ill nik-A 6-2 vs Adverse 2-0 - NIK WINS

Orc · 04-18-2016, 03:26 PM

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Adverse · 04-18-2016, 05:36 PM

Check. How many you want to go?

ill nik-A · 04-18-2016, 05:55 PM

10
Welcome!

Adverse · 04-21-2016, 12:48 PM

Might need the ext fam but I'll try to get it in tonight

ill nik-A · 04-21-2016, 05:20 PM

I'm ready to go lmk & yes at ext

ill nik-A · 04-21-2016, 07:34 PM

10 sent to @Orc @Adverse

Adverse · 04-23-2016, 12:39 AM

I doubt you wanna trip I got the metal in my grip
Poppin twin Cannons out at Nik like Mariah's pregnancy again
Tell the pearly gates hello when my burner makes your head blow
It ain't a reference to your age or autism when I hit ya with this .38 special
You old fuck, you about to catch this work mate
Bury you in the dirt and say I'm celebrating Earth Day
I swear if I see him in public, I'll unload on him
And turn Nik into just a spatter like that channels logo then
I'm the hunter here boy you're just another victim
Catch Nick slippin, put the red dot on him but I ain't talking about Russel snitchin

ill nik-A · 04-23-2016, 05:31 AM

punches scream wack noob & that u need ta know
So Ima point out the obvious... even if u quit usin "wordplay quotations" 2 weeks ago
The heat'll blow; don't give a fuck if u scared, nigga that's death!
I'll draw on the yellow... Ud swear this anime nerd was enjoyin his last breath
u gettin the worst from the goat don't care how u phrase schemes
Ure sad as fuck thinking at 2-0 ure balling... Yeah Jordan crying face meme
ur flow is water in the desert, freezing-in-hell good
Beatin me is just an illusion... seein the dope punches in ur verse nobody else could
Make ya bitch work the club & watch u get mad again
cuz she gives me the money after being wrapped around a pole like a street light accident

ill nik-A · 04-24-2016, 03:58 PM

0-0

Saitama · 04-24-2016, 04:49 PM

I doubt you wanna trip I got the metal in my grip
Poppin twin Cannons out at Nik like Mariah's pregnancy again
I've seen these but it hit to me, idc..

Tell the pearly gates hello when my burner makes your head blow
It ain't a reference to your age or autism when I hit ya with this .38 special
Lol. But nah done too much

You old fuck, you about to catch this work mate
Bury you in the dirt and say I'm celebrating Earth Day
Nothing here..

I swear if I see him in public, I'll unload on him
And turn Nik into just a spatter like that channels logo then
Played..

I'm the hunter here boy you're just another victim
Catch Nick slippin, put the red dot on him but I ain't talking about Russel snitchin
Ok closer..

Tbh, Nik only thing I felt was his opener.
Everything else was a cool idea but no hitters..

Vote adverse

Og smokinstein · 04-24-2016, 05:55 PM

This battle was cool...

But ima have to edge it to adverse, strictly off the nick cannon bar. It wasn't that crazy tho. But compared to the rest of his verse, then it was the hardest hitting line.

Nik verse was cool, but nothing hit for me imo.

So.. Vote adverse

Sharp · 04-25-2016, 02:22 PM

1-0 adverse

Up

Kenny the OG · 04-25-2016, 04:35 PM

I just did a whole like by line breakdown but hit send and had an error problem. Lost the whole thing and don't feel like redoing it all.
Basically, it was 2 vs 2 in quotables for me and I feel like the old nik shoulda destroyed the material his opponent brought but for whatever reason he didn't. Both verses were evenly matched and had some stale concepts and poorly executed decent concepts. Very surprised here that it wasn't more clear cut but I got nik BARELY taking it. His opener was lotb to me. This really could go either way tho.

Vote- nik.

SMaSH · 04-25-2016, 04:56 PM

Um...both was evenly matched in my eyes. Only quotables was the opening bars and I'd vote for adverse cuz I liked his better.

Barcotic · 04-25-2016, 05:19 PM

twin cannons lotb
38 special

vs

point out the obvious
2-0 balling
wrapped around a pole

altho only consistently average, nik just barely takes this

consistency always wins in a 10 line battle, imo

v/nik by a snatch hair

stay in the league n do pics w/ me this week @ill nik-A

Schadenfreude · 04-25-2016, 09:06 PM

ILL NIK-A edges w/ an extremely lazy verse, only salvation were the concepts. Adverse had clear, concise wording, but those concepts didn't have an weight to them.

Sharp · 04-25-2016, 09:36 PM

3-3

CBA · 04-25-2016, 09:56 PM

Going with Ill nik-a, Adverse had a pretty interesting verse but some of the shit didn't really rhyme at the beginning. Was weird voting for this one becaus I felt if the verse had a better flow that adverse probably would've gotten it, just can't bring myself to vote for stuff that doesn't rhyme though.

