee too.. shit she built like an electrician
You either getting hit or killed, kid this is for real fool
Not only will i rap the year up with your uncle murder, I'll still be spitting with skilz too
Idgaf if u a new cat or an alias, you show up you get slid
Your reward For Battling me today is getting left with a lip like his
To me the thought of suicide is foreign but u should cause ur life is boring
Man I heard that when you end ya life is just roaming around ghosting forums
N this aint no whispering, we'll speak about you in front of you while u gawking
.. Too end the conversation was just that we'd feel better if you stop talking

[Ender]

You’ve had 5 battles, so send Mr J thankyou notes
Without his dive, somehow we’d be equal in Netcees career votes!
You’ll just be RATH after this battle because I get violent
I’ll rip the W away from you and just leave you silent
I’ll grab my shotgun, guess where you’ll be looking in this battle?
Same place Netcees found you... down the bottom of the barrel
WRATH must be British, I spotted that quicker than most
Because in that Zelph thread he cooked up a boring and flavourless roast
I’ve got no flaw… my verses win every bout
He got no flaw… which is why he can’t stop bottoming out
I’m a boss with slicker wordplay than most
Check this...
… watch as I tear into WRATH and turn him into a ghost

[Pinot Grij]

WRATH -- verse is aight. a little broken wording here and there. the aggression is solid but wording draws back a bit. Some of the wp was decent: electrician, lip bars were cool. Nothing that grabbed me and said this was lotb, opponent really needs to come hard.

Ender -- good aggression. some basic wp that for me hit a bit harder than Wrath. liked the silent line, bottom of the barrel had funny execution. Flavourless roast was lmao. I don't know what that flaw shit means, or the closer.

Look, let's get honest -- these aren't championship-quality verses. So I'm voting on personal preference. I thought Ender had a few more comedic takes that made his verse a better read. I'm voting for Ender.

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by WRATH

Phone check homie

Ya verse in the pic roast was a big joke, the wheres waldo bar had me snoring
Now THAT was a flatline, only reason we'd be dead from your bars is due to actual boredom

☆☆☆☆☆

This texts' villain, dark side got bitches on sex missions
Yo girl could light up the room for a fee too.. shit she built like an electrician

☆☆☆

You either getting hit or killed, kid this is for real fool
Not only will i rap the year up with your uncle murder, I'll still be spitting with skilz too

☆☆☆☆☆

Idgaf if u a new cat or an alias, you show up you get slid
Your reward For Battling me today is getting left with a lip like his

☆☆☆☆☆

To me the thought of suicide is foreign but u should cause ur life is boring
Man I heard that when you end ya life is just roaming around ghosting forums

☆ nice concept, terrible execution

N this aint no whispering, we'll speak about you in front of you while u gawking
.. Too end the conversation was just that we'd feel better if you stop talking

☆

Originally Posted by Ender

You’ve had 5 battles, so send Mr J thankyou notes
Without his dive, somehow we’d be equal in Netcees career votes!

☆ need to work on your delivery, thankyou notes and netceew career votes was really choppy and messed up the bar for me

You’ll just be RATH after this battle because I get violent
I’ll rip the W away from you and just leave you silent

☆☆

I’ll grab my shotgun, guess where you’ll be looking in this battle?
Same place Netcees found you... down the bottom of the barrel

☆

WRATH must be British, I spotted that quicker than most
Because in that Zelph thread he cooked up a boring and flavourless roast

☆☆☆☆☆ lmao

I’ve got no flaw… my verses win every bout
He got no flaw… which is why he can’t stop bottoming out

☆ rawfulz

I’m a boss with slicker wordplay than most
Check this...
… watch as I tear into WRATH and turn him into a ghost

☆

WRATH didn't really wow me here but Ender was pretty bad. Ender, that roast bar? Make all of your material come together like that. It was LOTB.

v-WRATH

[For Battling]

Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 327
Battle Record: 2-2



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kinda tired of these intros at this point
Phone check homie

