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Old 11-14-2014, 02:47 PM   #1
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Default Monstrous verse by K-Rino

He kills this track. Underrated track.




K-RINO - Beauty of Death verse

HAHA When man is no more do we soar through the galaxies and explore em?
Do the spirits congregate at a post mortem ghost forum?
Or do they sit among the angels and oracles?
And cordially compare stories on how they crossed through the module to immortal portals
See some believe your essence interspaced it,
its (reinstrued?) and placed in
Another vessel - this is reincarnation
While some seek an ethereal destination.

Others state that moral deviation downgrades you to one of Satan’s patrons
Once you’ve entered that eternal calming, your final evening, night and morning
All internal organs are gone from the embalming
Whether ascending or plummeting - your last breath is all that life is promising
Séances conducted for spirit summoning

When you stand over the coffin with a clear view
And speak into the ear of the dead man near you,
do you feel that he can hear you? Or are you just speaking to a shell?
Most of us dwell within the realm of speculation merely peaking through the veil

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Old 11-14-2014, 03:14 PM   #2
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Inferial? --- pretty sure he says "ethereal"

This is not really my type of song but I definitely admire the lyricism and thought process etc.
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Old 11-14-2014, 10:23 PM   #3
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True, he does say ethereal. Good look.
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Old 11-14-2014, 10:31 PM   #4
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Can someone please mix this track properly? That's a very strong verse, though.
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Old 11-15-2014, 08:44 PM   #5
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Old 11-16-2014, 09:16 AM   #6
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it's ok...comes across as a watered down Twisted Insane wannabe but each to they own I suppose.

Lyrics are slick.
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