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[dull boy]

Honestly, I'm tired of this ***ophony of liars. It's dawned on me we're mired in this constant string of briars.
Everyone scratching and clawing at the mask they evolve in. Happiness lost when being sad is a problem
we're too brash to absolve. It's ego and worry that keeps people so surly. We go from steeples to needles to keep you from hurting.
We're all diseased, but the surface we keep clean, like we're perfect. Through my reading and learning I've made peace. Now I'm searching
for hands to hold. For more than what's formed in romance we know. Enchanted? No. More like candid growth
with another 'damaged' soul. Together we dance alone down these rambling road. This hammock bolts
between these trees near our family's home. In the breeze we swing 'til our panic goes and we land YOU HOE.
Misery loves company. Roaming dating sites for those complacent eyes. A lonely anguished type to poke and play with. Hi.
I'm a loner. Hate my life and mostly wait to die, but chose to stay alive 'cause maybe I could make a joke that makes you smile.
We're all tortured, right? Borderline misfits forced to find intent. Mortified we aren't normal. I'm different. Glorify misfortune. Bored and dry witted.

[Pent uP]

Dope

[Zen]

I'm glad you're writing more often now. This wasn't as good as some of your other verses, but it's honest which is more than 90% of this site can say. Cool beans.

[dead man]

im glad you're writing more now too. doesnt matter if its the best thing you've ever done. everything and everybody is a work in progress. i think you know that its not necessarily about "inspiration", its repetition and practice and habit formation.

hoping your habit becomes a craving again.

take care

[Bodey]

I wish you weren't so down. I thought this was a great piece. Wish I could put my inner turmoil into words half as good as you lay it down.

Good shit

[Wise Wiggles]

fuck yeah

[dull boy]

:)

[PancakeBrah]

I've been listening to this Hozier song "Take Me to Church". It's very good. Apparently it's about homosexuality and our current society or something. I thought it was just a cool love song. Dirge like. Like a white person Anthony Hamilton song. Why's everything so shit nowadays.

"I'm a loner. Hate my life and mostly wait to die, but chose to stay alive 'cause maybe I could make a joke that makes you smile."

My favorite line.

I liked that you quoted damaged. Or half quoted. Whatever those are called. I get mad at a lot of what you write because you say what I'd like to say, but with such a level of skill and rhyming that it kind of defeats the purpose. This was really good, in my opinion. Thanks for the read.

[dull boy]

Noah Calhoun with the lonely scowl. Crude to the only gal who knows about his broken down mood.
Lowered brow. Brood about his mistakes. Built a house on the lake for the love of his life who's another man's wife.
I can't solve this mess. I'm always stressed. I've compromised myself and apologized well, but all its gained me is lost respect.
Parenting children who bare no resemblance. I tear in a million pieces in attempts to care. That's weakness.
Blown my cover. Think she noticed. I'm not supposed to suffer. Knights in shining armor can't mourn. They stay alone for others.

[Wise Wiggles]

mother fuck yeah

[Coup]

It's ego and worry that keeps people so surly. We go from steeples to needles to keep you from hurting.


and

Misery loves company. Roaming dating sites for those complacent eyes. A lonely anguished type to poke and play with. Hi.