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![]() NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12pm pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @Chyeahhh!!! @Innovator Last edited by Allen Knight; 08-28-2016 at 09:35 PM. |
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This topical head aint get invited to Lars tourney? that's some clear ether
You're a punchline, but that doesn't necessarily mean we want you here..either Last edited by Chyeahhh!!!; 08-29-2016 at 12:53 PM. |
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The fifth don't discriminate, no BLM after I take this win
Plus Ama bullseye...but no aero when I put a chink to your chin |
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Innovator's delivery was a lot better and I think his punch was cleaner. Also, the ether/either bar is so old.. so that was a little disappointing. Chyeahhh.. I also think your bar would have benefited a lot if you cleaned up the first line some. Seems like you had a good idea but just couldn't word it cleaner.
Vote - Innovator
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chyeahhhh got this
better idea, better execution of the concept |
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Didn't really like either that much tbh but idk what chyeah was saying. Surprised he dropped weak like that. Innovator had a better punch here
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Chyeah had a dope pwrsonal
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Didnt like either tbh. Both came pretty bland but chyeah was a bit better
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Inno's delivery felt weird.. Chyeah's delivery was good, and a good personal.
Vote -- Chyeah.
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CHYEAHHH Inno's wording had no sting to it, while C had a simple personal, but it was still more effective.
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V/Chyeah ... Nice personal
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I'm always a fan of seeing racial slurs in punchlines but I think ole chyin Duncan did enuff here to take it
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Chyeah - seems basic but is a lil smarter of a punch than it comes off.
Innovator - ooooo I get it arro Asian harhar. Lol this was pretty cool conceptually but it didn't come off how you wanted it to I think. Vote Chyrah
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Chys bar grew on me.
Inns delivery didn't sound fluid to me but iliked the concept. Enjoyed chys better tho. V chy |
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Chyeahhh!!! had a great line. I'm not sure how he's not winning this by shutout. Innovator, the Aero part seemed forced and the chink to your chin concept has been used a million times over the years.
Vote: Chyeahhh!!!
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