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Old 09-25-2013, 08:31 PM   #481
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Caught up in the lore. talking of allure
rocking that pure. walking with the cure
cure embodies potion mixed with emotions
black magic. Enclosed in tear drops to an ocean
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Old 09-26-2013, 12:23 AM   #482
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Old 09-26-2013, 04:02 AM   #483
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Old 09-26-2013, 04:08 AM   #484
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produce the symphony to your demise...
to behold with only the eyes told of your true lies...
seduce in its structure the knife and its puncture...
the lights that corrupt your sight, your eyes rupture.
the night is a young sir... ripe in its sun's lure,
eclipse of the heart, makes the pitch of the dark pure.
sink in your evil... drink of your lust,
consume of your greed... be a glutten you must.
impale all that is not of death and its properties...
be after life to greet it, seek to satan and his monopoly.

u fucking idiot.
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Old 09-26-2013, 12:59 PM   #485
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Rockin these flows properly, hocking and blow snot with each drop when i post lots of these notes like post offices…the most talkative joe lost in this whole process with more rawness than throats lodged with more vomit and no promise of throat lozenges yo. I wrote novelty flows way more bigger than they had to be, and display more vigor when i rap a free, cause i aint no wigger, and i’m glad to be the same ol kidder, happily. Flamethrow spitter, rabidly, chainsaw killer. Capture me. Ya brains all spitter spattery, rape assault and battery from tryna handle me lyrically.
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Old 09-26-2013, 03:37 PM   #486
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even robocop can know pain... flesh incased with no soul gained...
personality as cold as the roads where the snows lay.
being in control was never more than a troll game where gnomes play,
where we, blades of grass, all hope same with no name- goals stray.
designed to follow in droves where no stays are worth gold pay.
Never truly rewarded for thinking outside the box til, posthumously, most say...
while, ironically, u dwell for eternity in the very oak frame u opposed. yay.
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Old 09-26-2013, 08:06 PM   #487
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The apparition, sit back & listen, get tragic fitted
a hat, a stick with etchings questioning my enigma
raw digger, hard spitter, more wood then a log splitter
odd fit for the one sitting back thinking of greatness
hated, praised & congratulated, often overpopulated
support abortions & euthenasia for all the stupid players
take a seat, stoop to lasers just to boost the papers
get a booster at the table, keep a bib on
keep a wig on, so when I lose it you can get lost...
get gone as soon as I pull the pen out
writers bend over backwards but never pull their head out
brown nosers...
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Old 09-26-2013, 09:52 PM   #488
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exquisite science how I, Daniel, do more than sit wit lions...
u spit defiance, when I'm equipped to flip scripts when writin,
I captain planets, fitted fists with rings that hit, leaving ur lip divided.
thin spliffs fulla piff u lightin- when scrolls i roll bigger than the limbs of giants,
bitchin, crying- no sense in a gift that won't uplift when somali kids is dyin...
ur desciptives slip in with the fibs of tyrants- nothing u kick displays the grip of midas...
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Old 09-27-2013, 06:49 PM   #489
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If the picture is so quaint, so are the words that follow
take these birds & swallow, all if it is absurd, tomorrow..
is fun-filled, unreal, captivating depending on one's skill
we should become thrilled, & realize pain is a done deal
signed, sealed, willing to die when wandering time's field
an hourglass, quicksand...only seconds will tell if I'm real
if the fall I feel would cure the hurt that I wield...
I'd kill just to make sure that I live through the hardest times
sharpened knives that make these smiles hard to try
hard to lie...trading souls is something we can bargain by
make art of life, & make haste because I ain't got the time...
nor would I, carry on like theres no more baggage to hold
ravaging homes that keep words heard, but to be seen...
keep captioning close, restless in this actionless pose
I'm not even attracted to hope
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simply attacking the pope with sachel of ropes
bipassing air passage damaging throat
a banshee. a ghost flying by, chanting a note
fever pitch, demon bitch sand witch unholy
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Old 09-29-2013, 10:25 AM   #491
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Old 09-29-2013, 12:24 PM   #492
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I put a beat through Dre beats,on repeat.
Hit streets, ironed fresh dickies an chucks on my feet.
An althelete walking to pay respect to ya'll actors.
I'll get a double double an no pickles on my hambugers.
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Old 09-30-2013, 03:16 AM   #493
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If glory is mine the story in mind is sorely for the blind
let the soul leave the crime. watch then show me the time
so...we arrived, skeletons next to a shot of remmington
every thought sending in morse. suspense for those lending it
Elegant yet missing the point...Hard if you aren't admitting the boy
lead him before I start getting annoyed. laughing. living with joy
cumbersome as a runner up second place is getting employed
getting a check. then getting fired out of their circus tent
I swear there's something off about the ideas of a nervous wreck
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Old 09-30-2013, 05:42 AM   #494
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glass panes cover the abode... pebbles get thrown just ta prove a point.
fuck all those that oppose... I flip out like mr. fantastic spazzin on rubber joints...
i'm lit offa goose... poaching bonfire and I accidentally caught flames,
shot santa at nine... 18 yrs later i'm on sleigh mode playin reigndeer games...
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Old 09-30-2013, 03:32 PM   #495
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I'm cooped up. a loose nut hidden in truths gut
puked up what's inside and delivered some new love
love mixed with anxiety. variety that tires me
let the child sleep where the wild things try to creep
let alliance free when its time to dream. quitely...
deprived of Midas touch. I walk with casted iron feet
echoing in a padded cell. who else do I have to tell
just imagine the wonder your caught in. the rabbits tale
follow him. he had it well. waiting realizing his lateness
no wonder this man is mad abrasive. the hats oasis
sip from the thought
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Old 10-01-2013, 06:30 PM   #496
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Contradictory sorts, addicted to sports
thats when I decided to start lifting my fork
aiding the plate eventually breaking their face
that's for even mistaking my place
who dare sit uninvited? I'm rarely delighted
farewell, destruction is shared with a tyrant...
sitting in front of the treasure, loving the pressure
protection is all done for the pleasure..
so strap up & then put your feet aside
wait for hope...as hell & defeat arrive...
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Old 10-02-2013, 08:20 PM   #497
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I'm consumed by authorities that are doomed to torture me
those used to conformity who assume there's more to me
Meet your doom, its flourishing....from the root that supported me
the branches of congress growing from elaborate concepts
freedom.....the spirit collapses for progress
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He failed at life. He's missing teeth. He smells of wine and wishing. He's
the jealous type. His women see he's telling lies, but sense he needs
their help. They're right. He's clouded as fuck. Down on his luck.
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Metaphorical mastermind passing time
elaborate rhyme. negatively adding light
expose photos while my prose shows no...
end...try me again you know its a no-no
friend...bend society with wit. let the blind lead
In this crises I'm obligated to let them try it again
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denying the end only to supply the eyes to the head
add prize to attempt, everyone wins, losers die & then...
silence, quiet enough to open your own mind with
try it, try has no purpose, do does if you apply it
if has no purpose, we all see what happens on the surface...
perfect, flaws are transparent, neutrality
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