Who all on Netcees can write something using this scheme? - Page 4

PancakeBrah · 11-28-2013, 04:06 PM

My biggest problem with voters is that people will miss schemes completely and call complex rhymes simple because they're just going through the motions to get their required votes.

Certain · 11-28-2013, 04:22 PM

Certain's Corner is educating the masses.

dead man · 11-28-2013, 06:22 PM

so sick to see chance's fanbase skyrocketing.

you heard it here first..

Cronus · 11-28-2013, 06:27 PM

my schemes are reeedic when I try, peep the sig

Witty · 11-28-2013, 06:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dead man

so sick to see chance's fanbase skyrocketing.

you heard it here first..

Amen.

Certain · 11-28-2013, 06:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic

who's ready to scrap? Mike's ready to scrap
got machetes & bats already attacking Yeti to nab the heaviest yak
got plenty of bad friendlies w/ macks for enemy rats
steady & strapped, letting it blast til ur bedding w/ crab on the Deadliest Catch

Those are rhymes, not schemes.

Witty · 11-28-2013, 06:39 PM

Don't talk about schemes...i may have to just destroy everyone.

You have been warned.

Eŋg · 11-28-2013, 06:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

Those are rhymes, not schemes.

point out the fact it sux, too.

edit - thanks.

Wise Wiggles · 11-28-2013, 06:55 PM

Schemes schemes

Schemes schemes schemes

Schemes

Cronus · 11-28-2013, 07:15 PM

haters cuz u can't fuck w/ it

cheers

Pent uP · 11-28-2013, 08:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic

haters cuz u can't fuck w/ it

cheers

Im not hating when I say that those are basic rhyme structures and nothing to brag about

Cronus · 11-28-2013, 08:39 PM

I could space it out n make it look like the first link too

fuck a "structure"

Cronus · 11-28-2013, 08:44 PM

13 different 4 syllable rhymes in 4 lines isn't that easy to do, FYI

Certain · 11-28-2013, 08:57 PM

The rhymes were fine.

Seyance · 11-28-2013, 09:52 PM

one of my hof pieces was a 32 line verse wiith the same scheme.

Pent uP · 11-28-2013, 10:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic

13 different 4 syllable rhymes in 4 lines isn't that easy to do, FYI

Once again. That is one of the easiest multis to pull off.

Cronus · 11-28-2013, 10:49 PM

lol, ok

Wise Wiggles · 11-29-2013, 01:26 AM

Very easy.

Answer · 11-29-2013, 08:54 AM

You are now inside of the
Damaged mind of a
Frantic rhymer that's
Ready to

Choke like an anaconda
Blow like I am Osama
Go like I ran a timer
Ready to throw my arm on a
Hoe like I am a farmer
Get both of your fans n armor
I'm roasting ya fam w/ dhalmer
My Flow like expanded water
So cold itd withstand a sauna
You shoot slow like Manute Bol
I'm quick to rip the flesh from your
Bone like a damn piranha
Get ya groove tho, you ain't kuzco
I'll pistol whip the emperor
He knows not to dance w/ llamas
Y'all doing the superman
I got both of my hands on Lana
The dude said he's moving Grams -
meant to a home in the damn Bahamas

Seriously though, multis are not hard. Especially when you're not saying anything in your rhymes. Barons work was always impressive because of his content, and how well his multis seemed to fit in together. It's not like he was rhyming random shit for the sake of rhyming, it actually all coalesced and didn't seem awkward at all

Answer · 11-29-2013, 09:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barcotic

13 different 4 syllable rhymes in 4 lines isn't that easy to do, FYI

That's essentially every verse on capital punishment. Whether or not you can flow and make it sound as good as pun, who knows. I've never heard you audio

11-28-2013, 06:22 PM	#63
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	so sick to see chance's fanbase skyrocketing. you heard it here first.. __________________ Zack Wicks for president

11-28-2013, 06:39 PM	#67
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Don't talk about schemes...i may have to just destroy everyone. You have been warned. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

11-28-2013, 06:55 PM	#69
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Schemes schemes Schemes schemes schemes Schemes __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

11-28-2013, 09:52 PM	#75
Seyance - Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,059 Battle Record: 0-4 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night VII Rep Power: 0	one of my hof pieces was a 32 line verse wiith the same scheme. __________________ i'm truely renaissance.. dominate the web, television, movies and beyond when a leader gets to speaking, it's your duty to respond.. i'm a leave these niggas leaking like i'm julian assange.

11-29-2013, 01:26 AM	#78
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Very easy. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

11-28-2013, 04:06 PM	#61
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	My biggest problem with voters is that people will miss schemes completely and call complex rhymes simple because they're just going through the motions to get their required votes.

11-28-2013, 06:27 PM	#64
Cronus retired Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 157 Battle Record: 1-3 Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix I - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - BA Pic - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) Rep Power: 0	my schemes are reeedic when I try, peep the sig

11-28-2013, 07:15 PM	#70
Cronus retired Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 157 Battle Record: 1-3 Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix I - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - BA Pic - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) Rep Power: 0	haters cuz u can't fuck w/ it cheers

11-28-2013, 08:39 PM	#72
Cronus retired Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 157 Battle Record: 1-3 Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix I - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - BA Pic - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) Rep Power: 0	I could space it out n make it look like the first link too fuck a "structure"

11-28-2013, 08:44 PM	#73
Cronus retired Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 157 Battle Record: 1-3 Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix I - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - BA Pic - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) Rep Power: 0	13 different 4 syllable rhymes in 4 lines isn't that easy to do, FYI

11-28-2013, 08:57 PM	#74
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	The rhymes were fine.

11-28-2013, 10:49 PM	#77
Cronus retired Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 157 Battle Record: 1-3 Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix I - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - BA Pic - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) Rep Power: 0	lol, ok

11-29-2013, 08:54 AM	#79
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,701 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 14633673	You are now inside of the Damaged mind of a Frantic rhymer that's Ready to Choke like an anaconda Blow like I am Osama Go like I ran a timer Ready to throw my arm on a Hoe like I am a farmer Get both of your fans n armor I'm roasting ya fam w/ dhalmer My Flow like expanded water So cold itd withstand a sauna You shoot slow like Manute Bol I'm quick to rip the flesh from your Bone like a damn piranha Get ya groove tho, you ain't kuzco I'll pistol whip the emperor He knows not to dance w/ llamas Y'all doing the superman I got both of my hands on Lana The dude said he's moving Grams - meant to a home in the damn Bahamas Seriously though, multis are not hard. Especially when you're not saying anything in your rhymes. Barons work was always impressive because of his content, and how well his multis seemed to fit in together. It's not like he was rhyming random shit for the sake of rhyming, it actually all coalesced and didn't seem awkward at all Last edited by Answer; 11-29-2013 at 09:04 AM.