Week 6 - patrown (2-2) vs. Fig (0-2) - PATROWN WINS BY NO-SHOW

Certain · 10-29-2013, 12:10 AM

Season 2

Rules

Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST

Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST

Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree

Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post.

If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension.

Topic :** You must use this quote as the last line of your verse.**

"And at that moment, the world seemed so quiet."

Good Luck @Fig @patrown

patrown · 10-29-2013, 12:42 AM

check.

Fig · 10-29-2013, 10:13 AM

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patrown · 10-30-2013, 10:17 PM

i hear whispers in the windows
vexation in the vents
damnation through the door frames
it don't make any sense
listen to the banter, head leaning to the left
know my only answers leaping to my death
questions form a riddle..pointing at the truth
endorphins swarm the fear, absorbing them like glue
"Goddamn Marcus! You sweared you wouldn't use!"
fucking needle in my chest?! my faade bitch!
ah shit.. you best not'a written a statement..
paid rent..picked up..now i'm cuffed to a gurney?
I need an attorney! Nurse, where the phone at?
"you're not in trouble sir, just combative on admission
after being legally dead for several minutes,
now we must insist you lower your voice, please."
i know i got a choice in leaving or not, i aint meetin no cops!
"Honey.. don't worry, and please don't be mad,
I threw all the balloons in your bag away in the trash."
double doors open, a white coat with a mask walks in.
pauses his walkman, pulls out a key and says,
"Lets see a smile, Marcus." So he grins to be freed.
with one motion he swings both legs down and proceeds,
to grab a scalpel and turn towards his wife,
just to drop it as his face turns purple and white,
lets out a gurgle and died the second time in a night,
and at that moment, the world seemed so quiet.

10-29-2013, 12:10 AM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Week 6 - patrown (2-2) vs. Fig (0-2) - PATROWN WINS BY NO-SHOW Season 2 Rules Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post. If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension. Topic : You must use this quote as the last line of your verse. "And at that moment, the world seemed so quiet." Good Luck @Fig @patrown __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-29-2013, 10:13 AM	#3
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	. __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

10-30-2013, 10:17 PM	#4
patrown ‹^›ô¿ô‹^› Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 596 Battle Record: 13-19 Rep Power: 0	patients i hear whispers in the windows vexation in the vents damnation through the door frames it don't make any sense listen to the banter, head leaning to the left know my only answers leaping to my death questions form a riddle..pointing at the truth endorphins swarm the fear, absorbing them like glue "Goddamn Marcus! You sweared you wouldn't use!" fucking needle in my chest?! my faade bitch! ah shit.. you best not'a written a statement.. paid rent..picked up..now i'm cuffed to a gurney? I need an attorney! Nurse, where the phone at? "you're not in trouble sir, just combative on admission after being legally dead for several minutes, now we must insist you lower your voice, please." i know i got a choice in leaving or not, i aint meetin no cops! "Honey.. don't worry, and please don't be mad, I threw all the balloons in your bag away in the trash." double doors open, a white coat with a mask walks in. pauses his walkman, pulls out a key and says, "Lets see a smile, Marcus." So he grins to be freed. with one motion he swings both legs down and proceeds, to grab a scalpel and turn towards his wife, just to drop it as his face turns purple and white, lets out a gurgle and died the second time in a night, and at that moment, the world seemed so quiet. Last edited by Certain; 11-02-2013 at 03:04 AM.

10-29-2013, 12:42 AM	#2
patrown ‹^›ô¿ô‹^› Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 596 Battle Record: 13-19 Rep Power: 0	check.