Reza 0-1 vs Allen Knight 3-0 - ALLEN WINS

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@Reza @Allen Knight

[Reza]

In. 12 or 14??

[Allen Knight]

ight, thats cool.

[Allen Knight]

got these bars bruh.

[Reza]

Listen I'm snatchin this w like a purse. F that moral shit pa
After this al will have more flowers cross the chest than a floral print bra
Fuck ya accomplishments. What ya done means nothing, deadbeat.
Cuz the shots I'll sinew will make him sick. Like an adversion to redmeat
Couldn't see me with 10 pairs of eyes
Only reason your here at all. Is mom took too long getting sterilized
I don't respect you. You'll barely put up a fight
Your cred took a shot when he pummeled you fight night
With 8 arms you couldn't throw a str8 jab. You gots to die
Stuff his ass in a blender, add sum milk and turn octopi
Fake mod. Got ya position by licking mag's ass
Grind his bones into dust. Throw it in a sack.. Now that's a sand bag
Fucker...

[Sharp]

@Allen Knight

[Allen Knight]

u'll get sprayed for reppin crip or blood, faggot lead'll spew
Captian America shield hittin Iron Man, a spark on ur chest over red & blue
i wyle out for doe, i go pyshco wen the mag rips ur soul in half
once i Wallets acouple shots to the cranium & then i'll hold ur cash
for kilos of dope, got u in my scope bout to get ya wig rocked
over acouple of bricks, them hollows give u a death touch like a Dim Mak
slice ya till u have to hit the ER for stitches & im pokin up ya friends
once Re-Released from the ICU i'll stab this fag till his shit opens up again
straight executing this slut, got the torch to ya eye fam
u'll get one Shah thru the skull pussy then i'll bury ur corpse in Iran
try to run up & talk shit faggot, my fists offing ur kind
if Reflex on me then i'll break his jaw w/ out a thought in my mind

[slecht]

Listen I'm snatchin this w like a purse. F that moral shit pa
After this al will have more flowers cross the chest than a floral print bra
---eh okay, not bad----
Fuck ya accomplishments. What ya done means nothing, deadbeat.
Cuz the shots I'll sinew will make him sick. Like an adversion to redmeat
---bro ,you - him? mmhm, ur povs r incorrect.---
Couldn't see me with 10 pairs of eyes
Only reason your here at all. Is mom took too long getting sterilized
---no, no---
I don't respect you. You'll barely put up a fight
Your cred took a shot when he pummeled you fight night
---okay personal---
With 8 arms you couldn't throw a str8 jab. You gots to die
Stuff his ass in a blender, add sum milk and turn octopi
---bro come on, you can do better than this.
Fake mod. Got ya position by licking mag's ass
Grind his bones into dust. Throw it in a sack.. Now that's a sand bag
---played---


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u'll get sprayed for reppin crip or blood, faggot lead'll spew
Captian America shield hittin Iron Man, a spark on ur chest over red & blue
----fresh---
i wyle out for doe, i go pyshco wen the mag rips ur soul in half
once i Wallets acouple shots to the cranium & then i'll hold ur cash
---ok concept, not that hard hitting---
for kilos of dope, got u in my scope bout to get ya wig rocked
over acouple of bricks, them hollows give u a death touch like a Dim Mak
--woo, okay cool shit here---
slice ya till u have to hit the ER for stitches & im pokin up ya friends
once Re-Released from the ICU i'll stab this fag till his shit opens up again
---not bad lol, pretty good hit---
straight executing this slut, got the torch to ya eye fam
u'll get one Shah thru the skull pussy then i'll bury ur corpse in Iran
---ight dope---
try to run up & talk shit faggot, my fists offing ur kind
if Reflex on me then i'll break his jaw w/ out a thought in my mind
---mmmm nice nice---

vote: ak

honestly, no competition here. ak with the landslide. reza had that personal but knight came with the punches.
papi vote.

[Kenny the OG]

Listen I'm snatchin this w like a purse. F that moral shit pa
After this al will have more flowers cross the chest than a floral print bra
Lol. Ok
Fuck ya accomplishments. What ya done means nothing, deadbeat.
Cuz the shots I'll sinew will make him sick. Like an adversion to redmeat
Ok
Couldn't see me with 10 pairs of eyes
Only reason your here at all. Is mom took too long getting sterilized
Fuck outta here wit this shit b lol
I don't respect you. You'll barely put up a fight
Your cred took a shot when he pummeled you fight night
Decent personal
With 8 arms you couldn't throw a str8 jab. You gots to die
Stuff his ass in a blender, add sum milk and turn octopi
Lmaoo I like this. just some funny shit. Ain't heard a nigga use ock ina minute too lol
Fake mod. Got ya position by licking mag's ass
Grind his bones into dust. Throw it in a sack.. Now that's a sand bag
wiff



u'll get sprayed for reppin crip or blood, faggot lead'll spew
Captian America shield hittin Iron Man, a spark on ur chest over red & blue
ok. Nice flip. Creativity factor
i wyle out for doe, I go pyscho wen the mag rips ur soul in half
once i Wallets acouple shots to the cranium & then i'll hold ur cash
I hear the wordplay but the way it's tacked in there reads forced. Decent attempt but the executions off
for kilos of dope, got u in my scope bout to get ya wig rocked
over acouple of bricks, them hollows give u a death touch like a Dim Mak
Lol the kung fu flick fan in me fucks wit this hard. Pause.
slice ya till u have to hit the ER for stitches & im pokin up ya friends
once Re-Released from the ICU i'll stab this fag till his shit opens up again
ehh
straight executing this slut, got the torch to ya eye fam
u'll get one Shah thru the skull pussy then i'll bury ur corpse in Iran
Grizzly
try to run up & talk shit faggot, my fists offing ur kind
if Reflex on me then i'll break his jaw w/ out a thought in my mind
I like this Re nameflip alot more than the previous one. Solid closer



