Beans vs. Windu Tuako [Beans Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 09-24-2014, 10:10 PM

Rebuttal Option (both competitors must agree to it at time of check in)

Due Monday 12am PST

Kill Spree · 09-25-2014, 07:29 AM

Check

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Kill Spree · 09-29-2014, 10:00 AM

My bad I thought this was due midnight tonight il drop something anyways

I'll stunt ya win column for releasing boring drops
Shots put du on the ground & I ain't talkin morning frost

Window Taco · 09-30-2014, 12:58 AM

Jesus Christ will return before this bum'll eat from a cashed check!/
Only time beans mean't money was in economies of the aztecs!!!/

El Muffin · 09-30-2014, 01:18 AM

v/ windu

Beans execution was clean

The punch was very simplistic..ive seen similar wp/nps before

Windu

Haha that was fresh. Notuing special just a abv avg np on the name "Beans"

I liked it.

It reminded me of apocalypto

V wind

Packed Graves · 09-30-2014, 06:33 AM

I personally liked the Du reference, but something was missing to bring the harsh aspect.
Win had pretty smooth bar with a creative nameplay/concept.

Vote Windu

theMuzzl3 · 09-30-2014, 06:37 AM

Beans lines were okay. 1st line was better than the 2nd.

Windu's lines were very direct and clean.

/v Windu

BROKE LESNAR · 09-30-2014, 06:54 AM

Have to go with Beans. I like how compact it was and it came across pretty nice. Windu's was fine too, pretty creative, but Beans was more aggressive and direct while Windu's was humorous.

v-Beans

Blanco Bishop · 09-30-2014, 08:59 AM

I liked wins bar but the end of the punch flowed awkwardly to me.
I thought beans was pretty dope imo. Flowed well, good wp n had pretty gully bar.

V beans

Tic · 09-30-2014, 10:50 AM

I'm going with Beans here. I think he edged this slightly although I'm not a huge fan of "and I ain't talkin" bars. Windu came alright but his flow seemed off to me. A cool bar, but I think Beans still edges this.

Beans.

murda sho · 09-30-2014, 03:16 PM

I think Beans got this, both same level punches but Beans had a lil more sting to it and it flowed better

v/ Beans

Tic · 09-30-2014, 06:55 PM

I'm voting again for Beans cuz Windu is a bitch.

This funk you're in? Stop it, get over
Or I'll fuckin put Du on the ground like dropping a soda.

Blanco Bishop · 09-30-2014, 08:52 PM

Lol

Window Taco · 09-30-2014, 09:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tic Tac

I'm voting again for Beans cuz Windu is a bitch.

This funk you're in? Stop it, get over
Or I'll fuckin put Du on the ground like dropping a soda.

Got ya lil bloody panties in a bunch huh? Don't worry. Girls like u go through changes like that. You're a woman now. So hop off the dick, it could lead to pregnancy now bitch.

Certain · 09-30-2014, 11:27 PM

Windu Tuako: This concept was simple but effective. But the setup was terrible and the punch's impact came early.

Beans: I liked this across the board. The wording was clean in the punch, though the setup could've been better.

Vote: Beans

Wordz AhGod · 09-30-2014, 11:44 PM

windu had an ok concept.. the execution was worded poorly as if he had to shape the shit just to make it rhyme, its hardly proper. Beans had a cool flip on an older concept but his flowed better and made more sense when you read it due to the wording.

v/Beans.

09-24-2014, 10:10 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Beans vs. Windu Tuako [Beans Wins] Rebuttal Option (both competitors must agree to it at time of check in) Due Monday 12am PST

09-25-2014, 07:29 AM	#2
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Check No rebuttal Last edited by Kill Spree; 09-25-2014 at 07:42 AM.

09-30-2014, 01:18 AM	#5
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	v/ windu Beans execution was clean The punch was very simplistic..ive seen similar wp/nps before Windu Haha that was fresh. Notuing special just a abv avg np on the name "Beans" I liked it. It reminded me of apocalypto V wind __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

09-30-2014, 06:33 AM	#6
Packed Graves Name Flips Are Clever Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 9-10 Champed - Alias Tourney '14 Rep Power: 777847	I personally liked the Du reference, but something was missing to bring the harsh aspect. Win had pretty smooth bar with a creative nameplay/concept. Vote Windu __________________ back

09-30-2014, 03:16 PM	#11
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758482	I think Beans got this, both same level punches but Beans had a lil more sting to it and it flowed better v/ Beans __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

09-29-2014, 10:00 AM	#3
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	My bad I thought this was due midnight tonight il drop something anyways I'll stunt ya win column for releasing boring drops Shots put du on the ground & I ain't talkin morning frost

09-30-2014, 12:58 AM	#4
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888974	Jesus Christ will return before this bum'll eat from a cashed check!/ Only time beans mean't money was in economies of the aztecs!!!/

09-30-2014, 06:54 AM	#8
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	Have to go with Beans. I like how compact it was and it came across pretty nice. Windu's was fine too, pretty creative, but Beans was more aggressive and direct while Windu's was humorous. v-Beans

09-30-2014, 08:59 AM	#9
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	I liked wins bar but the end of the punch flowed awkwardly to me. I thought beans was pretty dope imo. Flowed well, good wp n had pretty gully bar. V beans

09-30-2014, 10:50 AM	#10
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	I'm going with Beans here. I think he edged this slightly although I'm not a huge fan of "and I ain't talkin" bars. Windu came alright but his flow seemed off to me. A cool bar, but I think Beans still edges this. Beans.

09-30-2014, 06:55 PM	#12
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137909	I'm voting again for Beans cuz Windu is a bitch. This funk you're in? Stop it, get over Or I'll fuckin put Du on the ground like dropping a soda.

09-30-2014, 08:52 PM	#13
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Lol

09-30-2014, 11:27 PM	#15
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Windu Tuako: This concept was simple but effective. But the setup was terrible and the punch's impact came early. Beans: I liked this across the board. The wording was clean in the punch, though the setup could've been better. Vote: Beans

09-30-2014, 11:44 PM	#16
Wordz AhGod カミノコトバ Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 203 Battle Record: 2-0 Rep Power: 0	windu had an ok concept.. the execution was worded poorly as if he had to shape the shit just to make it rhyme, its hardly proper. Beans had a cool flip on an older concept but his flowed better and made more sense when you read it due to the wording. v/Beans.