I come in peace..

Clayray · 12-23-2014, 02:20 AM

..judge me not by the company I keep, I can be seen with thugs and geeks maybe to reach out - hug the weak, it's something sweet. But enough of me. I don't judge others by their past, neither should you. We've all made mistake so didn't you learn from them too? It's nothing new, your walking down the halls when the bully comes along.. You slip by him but he gets the kid beside ya and you could tell the teacher but you don't - silent. So tell me, who commited the bigger crime then? Youth yearn for the intangible "street cred" snitch an be dead, but what if it could save a life.. Think fucking twice. Or for once. Everyone's standing in line to drink the same punch - it's not enough. Why do need this, why do we need that. Red and black Jordan's "with the hat to match". Notorious icons of our time will be a silouette in hang time a bird in a box and the latest gang signs it's a shame I'm - speaking for the silent with closed eyelids who can see the master plan behind it, be open minded.

Mitch · 12-23-2014, 11:00 AM

this is real. you are a good guy with a good head. i like your laid back writing style alot.
i also liked every line. my favorite part was "think fucking twice, or for once." so real and clever.
what i like the most is that you're actually saying something, and not just anything, this is wise.

Clayray · 12-23-2014, 11:20 AM

Thank you, Mitch. I appreciate your comment & will return the favor on any recent work of yours! Peace be with you.

12-23-2014, 02:20 AM	#1
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	I come in peace.. ..judge me not by the company I keep, I can be seen with thugs and geeks maybe to reach out - hug the weak, it's something sweet. But enough of me. I don't judge others by their past, neither should you. We've all made mistake so didn't you learn from them too? It's nothing new, your walking down the halls when the bully comes along.. You slip by him but he gets the kid beside ya and you could tell the teacher but you don't - silent. So tell me, who commited the bigger crime then? Youth yearn for the intangible "street cred" snitch an be dead, but what if it could save a life.. Think fucking twice. Or for once. Everyone's standing in line to drink the same punch - it's not enough. Why do need this, why do we need that. Red and black Jordan's "with the hat to match". Notorious icons of our time will be a silouette in hang time a bird in a box and the latest gang signs it's a shame I'm - speaking for the silent with closed eyelids who can see the master plan behind it, be open minded.

12-23-2014, 11:00 AM	#2
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208351	this is real. you are a good guy with a good head. i like your laid back writing style alot. i also liked every line. my favorite part was "think fucking twice, or for once." so real and clever. what i like the most is that you're actually saying something, and not just anything, this is wise. __________________ Soundcloud.com/TheDirtySerpent

12-23-2014, 11:20 AM	#3
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	Thank you, Mitch. I appreciate your comment & will return the favor on any recent work of yours! Peace be with you.