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Old 10-08-2014, 09:55 PM   #1
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Default Poem: The Meadows

The vigorous essences it leaves
As the aroma infiltrates my senses
Forcefully closing my eyes...
My heart lifts, my soul grips it's essence
The birds chirp, the flowers bloom
A wave of warmth rushing towards me
It encapsulates my emotions
My mind informs me "you're free."
The clouds disperse for the shining sun
My life's begun..

I taste my first feeling of life.
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Old 10-10-2014, 01:34 PM   #2
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