Destroyer 1-0 Vs Neighbor 1-0 - NEIGHBOR WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 21th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Destroyer @Neighbor

[Destroyer]

in for 10 gun bars

[Neighbor]

In to share a den/Sheridan

G'luck

[Neighbor]

This geezer wanna talk gun bars.. I'm immortalized in that shit
I'll Russian leg sweep this fuckin net geek just to put a .45 on his hip
& I know you're a sneaker fiend, so let's visit facts;
I give a fuck what this head's Retrograde's at when my kicks have his neck twistin back
Congrats on the robbery.. don't even act like you pushed Orc around
You dodged a TJ Combo, but my Killer Instinct'll show you what Fulgore's about
Everything you pen's irrelevant nonsense; ya never gettin the nod
So after I break Descartes soul out his body for ever questioning God
& Karp said you Sheraton, but I find Comfort Inn puttin a slug in you
My blade hold 'em Hyatt the Hilton leave Palms soaked 'til I'm bookin The W

[Destroyer]

you're good...

I read that weak prose, sorry to say ur hits don't do shit...
I haven't seen such a 'dry wall,' since the last time u put ur fist through it
set ur bitch on fire after she wouldn't give me head right
so when I leave her charred on neigh, it won't be a bottle of red wine
des got shells w/ ur name on em, believe that shit cuz I will blast
if u got clips lined up in the drawer, it's to keep ur chips from going stale fast
& ur girl worships my dick bro, it's in every daydream
it's Harden, Duncan... it's like it's an all-NBA team
on the real, I like u, but fuck it, let's set this battle off...
I got Knight riders, so I guess it makes sense that I would hassle HOF

[8===D~~~~(}:]

This geezer wanna talk gun bars.. I'm immortalized in that shit
I'll Russian leg sweep this fuckin net geek just to put a .45 on his hip
ehh, decent
& I know you're a sneaker fiend, so let's visit facts;
I give a fuck what this head's Retrograde's at when my kicks have his neck twistin back
cool flip here
Congrats on the robbery.. don't even act like you pushed Orc around
You dodged a TJ Combo, but my Killer Instinct'll show you what Fulgore's about
shit i liked this, good stuff
Everything you pen's irrelevant nonsense; ya never gettin the nod
So after I break Descartes soul out his body for ever questioning God
reaching a bit, overall decent tho
& Karp said you Sheraton, but I find Comfort Inn puttin a slug in you
My blade hold 'em Hyatt the Hilton leave Palms soaked 'til I'm bookin The W
damn, impressive how you managed to squeeze all that in and still have it worded good. The bar itself pretty good

vs


I read that weak prose, sorry to say ur hits don't do shit...
I haven't seen such a 'dry wall,' since the last time u put ur fist through it
pretty good here
set ur bitch on fire after she wouldn't give me head right
so when I leave her charred on neigh, it won't be a bottle of red wine
lol ok cool one
des got shells w/ ur name on em, believe that shit cuz I will blast
if u got clips lined up in the drawer, it's to keep ur chips from going stale fast
decent here
& ur girl worships my dick bro, it's in every daydream
it's Harden, Duncan... it's like it's an all-NBA team
a bit forced here
on the real, I like u, but fuck it, let's set this battle off...
I got Knight riders, so I guess it makes sense that I would hassle HOF
reaching here, not really feelin this one


This was a pretty good battle, you both came really good, and this was close as hell because of it.

Neighbor:
- Pretty solid verse, very consistent and some fresh concepts.
- edging 4 quotables when added up

Destroyer:
- You came really good your first 3 bars, then kind of rushed to finish I feel with the last two. If only you would have remained consistent you could have taken this easily.
- 3 quotables when added up


Again, great battle...

