Dominate vs. Allen Knight {Dominate wins}

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@Dominate @Allen Knight

[Allen Knight]

wattup 12

[Dominate]

word 12's good... I'll try to find time for this before the deadline but in all liklihood ima need the ext, only got 2mins at a time from work or on my phone before then and I can't stand writing a verse like that. Hope that's cool

[Allen Knight]

werd its all good ext granted

[Dominate]

thx. Sent my verse to Snoop. g/l

[Allen Knight]

Sn00p Edit:
I edited in some extra lines so the Award Showcase doesn't cover any of the verse.













ur nasty fat girl got the clap, dirty sluts the most vile type
that bitch got more fire between her legs than taking a joy ride on ghost riders bike
cheat to win is ur motto, try to pull that n i'll make ya bleed u asshole
you live off shady moves so much u'd be a general in the league of shadows
wen i strive against the best, i demolish & have there bars smash
wen u strive against the best, u turn & run away faster than chris johnsons 40 yard dash
i got the AR-15 aimed at ur crew, unlimited rounds to cloake haters
n spray bullets till it kills all of nate doggs or they suffer an die from multiple strokes later
sendin fists 10x stronger than supermans, to rock this punks mouth
uppercut till ur soul flips out ur body & floats over it saying damn i got knocked the fuck out
ur music would never sell, white trash aussies get boo's an yawns
faggot the only time u move units...is ur trailer home wit ur truck next too ur moms

[Dominate]

He’s a sad & lonely faggot. Given a chance to describe his problems?
I’m telling United Air Tragedies that’d make Suicide Missions seem like an option
& if this homo joins the Navy, it’s not for no mission or gadget
He’s just hoping someone in the FleetWould Mack..
.. & tell him Sweet Little Lies like he isn’t a faggot
His girlfriend resists his advances, - she ain’t down to ride with a lame
There’s no Chemistry between em... she just wanna see Alkalide with a train
He got lucky Victor forfeited, cuz his lines are awful as fuck
We wouldn’t have seen Allen’s Cervix... but his gynaecologist DOES
All ur wins are no-shows faggot, & you gotta unwind when the trouble pass
Every time ur opponents Dip you do the same in a scented bubble bath
That doesn’t pass if Nate is in, I’ll flame & cinder ya bastard
How u gon Curry favour w/ voters when ur verse is ‘Made in India’ Standard

[El Muffin]

allen i cant see your 5th n 6th line

that award shit stretches out and covers nearly half of those two bars

[Skunk]

switch to orange soda skin and ull see them

[Boredom]

ur nasty fat girl got the clap, dirty sluts the most vile type
that bitch got more fire between her legs than taking a joy ride on ghost riders bike
cheat to win is ur motto, try to pull that n i'll make ya bleed u asshole
you live off shady moves so much u'd be a general in the league of shadows
got the AR-15 aimed at ur crew, unlimited rounds to cloake haters
n spray bullets till it kills all of nate doggs or they suffer an die from multiple strokes later
ur music would never sell, white trash aussies get boo's an yawns
faggot the only time u move units...is ur trailer home wit ur truck next too ur moms

vs

& if this homo joins the Navy, it’s not for no mission or gadget
He’s just hoping someone in the FleetWould Mack..
.. & tell him Sweet Little Lies like he isn’t a faggot
His girlfriend resists his advances, - she ain’t down to ride with a lame
There’s no Chemistry between em... she just wanna see Alkalide with a train
He got lucky Victor forfeited, cuz his lines are awful as fuck
We wouldn’t have seen Allen’s Cervix... but his gynaecologist DOES
All ur wins are no-shows faggot, & you gotta unwind when the trouble pass
Every time ur opponents Dip you do the same in a scented bubble bath

...ima have to come back to this, i've literally been re-reading these verses for 15 minutes and can not decide a fucking winner. so close n fuck u both for making me go over this as much as i have.. it's literally down to whose non quotable missed more and trying to figure who has the harder hitting quotables.

[Hollywood]

opener, league of shadows, move units (barely)

vs.

