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![]() ![]() My rhythm & rhymes vary, visually im distantly primary So ill just beat em by the book while ole Bishop the bon bon's pimpin the library mighty ducks 4 - a motion picture w/ old classics from disney 'knuckle pucks at the prom'... bombays new goalie is this lonely faggots virginity 1-2 punch was a different setting, DQ!?! Man that shit is petty Tryed to fuck w/ the kings engagements....but came dressed for Princes wedding U ready to lose? We could fight irl....but im skeptical dude Cuz If i punched u in them pregnant ass lips id get charged w/ domestic abuse U are a vision of frail darkness, i aint religious or that garbage So If my prayers fall on Def ears this blind faggit'll stop dressin like brail sharpton U should kiss up on the rings....trynna spit sum w the king!? U wont see this workout just cuz ur eyes got turkeynecks & do chinups when u blink U stay wack droppin trash...so hows this fag stoppin Bags? Thats a bigger stretch then the one that vest is doing to coverup his fat sloppy ass This is lil handicap? Sugs lil cousin? at first look im buggin Its a milkdud & diabetes wearing a mr potato head costume at a goodwill function? I aint as rich as bubba gump is so this is probably a dum quiz But How u kno 79 ways to cook a shrimp n cant figure ONE to dress properly in public What a tragic misery, who let u go outside...thats the mystery Lookin like carlton had a thyroid condition, joined the mob & is out to wack his dignity |
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Clowned.
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See stick to this and I have no problems with u tbh...Write more in OM and less in discussion...I was being honest u have talent man but too me that bs u post in the discussion gets old...I myself just want the old netcees back because honestly it was dope as fuck...
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Fuck u. This the same shit i did on the old netcees. U dont like it dont go in the disc forum. An get ur fucking olive branch the fuck out of my piece. Leave sum feed or stfu nerd.
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Wow I'm loving this dope diss, I hope he come with a better comeback.
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Bags pussy hurt lmfao.
Get your olive branch out of my piece. Troll troll troll blah blah Dope piece bags. You got mad talent homie. |
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just not feeling it.
I liked the bars where you at least tried the multis, that was better. none of this was lolz for me, maybe cuz i don't know Def some of it was kinda funny. the end was a good line to me. Some of the wordplay was creative as well, definitely better than alot of the other stuff I read on here, but just not my cup of tea. Do you though player hope you win the battle.
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Yea ill totally win the battle tahts why i posted it in the OM
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I've seen you str8 clown ppl man but tbh this was weak compared to most your other stuff. Still good set up an punches an business the pic was nice but felt some of your punches had a bit of. Stretched flow with the short multiracial rhymes in the set up. Still a solid drop but by the standards I expect from you this was sub par. Keep it up tho man I'm sire this was just a light hearted drop for ya lpl
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Lmfao intro was tough.
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Some funny punchlines in this forreal.
Hard to flow over a beat without rushing lines like a muhfucka. But none the less bags. Nice to see you step away from the talkin shit.. and doing the actual shitting. Stretched lines. But u shit on this dude
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