YDK 0-2 vs. Work 0-2 - YDK WINS

Sn00p · 09-01-2015, 08:47 AM

The 1-2 Punch League

Week 4

All rules apply: No feeding, biting, swaying. Due on Thursday... NO EXT AT ALL.

REBUTTAL AND REMATCH OPTIONS - Agreement on rebuttal battle + first bars due Wednesday. Check the new rule thread for specifics. If agreement/bars are not in on Wednesday it will be treated as a normal battle.

Preview By Sharp

tbc

@YDK @Work

YDK · 09-01-2015, 10:57 AM

Check

Work · 09-03-2015, 03:22 PM

Here

YDK · 09-03-2015, 10:57 PM

Ain't no bullets flyin ima put you down, and use a closed palm to do it
Cuz the only thing I'm putting in work is a jar of embalming fluid

Work · 09-03-2015, 11:41 PM

I should show your daughter what my penis about
So her blowing on dandelions won't be the only time she has some seed in her mouth

Ghost1 · 09-04-2015, 09:38 AM

Dandelion seeds? ....in ur mouth? From blowing one? Not ever. Lmao dafuq

V ydk

sral · 09-05-2015, 05:01 AM

lmao I can't lie, I like Work's shit

YDK is good too but I'm guessing Work talking them little white shits that fly off the flower head when you blow?

The idea is cool to me. I'm going with Work this week.

Flow · 09-05-2015, 07:55 AM

Vote work more creative more fresh

Greed · 09-06-2015, 12:56 PM

V ydk

This was wierd

Useless · 09-06-2015, 07:18 PM

Putting in work was basic n coulda been worded a lot better. Works bar was harsh af but fundamentally incorrect cuz u don't get the seeds in ur mouth from blowing on a dandelion. Still liked it tho tbh

V. Work

jilti · 09-06-2015, 11:55 PM

V-YDK, better attempt but not really feeling either

Sharp · 09-07-2015, 03:23 PM

3-3

puravida · 09-07-2015, 06:20 PM

FRESHER FLIP

VOTE - work

fraze · 09-07-2015, 09:29 PM

I gotta vote YDK. This battle was on some weird pedophile shit, and unnecessarily because thats not how dandylions work. YDK's bar wasn't bad but could have been set up better. Any funeral parlor tie ins could have taken it up a notch. But still I have a prob with punches that dont make sense.

Vote YDK

Sharp · 09-07-2015, 09:34 PM

Close man. both suffered from wording. I thought the namelfip was just a bit better tho tbh

v/ydk

5-4 ydk

CBA · 09-07-2015, 11:30 PM

Voting for work, YDK's name flip was alright but for the build up it seemed like it could've been bigger. Work's was concise and to the point, while there was some element of it not making sense, I think it's forgivable.

El Muffin · 09-08-2015, 08:50 AM

v/ydk
ur punch was okayyy. not good not bad
work,

dude ydk daughter like 3 years old yo. u didn't know but erm...he posts many pics of his daughter

get this pedo the fk outta hea

lol im jk but still

v/ydk

Sn00p · 09-08-2015, 09:00 AM

ydk was decent. wording should've been better. things like using "put" two times in a bar throw me off when it's just one bar u have to write. and it didn't rly use the np to its full effect, becuz i kinda felt the punchline was more focused on the "only thing i put into u is embalming fluid" misdirection thing. but it was a decent bar.

work had similar problems. i have never gotten the seeds of a dandelion in my mouth, & not even as a kid. also, u could've used the blowing part for the wordplay as well, so it'd be a double tie-in. if u had done that, i would've voted for u 100%. as is, ur bar felt a bit lacking. pretty harsh tho, but i don't think that was enough here.

so yea, this was close as fuck. both had some wording issues, but in the end, i think ydk used his concept a bit better. props to both tho, this is one of the closest 1-2's i've ever seen.

v/ydk

SuckaFreeCashier · 09-08-2015, 09:20 AM

v/ YDK

I thought he got a lot more out of his setup and the punch was more creative / hit harder than works.