United Air tragedies, Alkalide, cervix, dip

pretty good battle, but Dom killed it.. best I've seen from him, while I've seen better from AK in past battles

'you knight'd air tragedies' & Al collide stood out to me more than any other lines TBH

props to both, but V/Dominate

[Defiant]

ur nasty fat girl got the clap, dirty sluts the most vile type
that bitch got more fire between her legs than taking a joy ride on ghost riders bike
cheat to win is ur motto, try to pull that n i'll make ya bleed u asshole
you live off shady moves so much u'd be a general in the league of shadows
wen i strive against the best, i demolish & have there bars smash
wen u strive against the best, u turn & run away faster than chris johnsons 40 yard dash

vs

He’s a sad & lonely faggot. Given a chance to describe his problems?
I’m telling United Air Tragedies that’d make Suicide Missions seem like an option
& if this homo joins the Navy, it’s not for no mission or gadget
He’s just hoping someone in the FleetWould Mack..
.. & tell him Sweet Little Lies like he isn’t a faggot
His girlfriend resists his advances, - she ain’t down to ride with a lame
There’s no Chemistry between em... she just wanna see Alkalide with a train
He got lucky Victor forfeited, cuz his lines are awful as fuck
We wouldn’t have seen Allen’s Cervix... but his gynaecologist DOES
All ur wins are no-shows faggot, & you gotta unwind when the trouble pass
Every time ur opponents Dip you do the same in a scented bubble bath




allen started nice but kinda fell off imo, doms first 6 lines were fire alkalide was crazy, best dom verse ive read in awhile, while i feel allen didnt dropped to the standard he has been dropping lately, dope battle but a clear winner imo

vote - dominate

[Maximus]

WOW DOPE MATCH UP GUYS!!!
props to both of u for bringing it. Allen started off solid with a good opener, other quotables were the nate dogg and move units line but of his jabs didnt really hit that hard, dope verse nonetheless but ive seen better from u.
Dominate really dominated this one,lol. His highlights were the cervix, united air tragedies, bubble bath and alkalide lines which were dope as fuck, best verse ive read from u no doubt. Props to both once more.
V/dom

[~RustyGunZ~]

ur nasty fat girl got the clap, dirty sluts the most vile type
that bitch got more fire between her legs than taking a joy ride on ghost riders bike
cheat to win is ur motto, try to pull that n i'll make ya bleed u asshole
you live off shady moves so much u'd be a general in the league of shadows
i got the AR-15 aimed at ur crew, unlimited rounds to cloake haters
n spray bullets till it kills all of nate doggs or they suffer an die from multiple strokes later
ur music would never sell, white trash aussies get boo's an yawns
faggot the only time u move units...is ur trailer home wit ur truck next too ur moms

vs

He’s a sad & lonely faggot. Given a chance to describe his problems?
I’m telling United Air Tragedies that’d make Suicide Missions seem like an option
& if this homo joins the Navy, it’s not for no mission or gadget
He’s just hoping someone in the FleetWould Mack..
.. & tell him Sweet Little Lies like he isn’t a faggot
His girlfriend resists his advances, - she ain’t down to ride with a lame
There’s no Chemistry between em... she just wanna see Alkalide with a train
He got lucky Victor forfeited, cuz his lines are awful as fuck
We wouldn’t have seen Allen’s Cervix... but his gynaecologist DOES
All ur wins are no-shows faggot, & you gotta unwind when the trouble pass
Every time ur opponents Dip you do the same in a scented bubble bath

really good read, allen just lost steam at the end didn't have as much zest. dom was consistent and the fleetwood mac line slaughtered me

v/dom

[Utmost]

ur nasty fat girl got the clap, dirty sluts the most vile type
that bitch got more fire between her legs than taking a joy ride on ghost riders bike
cheat to win is ur motto, try to pull that n i'll make ya bleed u asshole
you live off shady moves so much u'd be a general in the league of shadows
i got the AR-15 aimed at ur crew, unlimited rounds to cloake haters
n spray bullets till it kills all of nate doggs or they suffer an die from multiple strokes later


vs

He’s a sad & lonely faggot. Given a chance to describe his problems?
I’m telling United Air Tragedies that’d make Suicide Missions seem like an option
& if this homo joins the Navy, it’s not for no mission or gadget
He’s just hoping someone in the FleetWould Mack..
.. & tell him Sweet Little Lies like he isn’t a faggot
His girlfriend resists his advances, - she ain’t down to ride with a lame
There’s no Chemistry between em... she just wanna see Alkalide with a train
All ur wins are no-shows faggot, & you gotta unwind when the trouble pass
Every time ur opponents Dip you do the same in a scented bubble bath

good battle here.

Allen started off strong with ghostrider and league of shadows leaned me. rest was good too, toward the end you fell off a bit tho. def a good verse
Dom was pretty consistent thru out, opener was nice. I seen fleet and alkalide done before i think, against nik and karp but they were flipped ina fresh way. Dip was probably the simplest of your verse but i probably liked it the most

v/Dom on consistency and harder hits