Artifice · 04-26-2016, 10:54 AM

I doubt you wanna trip I got the metal in my grip
Poppin twin Cannons out at Nik like Mariah's pregnancy again

VS

punches scream wack noob & that u need ta know
So Ima point out the obvious... even if u quit usin "wordplay quotations" 2 weeks ago

Make ya bitch work the club & watch u get mad again
cuz she gives me the money after being wrapped around a pole like a street light accident

i got nik barely taking this one... adverse had cool concepts like the nikolodeon/splatter one but it just didn't connect for me...

v/ nik-A

Habitat · 04-26-2016, 11:47 AM

adverse
I doubt you wanna trip I got the metal in my grip
Poppin twin Cannons out at Nik like Mariah's pregnancy again
-if this actually rhymed it would be decent.
Tell the pearly gates hello when my burner makes your head blow
It ain't a reference to your age or autism when I hit ya with this .38 special
-nah this is weak
You old fuck, you about to catch this work mate
Bury you in the dirt and say I'm celebrating Earth Day
-weak
I swear if I see him in public, I'll unload on him
And turn Nik into just a spatter like that channels logo then
-not a fan
I'm the hunter here boy you're just another victim
Catch Nick slippin, put the red dot on him but I ain't talking about Russel snitchin
-nah bro

nik
punches scream wack noob & that u need ta know
So Ima point out the obvious... even if u quit usin "wordplay quotations" 2 weeks ago
-yeah this was cool
The heat'll blow; don't give a fuck if u scared, nigga that's death!
I'll draw on the yellow... Ud swear this anime nerd was enjoyin his last breath
-I don't get the reference I never watch anime
u gettin the worst from the goat don't care how u phrase schemes
Ure sad as fuck thinking at 2-0 ure balling... Yeah Jordan crying face meme
-this was worded weird to me
ur flow is water in the desert, freezing-in-hell good
Beatin me is just an illusion... seein the dope punches in ur verse nobody else could
-lite
Make ya bitch work the club & watch u get mad again
cuz she gives me the money after being wrapped around a pole like a street light accident
-lite

Adverse opener had potential but not rhyming takes away from it. Wasn't feelin any of his other shit

Nik had the opener and a cpl lite hits he takes this comfortably imo

v - nik

04-18-2016, 03:26 PM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	ill nik-A 6-2 vs Adverse 2-0 - NIK WINS NBL Season 9 Due THURSDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls

04-18-2016, 05:55 PM	#3
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	10 Welcome! __________________ Grumpy old man.

04-21-2016, 05:20 PM	#5
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	I'm ready to go lmk & yes at ext __________________ Grumpy old man.

04-21-2016, 07:34 PM	#6
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	10 sent to @Orc @Adverse __________________ Grumpy old man.

04-23-2016, 05:31 AM	#8
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	punches scream wack noob & that u need ta know So Ima point out the obvious... even if u quit usin "wordplay quotations" 2 weeks ago The heat'll blow; don't give a fuck if u scared, nigga that's death! I'll draw on the yellow... Ud swear this anime nerd was enjoyin his last breath u gettin the worst from the goat don't care how u phrase schemes Ure sad as fuck thinking at 2-0 ure balling... Yeah Jordan crying face meme ur flow is water in the desert, freezing-in-hell good Beatin me is just an illusion... seein the dope punches in ur verse nobody else could Make ya bitch work the club & watch u get mad again cuz she gives me the money after being wrapped around a pole like a street light accident __________________ Grumpy old man.

04-18-2016, 05:36 PM	#2
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Check. How many you want to go?

04-21-2016, 12:48 PM	#4
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Might need the ext fam but I'll try to get it in tonight

04-23-2016, 12:39 AM	#7
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	I doubt you wanna trip I got the metal in my grip Poppin twin Cannons out at Nik like Mariah's pregnancy again Tell the pearly gates hello when my burner makes your head blow It ain't a reference to your age or autism when I hit ya with this .38 special You old fuck, you about to catch this work mate Bury you in the dirt and say I'm celebrating Earth Day I swear if I see him in public, I'll unload on him And turn Nik into just a spatter like that channels logo then I'm the hunter here boy you're just another victim Catch Nick slippin, put the red dot on him but I ain't talking about Russel snitchin

04-24-2016, 03:58 PM	#9
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	0-0 __________________ Grumpy old man.

04-24-2016, 04:49 PM	#10
Saitama One-Punch Man Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 118 Rep Power: 5936476	I doubt you wanna trip I got the metal in my grip Poppin twin Cannons out at Nik like Mariah's pregnancy again I've seen these but it hit to me, idc.. Tell the pearly gates hello when my burner makes your head blow It ain't a reference to your age or autism when I hit ya with this .38 special Lol. But nah done too much You old fuck, you about to catch this work mate Bury you in the dirt and say I'm celebrating Earth Day Nothing here.. I swear if I see him in public, I'll unload on him And turn Nik into just a spatter like that channels logo then Played.. I'm the hunter here boy you're just another victim Catch Nick slippin, put the red dot on him but I ain't talking about Russel snitchin Ok closer.. Tbh, Nik only thing I felt was his opener. Everything else was a cool idea but no hitters.. Vote adverse Last edited by Saitama; 04-25-2016 at 05:14 PM.