Vote: Neighbor

[Sharp]

This geezer wanna talk gun bars.. I'm immortalized in that shit
I'll Russian leg sweep this fuckin net geek just to put a .45 on his hip
not a big hit
& I know you're a sneaker fiend, so let's visit facts;
I give a fuck what this head's Retrograde's at when my kicks have his neck twistin back
ok
Congrats on the robbery.. don't even act like you pushed Orc around
You dodged a TJ Combo, but my Killer Instinct'll show you what Fulgore's about
solid
Everything you pen's irrelevant nonsense; ya never gettin the nod
So after I break Descartes soul out his body for ever questioning God
Don't wanna shit in your cereal but it's pronounced 'day-kart'
& Karp said you Sheraton, but I find Comfort Inn puttin a slug in you
My blade hold 'em Hyatt the Hilton leave Palms soaked 'til I'm bookin The W
fuck




I read that weak prose, sorry to say ur hits don't do shit...
I haven't seen such a 'dry wall,' since the last time u put ur fist through it
cool idea with an old reference. Flip is eh tho
set ur bitch on fire after she wouldn't give me head right
so when I leave her charred on neigh, it won't be a bottle of red wine
stretching here
des got shells w/ ur name on em, believe that shit cuz I will blast
if u got clips lined up in the drawer, it's to keep ur chips from going stale fast
[B]probably played but I like it[ /B]
& ur girl worships my dick bro, it's in every daydream
it's Harden, Duncan... it's like it's an all-NBA team
hard and dunking? That's a stretch
on the real, I like u, but fuck it, let's set this battle off...
I got Knight riders, so I guess it makes sense that I would hassle HOF
Knight Rider is Def done. Also seen hassle hof


Nothing major from neigh cept for the closer imo. But a solid verse. Des wordplay got mad stretched, like chardonnay and harden Duncan I only really see working as like a grind time slow it down bar where they go back and stick words that sound similar in a second time. Clips was funny tho


V/neighbor

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Neighbor

This geezer wanna talk gun bars.. I'm immortalized in that shit
I'll Russian leg sweep this fuckin net geek just to put a .45 on his hip
cool concept but I don't think you set up 45 well enough to make this work
& I know you're a sneaker fiend, so let's visit facts;
I give a fuck what this head's Retrograde's at when my kicks have his neck twistin back
cool geometry punchline
Congrats on the robbery.. don't even act like you pushed Orc around
You dodged a TJ Combo, but my Killer Instinct'll show you what Fulgore's about
cool but doesn't hit hard to me
Everything you pen's irrelevant nonsense; ya never gettin the nod
So after I break Descartes soul out his body for ever questioning God
this is stretched. I'll pass
& Karp said you Sheraton, but I find Comfort Inn puttin a slug in you
My blade hold 'em Hyatt the Hilton leave Palms soaked 'til I'm bookin The W
dope closer. LotB

Originally Posted by Destroyer

you're good...

I read that weak prose, sorry to say ur hits don't do shit...
I haven't seen such a 'dry wall,' since the last time u put ur fist through it
didn't set this up well and the punch is light
set ur bitch on fire after she wouldn't give me head right
so when I leave her charred on neigh, it won't be a bottle of red wine
I like this concept but you could have made it hit harder with different wording
des got shells w/ ur name on em, believe that shit cuz I will blast
if u got clips lined up in the drawer, it's to keep ur chips from going stale fast
dope. Haven't seen this before
& ur girl worships my dick bro, it's in every daydream
it's Harden, Duncan... it's like it's an all-NBA team
miss. This was actually kinda bad
on the real, I like u, but fuck it, let's set this battle off...
I got Knight riders, so I guess it makes sense that I would hassle HOF
not feeling it

Good battle guys. Both came with solid verses but Des lost some steam by the end of his. Neighbor had a more consistent verse and killed it with his closer. props to both but

vote neighbor

[El Muffin]