09-01-2015, 08:47 AM	#1
Sn00p General German Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,988 Battle Record: 26-12 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Line4Line Cypher Tourney - Back2Basics - Fight Night XLVI Rep Power: 15213753	YDK 0-2 vs. Work 0-2 - YDK WINS The 1-2 Punch League Week 4 All rules apply: No feeding, biting, swaying. Due on Thursday... NO EXT AT ALL. REBUTTAL AND REMATCH OPTIONS - Agreement on rebuttal battle + first bars due Wednesday. Check the new rule thread for specifics. If agreement/bars are not in on Wednesday it will be treated as a normal battle. Preview By Sharp tbc @YDK @Work

09-01-2015, 10:57 AM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Check __________________

09-03-2015, 10:57 PM	#4
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	Ain't no bullets flyin ima put you down, and use a closed palm to do it Cuz the only thing I'm putting in work is a jar of embalming fluid __________________

09-03-2015, 11:41 PM	#5
Work Top Goon Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 8 Rep Power: 0	I should show your daughter what my penis about So her blowing on dandelions won't be the only time she has some seed in her mouth Last edited by Work; 09-04-2015 at 02:41 AM.

09-05-2015, 05:01 AM	#7
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	lmao I can't lie, I like Work's shit YDK is good too but I'm guessing Work talking them little white shits that fly off the flower head when you blow? The idea is cool to me. I'm going with Work this week. __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

09-03-2015, 03:22 PM	#3
Work Top Goon Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 8 Rep Power: 0	Here

09-05-2015, 07:55 AM	#8
Flow Upset Champion Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: West Mids Posts: 3,861 Battle Record: 57-49 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Rookie Tourney - 1-2 Punch League (x2) - Pandemonium Cypher - 1-2 Punch league Season 9 Rep Power: 24894581	Vote work more creative more fresh

09-06-2015, 12:56 PM	#9
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	V ydk This was wierd

09-06-2015, 07:18 PM	#10
Useless 100% Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 1,803 Battle Record: 9-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 0	Putting in work was basic n coulda been worded a lot better. Works bar was harsh af but fundamentally incorrect cuz u don't get the seeds in ur mouth from blowing on a dandelion. Still liked it tho tbh V. Work

09-06-2015, 11:55 PM	#11
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816228	V-YDK, better attempt but not really feeling either

09-07-2015, 03:23 PM	#12
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	3-3

09-07-2015, 06:20 PM	#13
puravida sloth kong Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: The Central Valley Posts: 685 Battle Record: 2-5 Rep Power: 11732142	FRESHER FLIP VOTE - work

09-07-2015, 09:29 PM	#14
fraze Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Louisville, KY Posts: 972 Battle Record: 14-24 Rep Power: 32898726	I gotta vote YDK. This battle was on some weird pedophile shit, and unnecessarily because thats not how dandylions work. YDK's bar wasn't bad but could have been set up better. Any funeral parlor tie ins could have taken it up a notch. But still I have a prob with punches that dont make sense. Vote YDK

09-07-2015, 09:34 PM	#15
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	Close man. both suffered from wording. I thought the namelfip was just a bit better tho tbh v/ydk 5-4 ydk

09-07-2015, 11:30 PM	#16
CBA Member Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 2680674	Voting for work, YDK's name flip was alright but for the build up it seemed like it could've been bigger. Work's was concise and to the point, while there was some element of it not making sense, I think it's forgivable.

09-08-2015, 08:50 AM	#17
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	v/ydk ur punch was okayyy. not good not bad work, dude ydk daughter like 3 years old yo. u didn't know but erm...he posts many pics of his daughter get this pedo the fk outta hea lol im jk but still v/ydk __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

09-08-2015, 09:00 AM	#18
Sn00p General German Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,988 Battle Record: 26-12 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Line4Line Cypher Tourney - Back2Basics - Fight Night XLVI Rep Power: 15213753	ydk was decent. wording should've been better. things like using "put" two times in a bar throw me off when it's just one bar u have to write. and it didn't rly use the np to its full effect, becuz i kinda felt the punchline was more focused on the "only thing i put into u is embalming fluid" misdirection thing. but it was a decent bar. work had similar problems. i have never gotten the seeds of a dandelion in my mouth, & not even as a kid. also, u could've used the blowing part for the wordplay as well, so it'd be a double tie-in. if u had done that, i would've voted for u 100%. as is, ur bar felt a bit lacking. pretty harsh tho, but i don't think that was enough here. so yea, this was close as fuck. both had some wording issues, but in the end, i think ydk used his concept a bit better. props to both tho, this is one of the closest 1-2's i've ever seen. v/ydk

09-08-2015, 09:20 AM	#19
SuckaFreeCashier Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2015 Location: St Louis Posts: 102 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 185208	v/ YDK I thought he got a lot more out of his setup and the punch was more creative / hit harder than works.