Relentless

The youngest boss. · 05-19-2014, 09:40 PM

I'm a motherfucking zombie bashing brains in. Dahmer's back, the monster that created your horror fascination. Scarred and lacerated, get your carcass dragged and sawed in half. This is germ-infesting cross-contamination, bring in the body bags and rape kits. Cocky and abrasive. Rotten raps, I'm Satan with a raw imagination and thoughts of Patrick Bateman committing awful acts of hatred. Johnny swag, I'm Blazing. No. Johnny swag, I'm Caged in. Caught and trapped, contained. I'm lost and can't escape this haunting transformation. Sharpened axes make sure your arms are amputated, a doctor botching handsome faces. Heartless savage pacing, I've gone insane and only hang with oddballs and basket cases. We don't bow or read The Bible. We're anarchists who watch slasher flicks just to hear the sound of screams, your idols. I'll have you swallowing a knife, this is Halloween, I'm Michael. Norman Bates, let's reenact the shower scene in Psycho. Prison or jail, I'm ready to sit in a cell - that's for certain. 'Cause I'm living in Hell. Fuck that nigga Pharrell, I ain't never been a Happy person. Just a bastard lurking behind Catholic churches. But I'm into black magic and casting curses. Badly hurting, fighting pain that's infectious. Craving your flesh, I walk like the Day of the Dead in a state of depression. Get hung by your dangled intestines. I'm relentless, sticking my fangs in your neck because the taste of it's precious. God made a mistake and placed me in Heaven... 'til I was casted out for leaving one of His angels beheaded. Death Rap, I faithfully rep it. You stay on the fence while I still got the balls to still spit the bars that you lable offensive. That's the difference between us. Plus, your bitch got more than just a glimpse of my penis. Dick so big, it ripped through her spleen and split her urethra. I should visit a priest to get rid of these demons. But any hopes of me living my dreams were shattered and I'm still trying to pick up the pieces. Clinical genius, my visions aid the blind. Once an experiment, a victim tranquilized in a tank of ice. 'Til I rose in a rage, with vicious traits designed by my innovator's mind. I'm the myth that came alive, the stitched creation with a brain and spine made by Victor Frankenstein.

big baby · 05-19-2014, 10:04 PM

Not bad.

DexLabb · 05-19-2014, 10:06 PM

LOL @ bastard lurking behind catholic churches.. WHY MAN!

DexLabb · 05-19-2014, 10:07 PM

u remind me of that dmx line...

"I'm gon' make it work, 28 and tryna get baptized, priest cant touch me cause he said I gave him bad vibes "

Zen · 05-20-2014, 12:45 PM

I lol'd at the Pharell line. The opening flowed great, but then I thought it fell off a little off at the cocky and abrasive. It picked back up again, but I think if you reworded a few sections this would be flawless. I remember reading one of your pieces awhile back on here and loved it. It was HOF nom'd if I'm remembering right. Ill be checking your shit out. Peace.

Neighbor · 05-20-2014, 04:23 PM

Don't listen to anyone sayin this was anything less than savage

Glad you're back

King Ra. · 05-20-2014, 04:52 PM

This was.... SAVAGE.

05-19-2014, 09:40 PM	#1
The youngest boss. Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 200 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 3342428	Relentless I'm a motherfucking zombie bashing brains in. Dahmer's back, the monster that created your horror fascination. Scarred and lacerated, get your carcass dragged and sawed in half. This is germ-infesting cross-contamination, bring in the body bags and rape kits. Cocky and abrasive. Rotten raps, I'm Satan with a raw imagination and thoughts of Patrick Bateman committing awful acts of hatred. Johnny swag, I'm Blazing. No. Johnny swag, I'm Caged in. Caught and trapped, contained. I'm lost and can't escape this haunting transformation. Sharpened axes make sure your arms are amputated, a doctor botching handsome faces. Heartless savage pacing, I've gone insane and only hang with oddballs and basket cases. We don't bow or read The Bible. We're anarchists who watch slasher flicks just to hear the sound of screams, your idols. I'll have you swallowing a knife, this is Halloween, I'm Michael. Norman Bates, let's reenact the shower scene in Psycho. Prison or jail, I'm ready to sit in a cell - that's for certain. 'Cause I'm living in Hell. Fuck that nigga Pharrell, I ain't never been a Happy person. Just a bastard lurking behind Catholic churches. But I'm into black magic and casting curses. Badly hurting, fighting pain that's infectious. Craving your flesh, I walk like the Day of the Dead in a state of depression. Get hung by your dangled intestines. I'm relentless, sticking my fangs in your neck because the taste of it's precious. God made a mistake and placed me in Heaven... 'til I was casted out for leaving one of His angels beheaded. Death Rap, I faithfully rep it. You stay on the fence while I still got the balls to still spit the bars that you lable offensive. That's the difference between us. Plus, your bitch got more than just a glimpse of my penis. Dick so big, it ripped through her spleen and split her urethra. I should visit a priest to get rid of these demons. But any hopes of me living my dreams were shattered and I'm still trying to pick up the pieces. Clinical genius, my visions aid the blind. Once an experiment, a victim tranquilized in a tank of ice. 'Til I rose in a rage, with vicious traits designed by my innovator's mind. I'm the myth that came alive, the stitched creation with a brain and spine made by Victor Frankenstein. Last edited by The youngest boss.; 05-20-2014 at 03:01 AM.

05-19-2014, 10:06 PM	#3
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	LOL @ bastard lurking behind catholic churches.. WHY MAN! __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

05-19-2014, 10:07 PM	#4
DexLabb song genius Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 377 Rep Power: 0	u remind me of that dmx line... "I'm gon' make it work, 28 and tryna get baptized, priest cant touch me cause he said I gave him bad vibes " __________________ ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

05-20-2014, 04:23 PM	#6
Neighbor Genghis Khan Vuitton Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,303 Battle Record: 30-10 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Pic Key Grand Prix - 1-2 Season 1 - Newbie Tournament II - Fight Night LXII - Fight Night XLII - Fight Night XXXIII - Fight Night XXVI - BA Swag & Flow - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - Netcees Battle League(2x) - BA Slugfest II - Fight Night of Champions - Fight Night LXXXIII - Summer Classic X Rep Power: 34764471	Don't listen to anyone sayin this was anything less than savage Glad you're back __________________ Even signing my autograph’s like writing a slaughter pact

05-20-2014, 04:52 PM	#7
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	This was.... SAVAGE. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

05-20-2014, 12:45 PM	#5
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I lol'd at the Pharell line. The opening flowed great, but then I thought it fell off a little off at the cocky and abrasive. It picked back up again, but I think if you reworded a few sections this would be flawless. I remember reading one of your pieces awhile back on here and loved it. It was HOF nom'd if I'm remembering right. Ill be checking your shit out. Peace.