Downward Slopes

Wise Wiggles · 05-18-2014, 01:44 PM

And it's gone. I've left. Took the stroll
Kaput. Allergic. Shit has took it's toll
It's been scary. Creepy, creeping at this crooked hole
The book is full. Hey hi-five's and group hugs
My night life is do drugs. Dude I got huge love
Let the tears show, I'm weird bro. I bet on miracles
I set my pace at a dreary dull. Her eyes met my face
& here we go. Wanna give her good time
But I'm vivid in nature. Lets give it up for the idiot maker
Every party's gotta be equipped with a hater
Hey.. she's got me thoooo
Her image spikes my range in optical
Jeez, it's like I want to see her all the time
Why you think she be in all my rhymes?
It's a disease. I sneeze this collage of grime
I'm drunk. Fell off the cruise ship.
Hell's clogged with tulips. Twelve darts in two lips
Fell apart. Spells art with cruel drips
Want to know what an illusion is?
Strung out on loose leaf trips. Never show you the real me
And these deadly shadows are filthy. Why don't you see it?
A lonely feature. Reality is a zombie creature
Idgaf if your posse's deeper. Fuckin Cosby neegers
I'm Forrest Gump in the bush. Raining upwards
Glorious. I'm done & it's good. It's sort of as tough as it looks
Ever count her nopes? Life on a downward slope
Liquor bellys and the counters are coke
Still struggling. This love slip is pill hustling
Dreams are still there but I kill some of them
Sick. Did you hear he's bed ridden?
He's an asshole. Lets shiv him. Forgotten.
Why can't I mold to your rotten.
Society is just so store boughten
fucking pussies

CopyPat · 05-19-2014, 02:01 AM

ur sick. ur slowly but surely evolving and getting deeper. ur losing me. or maybe i'm losing you?!?!?! ur getting more legit as a writer and less rapper-y. i think dull and dead will approve. theyre prob ur faves no? ur becoming them, but grittier. pretty soon we'll hate eachother.. sorry in advance.

ur welcome for the awesome feed
now get aim already

Objective · 05-22-2014, 07:13 PM

Grimy piece, honest to the bone. Love the flow/rhyme scheme as well. Read through it easily and enjoyed it. Cool shit.

This stuck with me tho':
''Want to know what an illusion is?
Strung out on loose leaf trips. Never show you the real me''
^ Nice!

CJ the Poet · 05-28-2014, 01:36 PM

''why can't I mold to your rotten"
SICK!!

05-18-2014, 01:44 PM	#1
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Downward Slopes And it's gone. I've left. Took the stroll Kaput. Allergic. Shit has took it's toll It's been scary. Creepy, creeping at this crooked hole The book is full. Hey hi-five's and group hugs My night life is do drugs. Dude I got huge love Let the tears show, I'm weird bro. I bet on miracles I set my pace at a dreary dull. Her eyes met my face & here we go. Wanna give her good time But I'm vivid in nature. Lets give it up for the idiot maker Every party's gotta be equipped with a hater Hey.. she's got me thoooo Her image spikes my range in optical Jeez, it's like I want to see her all the time Why you think she be in all my rhymes? It's a disease. I sneeze this collage of grime I'm drunk. Fell off the cruise ship. Hell's clogged with tulips. Twelve darts in two lips Fell apart. Spells art with cruel drips Want to know what an illusion is? Strung out on loose leaf trips. Never show you the real me And these deadly shadows are filthy. Why don't you see it? A lonely feature. Reality is a zombie creature Idgaf if your posse's deeper. Fuckin Cosby neegers I'm Forrest Gump in the bush. Raining upwards Glorious. I'm done & it's good. It's sort of as tough as it looks Ever count her nopes? Life on a downward slope Liquor bellys and the counters are coke Still struggling. This love slip is pill hustling Dreams are still there but I kill some of them Sick. Did you hear he's bed ridden? He's an asshole. Lets shiv him. Forgotten. Why can't I mold to your rotten. Society is just so store boughten fucking pussies __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" Last edited by Wise Wiggles; 05-18-2014 at 02:06 PM. Reason: Didn't edit shit faggots

05-19-2014, 02:01 AM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	ur sick. ur slowly but surely evolving and getting deeper. ur losing me. or maybe i'm losing you?!?!?! ur getting more legit as a writer and less rapper-y. i think dull and dead will approve. theyre prob ur faves no? ur becoming them, but grittier. pretty soon we'll hate eachother.. sorry in advance. ur welcome for the awesome feed now get aim already __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

05-22-2014, 07:13 PM	#3
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Grimy piece, honest to the bone. Love the flow/rhyme scheme as well. Read through it easily and enjoyed it. Cool shit. This stuck with me tho': ''Want to know what an illusion is? Strung out on loose leaf trips. Never show you the real me'' ^ Nice! __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

05-28-2014, 01:36 PM	#4
CJ the Poet Junior Member Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 6 Rep Power: 0	''why can't I mold to your rotten" SICK!!