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http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=119154 @Dr Dog I can't remember if I did that one, but I do remember doing sonnets. Interesting though. |
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do female votes even count?
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I fucked up this week. Won't say how, but it's minor. Yet so important. Not sure how that happened
Side note, haikus suck |
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look assholes
haikus don't have to be 5,7,5 they can be a lot of things so do t fucking vote against someone because the syllables aren't 5,7,5 those votes shouldn't count |
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my favorite haiku of all time is 7,6,5
her hair is winter fire January embers my heart burns there, too |
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This is true tbh.
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But as of now; due to this I can see why it would be off-putting and a huge minus to someone when it goes beyond the 17 syllables to the degree it's worth to point out and maybe even rule out as a complete haiku.
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Nevermind, I was wrong. Found a better source that goes in depth on Haiku's: http://www.hsa-haiku.org/archives/HS...ions_2004.html
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It seems like it's more important that the Haiku is atmospheric and in style that makes it different to other forms of poetry. It's just that the 5,7,5 thing is the most common adaptation of Japanese Haiku. Today I learned. ^^ @Gina should read this as well (imo) and maybe reconsider deleting her vote and start over unless she can counter these sources. Ultimately it's up to the mods of this league tho' but Destro got a strong point about voting. I didn't mean to single you out or anything but I noticed your vote and Destro got a solid point.
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I'd send you for ex: Vulgar 7 wins 5 losses EZ Concerning haiku length/syllable count, you guys all right. There are a lot of variations to haikus. I'd definitely say, let it go, and we'll move onto bigger and better things in this league. Singled out poem-styles is a little on the close-minded side. I want to keep things free, open, and fresh. |
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Unless I fucked up and you meant in terms of voting.
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I voted on four battles...but my battle was closed before I could post the links so just wanted to make sure the mods realized this...thanks
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hush has no power here, Gina
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Lol. Someone said something to me, I guess that's the only name I remembered.
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I am.
As soon as I find the time bro.
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Cool ill post during the day gotta run some errands
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I need one more competitor to face Razah in the AOWL, if one of you fine creative types would like an additional challenge this week :)
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haikus by jews, land of the green, lieutenant dan swagger champ, robin william's gooch, scuba steve's noon reprieve |
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