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Old 09-26-2014, 04:38 PM   #1
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I use to use these beats loosely,
Flowing fluidly off rhythm,
record it smoothly and hate it profusely.
I scoff, venom
Spitting poison into the microphone ruining tracks, mock; then I'm,
Back to the task of filling my flask with soco or Jack or whatever I have.
snort a couple pain killers to better my back,
But I'm still uncomfortable so I sit up an laugh.
Only an addict would use that excuse,
My backs fuckin killing me but still I refuse
To see a doctor bout the shit cuz I know he'd deduce
That the only reason it hurts is cuz I'm usually juiced!
My nerve receptors are trashed cuz their normally used
With a cocktail of percs chased with mountain dew and some booze.
So I get blitzed and write to an instrumental on YouTube
Debate over recording it and getting a few views
Change the filter on my camera distorting the hues
So you don't notice the residue in my nose from the pills I've abused.

*sniff* hold up I'ma drop some water in my nostril
Get the drip going again its almost impossible.
Keeping a steady high seemed pretty plausible
But the come downs always the worst, its only logical.

*sniff* OK I'm good now, so back to the verse
Running late again I forgot about work
Gotta get more gotta feed my addiction
Snorting lines off the counter getting high in the kitchen
Call me wat ya want I enjoy all the prescriptions
So all it boils down to is loving my afflictions.
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Old 09-26-2014, 07:16 PM   #2
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Daaaamn....this was straight realness...
Like.how.u talked about why u dont record...cuz ive wondered about why with some people on here...

Painted a clear picture the whole time an kept it creative with the content...

This shits raw....respect this drop!

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Old 09-29-2014, 05:43 PM   #3
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thanks man, i was actually debating on making this longer an recordin it some time
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*sniff* OK I'm good now, so back to the verse
Running late again I forgot about work
Gotta get more gotta feed my addiction
Snorting lines off the counter getting high in the kitchen
Call me wat ya want I enjoy all the prescriptions
So all it boils down to is loving my afflictions.[/QUOTE]

Bro I feel this. I fucks with the way this flows. Bet it would sound nice recorded. Also I liked the kind of light tone here some people are too serious here for my tastes. Everybody does drug songs and some people might say they are played out themes and in nature formulaic but I like em because addiction is something I think about all the time.

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Old 09-30-2014, 09:39 PM   #5
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Word same here man lol wrote this while snorting percs actually
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Old 10-02-2014, 10:43 AM   #6
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Not particularly my cup of tea...However, I did appreciate the entertainment value to this. Fun, light hearted, and well written.

Very good.
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