04-24-2016, 05:55 PM	#11
Og smokinstein The Marathon Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 114 Battle Record: 3-4 Rep Power: 352399	This battle was cool... But ima have to edge it to adverse, strictly off the nick cannon bar. It wasn't that crazy tho. But compared to the rest of his verse, then it was the hardest hitting line. Nik verse was cool, but nothing hit for me imo. So.. Vote adverse

04-25-2016, 02:22 PM	#12
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	1-0 adverse Up

04-25-2016, 04:35 PM	#13
Kenny the OG tutankhamen Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 363 Battle Record: 6-5 Rep Power: 16107559	I just did a whole like by line breakdown but hit send and had an error problem. Lost the whole thing and don't feel like redoing it all. Basically, it was 2 vs 2 in quotables for me and I feel like the old nik shoulda destroyed the material his opponent brought but for whatever reason he didn't. Both verses were evenly matched and had some stale concepts and poorly executed decent concepts. Very surprised here that it wasn't more clear cut but I got nik BARELY taking it. His opener was lotb to me. This really could go either way tho. Vote- nik. __________________ Wordplay? My words ain't meant to be played with.

04-25-2016, 04:56 PM	#14
SMaSH Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2016 Posts: 138 Battle Record: 4-7 Rep Power: 3284965	Um...both was evenly matched in my eyes. Only quotables was the opening bars and I'd vote for adverse cuz I liked his better.

04-25-2016, 05:19 PM	#15
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,496 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061968	twin cannons lotb 38 special vs point out the obvious 2-0 balling wrapped around a pole altho only consistently average, nik just barely takes this consistency always wins in a 10 line battle, imo v/nik by a snatch hair stay in the league n do pics w/ me this week @ill nik-A

04-25-2016, 09:06 PM	#16
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049084	ILL NIK-A edges w/ an extremely lazy verse, only salvation were the concepts. Adverse had clear, concise wording, but those concepts didn't have an weight to them.

04-25-2016, 09:36 PM	#17
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	3-3

04-25-2016, 09:56 PM	#18
CBA Member Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 2680674	Going with Ill nik-a, Adverse had a pretty interesting verse but some of the shit didn't really rhyme at the beginning. Was weird voting for this one becaus I felt if the verse had a better flow that adverse probably would've gotten it, just can't bring myself to vote for stuff that doesn't rhyme though. __________________ Buck Buck

04-26-2016, 10:54 AM	#19
Artifice Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 17-9 Champed - Art Of Writing League - GWL Picture Challenge Rep Power: 3944949	I doubt you wanna trip I got the metal in my grip Poppin twin Cannons out at Nik like Mariah's pregnancy again VS punches scream wack noob & that u need ta know So Ima point out the obvious... even if u quit usin "wordplay quotations" 2 weeks ago Make ya bitch work the club & watch u get mad again cuz she gives me the money after being wrapped around a pole like a street light accident i got nik barely taking this one... adverse had cool concepts like the nikolodeon/splatter one but it just didn't connect for me... v/ nik-A

04-26-2016, 11:47 AM	#20
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519561	adverse I doubt you wanna trip I got the metal in my grip Poppin twin Cannons out at Nik like Mariah's pregnancy again -if this actually rhymed it would be decent. Tell the pearly gates hello when my burner makes your head blow It ain't a reference to your age or autism when I hit ya with this .38 special -nah this is weak You old fuck, you about to catch this work mate Bury you in the dirt and say I'm celebrating Earth Day -weak I swear if I see him in public, I'll unload on him And turn Nik into just a spatter like that channels logo then -not a fan I'm the hunter here boy you're just another victim Catch Nick slippin, put the red dot on him but I ain't talking about Russel snitchin -nah bro nik punches scream wack noob & that u need ta know So Ima point out the obvious... even if u quit usin "wordplay quotations" 2 weeks ago -yeah this was cool The heat'll blow; don't give a fuck if u scared, nigga that's death! I'll draw on the yellow... Ud swear this anime nerd was enjoyin his last breath -I don't get the reference I never watch anime u gettin the worst from the goat don't care how u phrase schemes Ure sad as fuck thinking at 2-0 ure balling... Yeah Jordan crying face meme -this was worded weird to me ur flow is water in the desert, freezing-in-hell good Beatin me is just an illusion... seein the dope punches in ur verse nobody else could -lite Make ya bitch work the club & watch u get mad again cuz she gives me the money after being wrapped around a pole like a street light accident -lite Adverse opener had potential but not rhyming takes away from it. Wasn't feelin any of his other shit Nik had the opener and a cpl lite hits he takes this comfortably imo v - nik