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my bad for not showing the other week.
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@kannon the verse was loosley based on the movie. And the wife didn't know who she was she was just that jealous of another woman.
For some reason I thought this was like last week and the limit was 16, I went 18, but cut a lot to make it short. Probably was unclear looking back on it. |
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@kannin thanks for ur vote none the less.....
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but my point stands. if the guy knew that his sister was the one who was just murdered (and he had to know about it at some point if he wrote it down), what changed that made him okay with it one night, and so not okay with it the next day that he killed his wife? Either way, I hope you both take my vote as critique and not hate. I look for ways to grow through the feedback I receive, and I hope you guys do too.
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He just blacks out in the movie and does crazy stuff. Idk I thought it went.
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He "blacks out"?
That's racist. |
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Did u died??? I'm good, trying to see if I can train my mind to develop superpowers.
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I wish I could have superpowers. Which power are you trying to develop? |
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I'm not sure...telekinesis, perhaps.
I'm glad you're not died anymore.
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Telekinesis would be rad. Now the real question, would you be a villain or a hero?
Personally I think I'd just like to be able to heal myself like wolverine just so I could win bets with that shit. Like, bet you won't shoot me in the face bitch!! Well, that's a bad example, but you get the point. And the point is you wouldn't die. But I might have that ability already since I just died and now I'm not anymore. |
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I would be neither, I just want to masturbate with no hands.
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Genius.
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oh shit. I had no idea.
That does explain why all the verses were so short last week though.
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The way I see it, if you propose a million dollar bet that your friend wouldn't shoot you in the face, there are two possible outcomes. 1) He says, "You're right. I won't shoot you in the face. That's a ridiculous bet and I will not make it." 2) He shoots you in the face, you use your powers to heal yourself, say "HAHA, GOTCHA BITCH, IM STILL ALIVE!" and your friend says "HOLY FUCK. WHAT DID YOU-... HOW DID YOU-... BUT I JUST-... Oh, you owe me a million dollars."
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Ha.
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