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Old 05-16-2013, 09:01 PM   #141
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Damn do y'all ever feel that your pieces are Incomplete but u keep inputting more dept in it then it would be over a hundred lines long???
Nope, I write 3 pages worth each sitting

Then condense it to 30-60 lines and post that.

Never had a problem with needing to go over line limit though to answer question,
because I will just chop lines out or combine lines and shit like that
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Old 05-16-2013, 10:04 PM   #142
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Old 05-17-2013, 12:15 AM   #143
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I could probably think of a cool metaphor comparing this week the viagra, but I wont.
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Old 05-17-2013, 01:06 AM   #144
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Old 05-17-2013, 01:25 AM   #146
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Wat??/ and I quit if we gon have a dick contest...
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Old 05-17-2013, 01:38 AM   #147
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@TYSON: Congratulations with your W. I hope we meet again so I can post an actual verse. Laters all. ^^
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Old 05-17-2013, 01:42 AM   #148
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@TYSON: Congratulations with your W. I hope we meet again so I can post an actual verse. Laters all. ^^
The w??? Ain't one vote in yet its up to the voters not u. And stop throwing excuses already bro that's a bitch move, nah mean. Good drop tbh.
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The w??? Ain't one vote in yet its up to the voters not u. And stop throwing excuses already bro that's a bitch move, nah mean. Good drop tbh.
Not an excuse, I apologize if it came through as that and if you think it's a bitch move; whatevs... Thanks for the compliment tho', but personally I would have liked to actually drop something I'm at least halfway satisfied with and I'm pretty certain you're going to take this one. This isn't one of the verses I'd even give someone for a feedback on and I wrote it faster than I would like to but no-shows is something no-one deserves.

I did have some pre-written shit, that's true, but to go through with the initial idea I had I'd have to read more about the history behind Monte Cristo and I didn't have time for that as I wanted to get some time of sleep. Didn't get any sleep tho' so everything kinda went wrong in my favor and I decided to write something up. Started writing something else and scrapped that idea and went along with something that I ended up posting. Call it a bitch-move, excuse or whatever, but it's the truth. Been busy this week. But hey, at least I didn't no-show.
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Old 05-17-2013, 02:05 AM   #150
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Yes I appreciate u showing. The reason I call it a bitch move is cause I like competition and looked at your work as that. So me going against u is not cool if your effort is minimum. No this ain't my best work but it was what I could up with, since the topic was wack. No complaints @ whoever. But that's why I joined the league cause it takes me out the norm. So its competition and if my opponent, who I know can write, comes with something he not proud of then I feel insulted. No its not that serious j/s. If u would have said that after the match was over then it would have been understandable.
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Yes I appreciate u showing. The reason I call it a bitch move is cause I like competition and looked at your work as that. So me going against u is not cool if your effort is minimum. No this ain't my best work but it was what I could up with, since the topic was wack. No complaints @ whoever. But that's why I joined the league cause it takes me out the norm. So its competition and if my opponent, who I know can write, comes with something he not proud of then I feel insulted. No its not that serious j/s. If u would have said that after the match was over then it would have been understandable.
Word, that's why I joined the league as well. I normally wouldn't have said that shit, but since you stated earlier that you had lack of motivation as well I thought we were on the same page and didn't think that far. I understand you 100% and I apologize again if I insulted you. I truly hope we meet again sometime no matter what the topic is and you're right, it was a bitch move, I wont do it again.

Either way; best of luck in the tourney and let's make justice to this shit when an opportunity presents itself.
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Old 05-17-2013, 03:02 AM   #152
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Finally dropped.

In a real mellow vibe man. Maybe its cuz of the close loss in the champ match, or maybe some real life shit or a combo of both. But idk man, just...

Idk.

Looking forward to reading some hype ass verses though, don't kill my vibe yall lol
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Old 05-17-2013, 05:19 AM   #153
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I was guna give up on this shit, being that I gotta wake up in three hours now lol. Oh well, I'm just glad i got something complete, even though it's guna get no showed. gn
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Old 05-17-2013, 05:21 AM   #154
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@Figurative....nigga I ain't reading that long ass shit. Damn son. Lol
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Old 05-17-2013, 05:25 AM   #155
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At this point, i could give a fuck lmao. It honestly didn't even come out how i wanted, but it's whatever lol. I'll take this week as a lesson to stop putting off verses.
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Old 05-17-2013, 05:40 AM   #156
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Naw just fucking with ya...cake be bitching out tho used to act like he was god now the nigga don't even show...pussy
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All no show battles are closed & the remaining battles are all open for votes. Good luck, to those who are looking for the W and fuck you to those who didn't show. You've probably ruined your playoff chances by doing so. Ha. I'm out til later. Holler.
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Old 05-17-2013, 08:37 AM   #158
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wow. gonna be voting in a few on all the battles. I hope yall got ya BARZ UP!!

I have this sinking feeling heading into the playoffs, like basically I'm going to be thrown up against a really great writer with a poor record who will take the playoffs as motivation to drop the hottest 48 bars of their life.

I'll still win though :) lol jp who knows, its gonna be a great event though, can't wait.

Is it just grudge matches next week or what? If so, as a general question to all my homies in the league...

Who ya grudgin???

I say me vs. C.D.M. to avenge my no-show loss lol

Also, where do we put voting links? @Split @KingKeith
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I still want to battle Ink or Cereal Killer. Its not a grudge match though, its just I like there styles so think it would be fun

The obvious answer would be ZeeDee. Or Vulgar even cuz if he signs in that might decide who wins our division??

Or IAmBenT cuz he a bish;)
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"Hate to say I told you so, but...."

Interest is fading Keith.
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