Bring The Court To Ya...That's The Formula

Mr. J · 10-07-2015, 01:07 AM

I've saved killers & rapists, Im the coke dealers favorite
the dividends I earn from them could fund a NASA spaceship
spending a stack when you were still balancing equations.
my suit navy blue, you in a Navy suit eating crustaceans
my fish fresh, your fish yeuck, I fuck models, you waitresses
I fuck waitresses and let you know after your second serving
my pistol tucked while its smoking, the detectives lurking..
carrying today's cut, here's a body to dispose of, pay up
different day, same stuff, just a man getting his change up
I dont care what you pray for..that collection plate will smash ya face
send it back and pray...you paid, that concludes your act today..
in fact you may shut the door upon your exit, thank you much
you used to be hard in the hood and your grandmother spanked you once
that changed him up, he became a boy scout earning badges
I toast your work, I kick up dust then piss on the ashes..
look at me..the real go getter a toast to hefner why play boyyyy
I make money off of my own killing a real mufuckin tom sawyer
you can call me your dad but I act like Im your moms lawyer..
lololol

CopyPat · 10-07-2015, 08:30 PM

ahahaa fuck man u post soooooooooooooooooo much its retarded! i know ive said this to you before but i wish you would concentrate more on quality than quantity. and this is also why u get next to no feed because theres just so much from u but i mean i get it. you just like writing and there's nothing wrong with that. at this point its coming way too easily to you. i think u need to challenge urself a bit and see what happens. are u still in the league? thats a good spot for u. anyways this piece was funny and i like it. the rhymes were good too. lol. i think as a writer you could do ALOT of things but u write so much and so fast that ur limiting urself. but thts coming from me who takes this 0% seriously either so haha take it for what it is

Mr. J · 10-14-2015, 02:39 PM

thanks brah...this was actually a scrapped AOWL verse props thud

10-07-2015, 01:07 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Bring The Court To Ya...That's The Formula I've saved killers & rapists, Im the coke dealers favorite the dividends I earn from them could fund a NASA spaceship spending a stack when you were still balancing equations. my suit navy blue, you in a Navy suit eating crustaceans my fish fresh, your fish yeuck, I fuck models, you waitresses I fuck waitresses and let you know after your second serving my pistol tucked while its smoking, the detectives lurking.. carrying today's cut, here's a body to dispose of, pay up different day, same stuff, just a man getting his change up I dont care what you pray for..that collection plate will smash ya face send it back and pray...you paid, that concludes your act today.. in fact you may shut the door upon your exit, thank you much you used to be hard in the hood and your grandmother spanked you once that changed him up, he became a boy scout earning badges I toast your work, I kick up dust then piss on the ashes.. look at me..the real go getter a toast to hefner why play boyyyy I make money off of my own killing a real mufuckin tom sawyer you can call me your dad but I act like Im your moms lawyer.. lololol __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-07-2015, 08:30 PM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	ahahaa fuck man u post soooooooooooooooooo much its retarded! i know ive said this to you before but i wish you would concentrate more on quality than quantity. and this is also why u get next to no feed because theres just so much from u but i mean i get it. you just like writing and there's nothing wrong with that. at this point its coming way too easily to you. i think u need to challenge urself a bit and see what happens. are u still in the league? thats a good spot for u. anyways this piece was funny and i like it. the rhymes were good too. lol. i think as a writer you could do ALOT of things but u write so much and so fast that ur limiting urself. but thts coming from me who takes this 0% seriously either so haha take it for what it is __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

10-14-2015, 02:39 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	thanks brah...this was actually a scrapped AOWL verse props thud __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you