Genocide vs. Sharp Nine {Sharp Nine wins}

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@Genocide @Sharp Nine

[Sharp]

Cheek to cheek

10 good?

[Geno]

10 works

[Geno]

Gonna need the ext, most likely.

[Sharp]

You got it boss

[Geno]

Damn..
Almos aint notice you, your names something I ain't heard of a lot
Nine such a No Body, i'm still trying to debunk if he paranormal or not
From netcees to aob, and still aint worth it to remember your name
Left to sharp, id be broke as fuck when it comes to a memmory bank
Speakin of broke, when's the last time you put together anything dope?
Your styles like a street fight, alotta missed punches -everything goes
Fucking jabs, hooks, lefts and rights, uppercuts and some clinches -shit
Nigga swinging so hard, should rather find a freaky couple thats intrested
but yo, fuck that extension cause you really just a click from your death
sharp nine what u get when u bring a knife to a gun fight, n the pistol is gens

*

[Sharp]

Genocide aka Adolf Spitler

Originally Posted by Genocide

Everytime I see immacs tits/cleavage.. its my bday allover again. Thanks bruh

I get laid daily, the chicks just cant be deterred
My bitch games Immaculate... yours gotta be pathetic if ya hollerin at her
Fag's no dictator, b2b showed this guy ain't hard
The Beer hall putsch has nothing on Adolf gettin wrecked by Defiant bars
Huge gap in experience, but predictions got him rattled still
Got all that space... and yet no one sees any in our battle skill
got some props in the OM but in a brawl, this faggot's worthless
funny how you can see that creative 'cide everywhere...except his battle verses
texting longer than your tutors? get sonned for that
So this L isn't a surprise...you're used to getting schooled by younger cats

[Jay]

Fucking jabs, hooks, lefts and rights, uppercuts and some clinches -shit
Nigga swinging so hard, should rather find a freaky couple thats intrested


vs



got some props in the OM but in a brawl, this faggot's worthless
funny how you can see that creative 'cide everywhere...except his battle verses




not really a huge fan of this battle. not as it may seem but it is pretty onesided. SN threw some heavier concepts and personals. a ffew of them missed as far as the punchline goes but i get where he was going. more creativity on his verse. Geno didnt have too many fresh bars except the one i quoted. the rest was pretty basic and i saw the punch coming. that killed the sting imo and hurt his verse.


v. SN

[Flow]

Fucking jabs, hooks, lefts and rights, uppercuts and some clinches -shit
Nigga swinging so hard, should rather find a freaky couple thats intrested
but yo, fuck that extension cause you really just a click from your death
sharp nine what u get when u bring a knife to a gun fight, n the pistol is gens

VS

I get laid daily, the chicks just cant be deterred
My bitch games Immaculate... yours gotta be pathetic if ya hollerin at her
got some props in the OM but in a brawl, this faggot's worthless
funny how you can see that creative 'cide everywhere...except his battle verses
texting longer than your tutors? get sonned for that
So this L isn't a surprise...you're used to getting schooled by younger cats

Personally I dont think either brought to the table what they capable of. But I got sharp on much better attempts overall and quotes.

Vote/Sharp

[Joe Boston]

Genocide

Damn..
Almos aint notice you, your names something I ain't heard of a lot
Nine such a No Body, i'm still trying to debunk if he paranormal or not
Played Wordplay concept

From netcees to aob, and still aint worth it to remember your name
Left to sharp, id be broke as fuck when it comes to a memmory bank
Wording made this lack impact

Speakin of broke, when's the last time you put together anything dope?
Your styles like a street fight, alotta missed punches -everything goes
Nice concept

Fucking jabs, hooks, lefts and rights, uppercuts and some clinches -shit
Nigga swinging so hard, should rather find a freaky couple thats intrested
Lol

but yo, fuck that extension cause you really just a click from your death
sharp nine what u get when u bring a knife to a gun fight, n the pistol is gens
Nah

Sharp

Genocide aka Adolf Spitler

Originally Posted by Genocide
Everytime I see immacs tits/cleavage.. its my bday allover again. Thanks bruh
I get laid daily, the chicks just cant be deterred
My bitch games Immaculate... yours gotta be pathetic if ya hollerin at her
Mild personal hit ok flip

Fag's no dictator, b2b showed this guy ain't hard
The Beer hall putsch has nothing on Adolf gettin wrecked by Defiant bars
Wording off here

Huge gap in experience, but predictions got him rattled still
Got all that space... and yet no one sees any in our battle skill
Basic hit

got some props in the OM but in a brawl, this faggot's worthless
funny how you can see that creative 'cide everywhere...except his battle verses
Ok personal

texting longer than your tutors? get sonned for that
So this L isn't a surprise...you're used to getting schooled by younger cats
Ok

Well Genocide had two decent hits the street fight concept and the swingers concept stood out to me. Sharp nine came with a couple personal shots so I give it to him for personal attempts. Pretty close if Genocide had better wording in some of his hits. Sharp edged this slightly.

