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Old 02-18-2013, 04:30 PM   #1
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Default [WEEK 7]19. John_Dough 2-0 vs 20. Axeshun 2-0

John Dough:

Quote:
Originally Posted by Axeshun View Post
Chop...
Ax, u should know I'm clothes minded with a temper to dread/
no wonder ur winning streak was over when u entered the thread/
thought the league was full of homer simpsons, clearly u know/
cuz I looked at the votes and all I'm hearing is Dough/
Ur 2 and 0? How when I studied your style and it bored me/
every week ur lame concepts just get worded more poorly/
got nice multis with an awful text flow u certainly won't spit/
plenty of generic punches and none of ur personals stick/
there's ur style, got things laced up? well not my strings/
I'd walk a mile in ur shoes but stilettos ain't my thing/
and I'll ghost write for a price, take a step to purchase/
u said u got a bad rap, now did u mean ur rep or verses?/
believe ur names axeshun cuz u stunt so stick to the script fam/
honestly ax, ur so wack u'd be a great mob hit man/
bobbed and weaved all ur punches, ur check in missed too/
and battle predictions? not even digital cameras would pic u/
last week ur verse was so far from action packed/
this week u saw Dough as your opponent, and axeshun packed/
all I see is chop this and chop that, is that just battle crap?/
take that same energy and chop off all the filler from ur battle rap/
then put ur money where ur mouth is and at a different point.../
prolly tommorrow, u'll have me pissin coins/
I'm smellin a Dough victory and shut out so the harm stops/
cuz u snooze u lose and this battle u usin 10 alarm clocks/


Axeshun:
I been waitin' to flame a fake vet with weak concepts, this cats gay
So bitch if you thought you was in ya rare form, wait until I cook u that way
Cry on when yoyu lose bitch, cuz really ya lines just make me bored
Theres a fine line between dope & good, & i aint found none of the 3 in yours
This shit must be rigged dude, cuz ya style questions me on why ya winning
I should do u some type of favor since the battle was in mine since the beginning
Make way bitch, cuz you wont be champing shit to get to oneduh
It aint over yet, so dude you should calm down & just breathe
Comin' in thinkg your a big dog, when your just one of my pet peeves
If played lines are organic, them your dying from natural causes
But u gotta respect..
Your at the highest stage of ya game, without beatin actual bosses
C'mon Dough, you might think your fly enuff to match to me
But bugs are life science, & u? aint shit but anatomy
Bleh, yeah basically I've said it all, he sucks, he's played, dudes lame
So now I'll just try & be fundamental, and puchase him a new brain
Cuz dude aint coming smart as my usuals, so dough ya streak heres over
u wanna lie about ya age, use ya concepts they make u look 3 years older
Your as soft as a seahorse, & I know the league couldn't agree more
After this you wont make a habitat losin', it'll damn near be a natural resource
Your not harsh at all bitch, but get nicer- you'll never be a sick writer
Face it you make no sense, & you couldn't get a thumbs up for hitchhikers
Be serious dude, w/ all them slashes behind ya lines you cant look fly son
& we all knew you would never die as a kid, cuz only the good die young
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