Reza is like mftastick to me. A lot of potential but has to tighten up a few things. I liked octopi wordplay that was dope. The opener and sinew bars had alot of potential but couldve been done better. Tough break for the guy, not sure if he's an alias but he was pitted against AK who has a lot of experience and has always been a solid competitor. He did his thing here and got the win

Vote- allen

[Barcotic]

the re nameflips would work if reza was pronounced reeza, but it's not

so

ak's opener
shah

vs

reza's opener

v/ak

[Joe Boston]

Reza




Listen I'm snatchin this w like a purse. F that moral shit pa
After this al will have more flowers cross the chest than a floral print bra
Nice metaphore

Fuck ya accomplishments. What ya done means nothing, deadbeat.
Cuz the shots I'll sinew will make him sick. Like an adversion to redmeat
Nice metaphore again but u fucked up on wording lol send u them him shoulda edited before u dropped other then that stil an ok hit

Couldn't see me with 10 pairs of eyes
Only reason your here at all. Is mom took too long getting sterilized
Nah

I don't respect you. You'll barely put up a fight
Your cred took a shot when he pummeled you fight night
Ok jab at a personal

With 8 arms you couldn't throw a str8 jab. You gots to die
Stuff his ass in a blender, add sum milk and turn octopi
What??? Setup wasnt even relevant with finisher

Fake mod. Got ya position by licking mag's ass
Grind his bones into dust. Throw it in a sack.. Now that's a sand bag
Fucker...
Noooo

Allen




u'll get sprayed for reppin crip or blood, faggot lead'll spew
Captian America shield hittin Iron Man, a spark on ur chest over red & blue
Nice flip creative finish twist off ur setup

i wyle out for doe, i go pyshco wen the mag rips ur soul in half
once i Wallets acouple shots to the cranium & then i'll hold ur cash
Cool wordplay

for kilos of dope, got u in my scope bout to get ya wig rocked
over acouple of bricks, them hollows give u a death touch like a Dim Mak
Dope metaphore

slice ya till u have to hit the ER for stitches & im pokin up ya friends
once Re-Released from the ICU i'll stab this fag till his shit opens up again
Lol damn nice direct hit ok nameplay

straight executing this slut, got the torch to ya eye fam
u'll get one Shah thru the skull pussy then i'll bury ur corpse in Iran
Nice wordplay flip

try to run up & talk shit faggot, my fists offing ur kind
if Reflex on me then i'll break his jaw w/ out a thought in my mind
Good nameplay

Allen took this pretty comfortably i wouldve like to see nameflips other than a basic re cuz reza is his name coulda did some rez flips but what was fresh u had creative shit to go with it which made it look too easy. Reza ur opener was dope ur 2nd bar i liked but damn stop rushing. If u had more metaphorical content like that first bar u can be a problem.

V/Allen

[Ghost1]

Listen I'm snatchin this w like a purse. F that moral shit pa
After this al will have more flowers cross the chest than a floral print bra

Ha I fuck w this

Fuck ya accomplishments. What ya done means nothing, deadbeat.
Cuz the shots I'll sinew will make him sick. Like an adversion to redmeat

Little wordy...cool wordplay tho

Couldn't see me with 10 pairs of eyes
Only reason your here at all. Is mom took too long getting sterilized

Played

I don't respect you. You'll barely put up a fight
Your cred took a shot when he pummeled you fight night

Light

With 8 arms you couldn't throw a str8 jab. You gots to die
Stuff his ass in a blender, add sum milk and turn octopi

Ock to pie is a cool concept for a wordplay....execution an wording is lacking here tho

Fake mod. Got ya position by licking mag's ass
Grind his bones into dust. Throw it in a sack.. Now that's a sand bag

Nah

Fucker...


u'll get sprayed for reppin crip or blood, faggot lead'll spew
Captian America shield hittin Iron Man, a spark on ur chest over red & blue

Concepts dope...wording an execution is obv rushed

i wyle out for doe, i go pyshco wen the mag rips ur soul in half
once i Wallets acouple shots to the cranium & then i'll hold ur cash

This is cool lol

for kilos of dope, got u in my scope bout to get ya wig rocked
over acouple of bricks, them hollows give u a death touch like a Dim Mak

Light

slice ya till u have to hit the ER for stitches & im pokin up ya friends
once Re-Released from the ICU i'll stab this fag till his shit opens up again

Played

straight executing this slut, got the torch to ya eye fam
u'll get one Shah thru the skull pussy then i'll bury ur corpse in Iran

Cool

try to run up & talk shit faggot, my fists offing ur kind
if Reflex on me then i'll break his jaw w/ out a thought in my mind

This shit was raw haha



So Reza had a decent showing...sum played stuff an sum execution issues....honestly with Allens lazy approach this was prolly alot closer then it should've been. There is still a noticeable difference in skillset here tho. AK just has more experience in this venue an I think he had sum stiffer shots landed as well as better misses.

V ak

[Saint]

vote AK

Reza had opener and octopi was fresh but executed not too well..
just keep battling & reading to help w/ wording issues..

AK had shah, reflex, wallets was ok. AK got it pretty comfortably

[Cred]

That flowers across chest concept was nasty, wording was bogus tho. That cred/fn one u was right about lol nah it was koo tho.

Vs


Captain America joint was good, i fucked wit it n that reflex shit was nice too


Ak took this one pretty convincingly. Fresher ideas n nicer executed punches. Reza jus needs to up the wording n tie ins for his set up.

Vote - allen knight