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Old 09-30-2013, 04:37 PM   #1
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Default Week 2 - Pinot Grij (0-0) vs. Objective (0-0) - OBJECTIVE WINS BY NS

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Didn't expect to get put in a match when I was a lazy fuck last week, but thanks for being easy on me. I'll do my best in these difficult times of managing time to write + GTA V. Let's write some dope shit @Pinot Grij, have fun & good luck. :)
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The attempt at life

On the edge Lora and Fred grew up in the same orphanage,
and swore the pledge of eternal friendship on urban meds.
The most dangerous road to drive consist of hardship and pain,
to come out of it alive and survive while speeding down memory lane
is a blessing from Lucifer cuz you wont see angels complain alltho' lives were in vain
as if an acid trip with Abel and Cain completed the task of perfectly painting insane.

While picture frames are gathering dust the battering trust
of time passed gets challenged for its maddening lust to come to a bust
you see these lost souls do their best to adjust in a world where humanity rust,
just imagine the frost; Cold shivers from strangers is their only knowledge of us.
Nobody can bother the loners with addiction as escape and persistence as cover,
they openly stay together and neglect the existence of others.
The resistance of outside help exceeds their dreams of a livable life,
to envision their partner not by their side is the sole reason they're still alive.
The risk of attempting suicide and either one survive is too high,
so they're swamped in misfortune, narcotics and low level crime.
Fully aware of this loop they're living it through
cuz to them it serves a bigger purpose than killing it do...

Located where romance and unity sits opportunity hits
and he stupidly kissed the goddess's lips as if her beautiful hips could go amiss.
It's brutal; there's no questions in this, but is it mutual? Maybe it is..
And if tension made sound it be a hiss cats would be jealous to miss.
But ignorance is bliss, a wish upon a star is all that it was,
and their pledge died for God's sins like when he put his son to a cross.
They could hear their dealer whisper; ''This is what LSD does'',
Lora replied: ''Angel hearts gets ripped apart each time you look upon us.
We might be yelling, complaining and fail in the eyes of powers above,
but you can bet your stash on the fact we know the definition of love.''
To most this story holds nothing but grief and a poor situation,
but how these two stayed together in madness is pure dedication.
And it's more than a revelation, it serves to show that the pot that burns
is the same toxic sperm that impregnate the idea that humanity got a shitload to learn.
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