Originally Posted by Neighbor

This geezer wanna talk gun bars.. I'm immortalized in that shit
I'll Russian leg sweep this fuckin net geek just to put a .45 on his hip
& I know you're a sneaker fiend, so let's visit facts;
I give a fuck what this head's Retrograde's at when my kicks have his neck twistin back
Congrats on the robbery.. don't even act like you pushed Orc around
You dodged a TJ Combo, but my Killer Instinct'll show you what Fulgore's about
Everything you pen's irrelevant nonsense; ya never gettin the nod
So after I break Descartes soul out his body for ever questioning God
& Karp said you Sheraton, but I find Comfort Inn puttin a slug in you
My blade hold 'em Hyatt the Hilton leave Palms soaked 'til I'm bookin The W

opener ok
retrograde sluck but ok
fulgore dope
descares..descatehhhwat
OK URL NIGGA IMA FK U UP THIS WAS dope



Des

Didn't like open
chardonnay was dope fuck that younge pronoun
Chips nice sales in dope flow so played but ok cuz flow n swagger u tryin to be like lil muffin the greatest rapper
hardens DUNCAN forced with the timing execution.
Close sucks


V/neigh


.
des was oeh ok neigh was good to dooe

[Cred]

45 hip, booking the w was dope

vs

Chardonnay was iight, stale chips

Close battle expected more from both tho tbh. 45 was solid n closer was nasty. Doesbarely got me Chardonnay bcuz it was a bit of a force n stale chips was dope. Close battle but neigh edges this one

V neighbor

[murda sho]

Destroyer

set ur bitch on fire after she wouldn't give me head right
so when I leave her charred on neigh, it won't be a bottle of red wine
des got shells w/ ur name on em, believe that shit cuz I will blast
if u got clips lined up in the drawer, it's to keep ur chips from going stale fast


Neighbor

Congrats on the robbery.. don't even act like you pushed Orc around
You dodged a TJ Combo, but my Killer Instinct'll show you what Fulgore's about

& Karp said you Sheraton, but I find Comfort Inn puttin a slug in you
My blade hold 'em Hyatt the Hilton leave Palms soaked 'til I'm bookin The W


aright battle... that chard on neigh line was fuckin mean... but neigh combatted it with the hotels line... then the Killer instinct line was better than the clips line both were good though.. so i gotta vote Neigh

[Plot]

Chardonnay is white

[iSpaz]

This geezer wanna talk gun bars.. I'm immortalized in that shit
I'll Russian leg sweep this fuckin net geek just to put a .45 on his hip
// ok
& I know you're a sneaker fiend, so let's visit facts;
I give a fuck what this head's Retrograde's at when my kicks have his neck twistin back
\\ not bad
Congrats on the robbery.. don't even act like you pushed Orc around
You dodged a TJ Combo, but my Killer Instinct'll show you what Fulgore's about
// fuego
Everything you pen's irrelevant nonsense; ya never gettin the nod
So after I break Descartes soul out his body for ever questioning God
\\ cool
& Karp said you Sheraton, but I find Comfort Inn puttin a slug in you
My blade hold 'em Hyatt the Hilton leave Palms soaked 'til I'm bookin The W
damn, impressive how you managed to squeeze all that in and still have it
\\ aight, would be nicer live

vs


I read that weak prose, sorry to say ur hits don't do shit...
I haven't seen such a 'dry wall,' since the last time u put ur fist through it
\\ cool
set ur bitch on fire after she wouldn't give me head right
so when I leave her charred on neigh, it won't be a bottle of red wine
\\ ok not bad, white wine doh
des got shells w/ ur name on em, believe that shit cuz I will blast
if u got clips lined up in the drawer, it's to keep ur chips from going stale fast
// this was was funny
& ur girl worships my dick bro, it's in every daydream
it's Harden, Duncan... it's like it's an all-NBA team
\\ ehh
on the real, I like u, but fuck it, let's set this battle off...
I got Knight riders, so I guess it makes sense that I would hassle HOF
\\ not feelin it mang



real close battle here. both had some shots fired. i think des sort of fell flat towards the ending. gonna have to v/neighbor