first sober freestyle in a minute! nikes on my feeeet

Bodey · 05-16-2013, 12:57 AM

recently found this on my phone, did it last week. i was compeltely sober, all i did was drink one of those crazy rockstar drinks (i never fuckin drink those shits so i was pretty hyped up) lol

https://soundcloud.com/badiali/nikes...feet-freestyle

PancakeBrah · 05-16-2013, 01:21 AM

good job.

didn't listen, but good job for not being a degenerate

Bodey · 05-16-2013, 02:55 PM

listennnnn

Boredom · 05-16-2013, 03:00 PM

want an honest opinion or an ego jerkin?

Bodey · 05-16-2013, 03:14 PM

obviously i dont want bullshit feedback, or i wouldnt have bothered posting it

it's also very basic, typical freestyle for me. i was just impressed that it didnt sound half bad while i wasnt completely stoned/drunk, as i normally do it. idk, i like sharin my shit. whats your honest opinion

NYCSPITZ · 05-16-2013, 03:28 PM

It was good, bad alii.

You're better than nicki minaj

Bodey · 05-16-2013, 03:32 PM

good looks NYC

i'm sure you can kind of tell, but i'm driving home and i actually did come up behind my friend on his moped so that kinda threw me off. maybe i should do this sober more often, i dont sound as sloppy or monotone imo

trap. · 05-16-2013, 05:21 PM

turned it off after 35 seconds. i think you'd make good songs though. MAKE SONGS.

PATHOS · 05-16-2013, 07:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by trap

turned it off after 35 seconds. i think you'd make good songs though. MAKE SONGS.

I'm sayin...

Badweather · 05-16-2013, 09:37 PM

badi's "go to" phrases or words in a freestyle

"baby"

and

"fuckin'"

and

"just sitting here"

and

"don't know what i'm doin"

Boredom · 05-16-2013, 09:59 PM

word thats the biggest thing, to many go to words/phrases u constantly repeat made for a very repetitive listen.. content was lack luster as well tbh.

veritas · 05-16-2013, 10:19 PM

Mad potential

Bodey · 05-17-2013, 09:03 PM

hell yeah guys, see thats the feedback i want. i just never posted a sober freestyle before and i noticed the flow was a lot better than the faded shit i normally do

ive had fuckin writer's block to be honest, lately. or what i do write doesnt seem good enough to me so i just scratch it off and lazily freestyle. even though iknowwww its repetitive

Witty · 05-18-2013, 12:35 PM

Haven't listened yet, but props on taking feedback like a boss....which is more than I can say for most of the people here tbh.

I'll listen.

05-16-2013, 01:21 AM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	good job. didn't listen, but good job for not being a degenerate __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

05-16-2013, 09:37 PM	#10
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,850 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	badi's "go to" phrases or words in a freestyle "baby" and "fuckin'" and "just sitting here" and "don't know what i'm doin" __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

05-16-2013, 09:59 PM	#11
Boredom Been On One Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 1,617 Battle Record: 26-28 Champed - Newbie Tournament IV Rep Power: 415110	word thats the biggest thing, to many go to words/phrases u constantly repeat made for a very repetitive listen.. content was lack luster as well tbh. Last edited by Boredom; 05-16-2013 at 10:02 PM.

05-18-2013, 12:35 PM	#14
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Haven't listened yet, but props on taking feedback like a boss....which is more than I can say for most of the people here tbh. I'll listen. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

05-16-2013, 03:00 PM	#4
Boredom Been On One Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 1,617 Battle Record: 26-28 Champed - Newbie Tournament IV Rep Power: 415110	want an honest opinion or an ego jerkin?

05-16-2013, 03:28 PM	#6
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	It was good, bad alii. You're better than nicki minaj

05-16-2013, 05:21 PM	#8
trap. Senior Citizen Join Date: Aug 1997 Posts: 3,870 Battle Record: 4-3 Rep Power: 0	turned it off after 35 seconds. i think you'd make good songs though. MAKE SONGS.