Round One: Chat and Prediction

[e11even]

Originally Posted by Adonis

I'm passing out right now. Going to close battles early morning and I currently have 3 verses in my in box for no show matches.



@dead man @puravida @Flo Real @neutral @grafx @fraze @Maximus @PancakeBrah @Mike Wrecka @Objective @Pharaohs Army @Mr. J @Godcomplex @JESODIST @Zen

So the decision was to close it? My battle with flo is still open in the archive. Is it still being considered?

[Certain]

I want to thank Adonis for putting Pinot Grij and brokenhal0 against each other because Pinot definitely is sitting there wondering what the fuck is wrong with voters who think it's close.

(Note: I haven't read either verse. This is about stylistic preferences.)

[UnbornBuddha]

@Argh

You ask if I wrote under another moniker? Yes, UnbornBuddha. We competed in the RHYME; I will get my old name back soon. That's why I asked when you first posted here to bring Sacrifice out of hiding.

[Argh]

Originally Posted by Godcomplex

@Argh

You ask if I wrote under another moniker? Yes, UnbornBuddha. We competed in the RHYME; I will get my old name back soon. That's why I asked when you first posted here to bring Sacrifice out of hiding.

Ah. I see you've tightened up your writing quite a bit (a compliment). Looking forward to facing you again at some point. I miss the RHYME, which had/has an uncomparable level of talent.

[Mr. J]

Boredom is a fiendish troll that dwells in my sole
with that being said, in the snakes eyes...let the good times roll

[UnbornBuddha]

Originally Posted by Argh

Ah. I see you've tightened up your writing quite a bit (a compliment). Looking forward to facing you again at some point. I miss the RHYME, which had/has an uncomparable level of talent.

Yes, looking forward to it. I quite like the RHYME too; unfortunately, it appears the site is inactive, a barren wasteland it seems, in terms of topical writing. Plus, the last tournament wasn't even completed, a shame. Glad to see you competing though.

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Vividlyvague

So the decision was to close it? My battle with flo is still open in the archive. Is it still being considered?

No, sorry, there should be no posting allowed in there, not sure what happened. If he did post you can approve, otherwise you advance

[Pinot Grij]

Originally Posted by Certain

I want to thank Adonis for putting Pinot Grij and brokenhal0 against each other because Pinot definitely is sitting there wondering what the fuck is wrong with voters who think it's close.

(Note: I haven't read either verse. This is about stylistic preferences.)

I don't get it...

If anything, I've loved the feedback so far. I ended my verse the way I did to try to appease a certain voter base that would've thought my verse was too weird or too off topic. Everybody is telling me they don't want that kind of predictability - which only makes me more excited for next week - if I move on.

[NYCSPITZ]

my functioning sclera is coming for pinot...switch it up on him with some disneyland shit

[Pinot Grij]

I wish my sclera was not functioning when I read that line.

[Certain]

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

I don't get it...

If anything, I've loved the feedback so far. I ended my verse the way I did to try to appease a certain voter base that would've thought my verse was too weird or too off topic. Everybody is telling me they don't want that kind of predictability - which only makes me more excited for next week - if I move on.

I mean that your reading/voting taste is directly contradictory to brokenhal0's writing style.

[Pinot Grij]

Originally Posted by Certain

I mean that your reading/voting taste is directly contradictory to brokenhal0's writing style.

Yea, like, what was that motherfucker even talking about?

[Pinot Grij]

Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

[Diode]

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

in which pinot outs himself as a syrup guzzler, eh?

[Certain]

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

way too much punctuation and capitalization to be brokenhal0 man

[Witty]

That Cimmerian verse tho.

[e11even]

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

Fucking flames. I lol'd.

[Mr. J]

@Adonis you want this work buddy

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Mr. J

@Adonis you want this work buddy

Mr J don't know what real work is, nor could he handle the consequences of Adonis verbal ejaculate

facts

[Witty]

I'm the grim reaper, a thrill seeker with some ill sneakers, my will's eager to kill leaders, you need to chill 'fore heaters meet your grill, deplete your will, defeat your skill, show you you're still weaker.