Ya verse in the pic roast was a big joke, the wheres waldo bar had me snoring
Now THAT was a flatline, only reason we'd be dead from your bars is due to actual boredom
pretty good here
This texts' villain, dark side got bitches on sex missions
Yo girl could light up the room for a fee too.. shit she built like an electrician
decent, if we’re being 100 then not all electricians are busted. Actually haven’t seen many that were
You either getting hit or killed, kid this is for real fool
Not only will i rap the year up with your uncle murder, I'll still be spitting with skilz too
this was good!
Idgaf if u a new cat or an alias, you show up you get slid
Your reward For Battling me today is getting left with a lip like his
alright not bad
To me the thought of suicide is foreign but u should cause ur life is boring
Man I heard that when you end ya life is just roaming around ghosting forums
i liked this concept but you didn’t finish it with too much impact. Decent here
N this aint no whispering, we'll speak about you in front of you while u gawking
.. Too end the conversation was just that we'd feel better if you stop talking
nah


Vs



You’ve had 5 battles, so send Mr J thankyou notes
Without his dive, somehow we’d be equal in Netcees career votes!
didnt really like this
You’ll just be RATH after this battle because I get violent
I’ll rip the W away from you and just leave you silent
dope
I’ll grab my shotgun, guess where you’ll be looking in this battle?
Same place Netcees found you... down the bottom of the barrel
alright
WRATH must be British, I spotted that quicker than most
Because in that Zelph thread he cooked up a boring and flavourless roast
lol cool
I’ve got no flaw… my verses win every bout
He got no flaw… which is why he can’t stop bottoming out
nah I don’t know
I’m a boss with slicker wordplay than most
Check this...
Ghost line
it didn’t copy right for me but your closer I wasn’t feeling


I have ender with the better hits but also with more misses, wrath was overall more consistent and had the lesser amount of misses. Close battle and a good showing by both.

Vote WRATH

[Alvin Karpis]

Close battle

Wrath had a couple lines that hit but wording could be a bit better, light up a room was cool
Ender had a lil more sting, roast was nice
Overall Ender got it, by a hair

[classickERBL]

wrath - electrician bar was dope , uncle murda bar dope , and that FB lip bar funny as hell
ender was light , that w silent bar was cool
v- wrath

[Profit]

Phone check homie

Ya verse in the pic roast was a big joke, the wheres waldo bar had me snoring
Now THAT was a flatline, only reason we'd be dead from your bars is due to actual boredom

Cool

This texts' villain, dark side got bitches on sex missions
Yo girl could light up the room for a fee too.. shit she built like an electrician

Ok

You either getting hit or killed, kid this is for real fool
Not only will i rap the year up with your uncle murder, I'll still be spitting with skilz too

Cool

Idgaf if u a new cat or an alias, you show up you get slid
Your reward For Battling me today is getting left with a lip like his

Nice

To me the thought of suicide is foreign but u should cause ur life is boring
Man I heard that when you end ya life is just roaming around ghosting forums

Ehh

N this aint no whispering, we'll speak about you in front of you while u gawking
.. Too end the conversation was just that we'd feel better if you stop talking

Ehhh



You’ve had 5 battles, so send Mr J thankyou notes
Without his dive, somehow we’d be equal in Netcees career votes!

Ehh

You’ll just be RATH after this battle because I get violent
I’ll rip the W away from you and just leave you silent

I fuck w/this


I’ll grab my shotgun, guess where you’ll be looking in this battle?
Same place Netcees found you... down the bottom of the barrel

Ehhh

WRATH must be British, I spotted that quicker than most
Because in that Zelph thread he cooked up a boring and flavourless roast

Nice

I’ve got no flaw… my verses win every bout
He got no flaw… which is why he can’t stop bottoming out

Ehh

I’m a boss with slicker wordplay than most
Check this...
… watch as I tear into WRATH and turn him into a ghost

Ehh


Wrath started of good then let go on his last two but still had consistency in this. Thought ender coulda reworded a couple to make um land harder but overall wrath had the better verse.. vote wrath

[BROKE LESNAR]

WRATH wins 4-2