V/Sharp

[mdesanto]

Geno

From netcees to aob, and still aint worth it to remember your name
Left to sharp, id be broke as fuck when it comes to a memmory bank
Speakin of broke, when's the last time you put together anything dope?
Your styles like a street fight, alotta missed punches -everything goes

Some pretty cool concepts, enjoyed this bit the most

-

Sharp

Fag's no dictator, b2b showed this guy ain't hard
The Beer hall putsch has nothing on Adolf gettin wrecked by Defiant bars
got some props in the OM but in a brawl, this faggot's worthless
funny how you can see that creative 'cide everywhere...except his battle verses

I really liked the concept of your closer, but i felt like it was poorly executed tbh

-

Close battle, I think Im gonna have to go against the grain on this one, it was 2-2 on quotables for me, and i think geno had the better of the pair..

V/ Geno

[Ox]

Speakin of broke, when's the last time you put together anything dope?
Your styles like a street fight, alotta missed punches -everything goes
Fucking jabs, hooks, lefts and rights, uppercuts and some clinches -shit
Nigga swinging so hard, should rather find a freaky couple thats intrested

Vs.

I get laid daily, the chicks just cant be deterred
My bitch games Immaculate... yours gotta be pathetic if ya hollerin at her
got some props in the OM but in a brawl, this faggot's worthless
funny how you can see that creative 'cide everywhere...except his battle verses'

MVg2 - SN, barely edged this due to bein more direct/personal plus he had the bar of the battle imo creative name flip

[tyler]

This was a pretty decent battle. Genocide had some cool concepts and punches probably 2 bars I liked from him. His 3rd and 4th bar i believe we're pretty cool. Sharp got a little more personal in this. I was feeling his opener and closer. I think when it comes down to it sharp edges it for getting more personal and he had my favorite line. Good shit tho..close

vote-sharp

[Plot]

Ive got Genocide here. I think his concepts were better, nobody, swinging and memory banks.
Sharp had some good personals and disses I guess, but didnt really do anything as far as trying wordplays.
Sorry for the short breakdown.

[El Muffin]

sharp

opener had potential..something about it came off a bit unwieldy tho..the wording and such..cant be deterred.hollerin at her..just came off choppy to me with the syllabels

i like the beer hall putsch concept..but the defiant bars tie in was underwhelming

3rd..nah

creative cide was decent..basic concept but pretty effective

tutor was your best line in the verse

genocide

opener was played..and it was that good of a variation either

memory bank was similar to^^^

missed punches-everything goes played but i never seen the anything goes tie in so ill give u benefit of the doubt..nice jab

tbh wasnt feein the last 4

i get the closer but i thought premise was just..ehh sharp nine/knife gun shiz

v/sharp in a relatively close one

[Hollywood]

everything goes

vs.

creative side

that's all I was feelin TBH, and I prefer Sharp's. if Geno had different wording w/ the swinger line, he would've got it

V/Sharp

[Allen Knight]

Speakin of broke, when's the last time you put together anything dope?
Your styles like a street fight, alotta missed punches -everything goes


Vs.

I get laid daily, the chicks just cant be deterred
My bitch games Immaculate... yours gotta be pathetic if ya hollerin at her
got some props in the OM but in a brawl, this faggot's worthless
funny how you can see that creative 'cide everywhere...except his battle verses'

V/sharp, this was a real close one, i thought gen would take this but i think he got caught sleepin here
an didnt drop his best, sharp had a solid verse was a little more consistent, still really close. cool battle props yah'll

[~RustyGunZ~]

horrid

vs

I get laid daily, the chicks just cant be deterred
My bitch games Immaculate... yours gotta be pathetic if ya hollerin at her
got some props in the OM but in a brawl, this faggot's worthless
funny how you can see that creative 'cide everywhere...except his battle verses

v/ sharp
his misses would have won