Sick Society

Phanes · 09-24-2013, 02:19 AM

I never liked to do the same thing twice.
I can't stand these people on a day to day vice
little lame low brain functioning who say Phanes that aint nice..
but sugar coating the shit's not the way I play life
all you do is tune in to the tube stuffed into your room
grim reaper is coming swift with a broom get swept into your tomb
rest easy, a reset IS coming soon..
ya, you could be reading this right now, the message is queued
I'll appear right behind you, the vestiges sewn,
head sliced right off, fuck ya, appendages to
you could be texting up ya next battle piece, just a regular dude
pull a sword from my vocal cords whore just remember the view
enjoy your little super bowl Sundays,
tonsil hockey with fuck face, getting screwed over for chump change
can't control your hormones, a sick animals that butt tastes
I'm on the highest level, sent by the almighty with enough rage
to look down upon your civilization with sun rays
burning up to snuff you while your hiding down in rough caves
begging Christ to come save.. but you live life in a dumb way
while I was highly present when this universe was created
came down to earth yet elevated and demonstrated..
destined to stop any fellow patron who wants to penetrate it
with the devil's chain that wont break, made the way heaven's gate is
wrote the code to this mellow matrix with a well known language
so let your last words be soft spoken and with held for ages

Inno · 09-25-2013, 06:40 PM

Dude this had such crisp wording that it made the flow dam near perfect when I read it. Not one unwantrd pause or moments of getting lost in the scheme. I mean yeah at first glance this seems some what simple but to be honest the content was dope as fuck.like I mentioned before each line just rolled off the tongue. ...it almost feels like this could be for audio...crisp wording my freind..enjoyed the read. ..keep posting

Zen · 09-25-2013, 07:17 PM

Like inno said this looks simple but has great flow. Record this shit it'd be fuckin nice

Geno · 09-25-2013, 11:19 PM

Cool drop. Ur new around here rite? Just make sure you feed other people. Maybe u have, maybe u havnt.. iono' but just saying. It all comes out in the wash if you know what I mean' cool piece. Flowed well. Content wasn't spectacular' but had a few moments I enjoyed. 1

09-24-2013, 02:19 AM	#1
Phanes Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 16 Rep Power: 0	Sick Society I never liked to do the same thing twice. I can't stand these people on a day to day vice little lame low brain functioning who say Phanes that aint nice.. but sugar coating the shit's not the way I play life all you do is tune in to the tube stuffed into your room grim reaper is coming swift with a broom get swept into your tomb rest easy, a reset IS coming soon.. ya, you could be reading this right now, the message is queued I'll appear right behind you, the vestiges sewn, head sliced right off, fuck ya, appendages to you could be texting up ya next battle piece, just a regular dude pull a sword from my vocal cords whore just remember the view enjoy your little super bowl Sundays, tonsil hockey with fuck face, getting screwed over for chump change can't control your hormones, a sick animals that butt tastes I'm on the highest level, sent by the almighty with enough rage to look down upon your civilization with sun rays burning up to snuff you while your hiding down in rough caves begging Christ to come save.. but you live life in a dumb way while I was highly present when this universe was created came down to earth yet elevated and demonstrated.. destined to stop any fellow patron who wants to penetrate it with the devil's chain that wont break, made the way heaven's gate is wrote the code to this mellow matrix with a well known language so let your last words be soft spoken and with held for ages

09-25-2013, 11:19 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Cool drop. Ur new around here rite? Just make sure you feed other people. Maybe u have, maybe u havnt.. iono' but just saying. It all comes out in the wash if you know what I mean' cool piece. Flowed well. Content wasn't spectacular' but had a few moments I enjoyed. 1 __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

09-25-2013, 06:40 PM	#2
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Dude this had such crisp wording that it made the flow dam near perfect when I read it. Not one unwantrd pause or moments of getting lost in the scheme. I mean yeah at first glance this seems some what simple but to be honest the content was dope as fuck.like I mentioned before each line just rolled off the tongue. ...it almost feels like this could be for audio...crisp wording my freind..enjoyed the read. ..keep posting

09-25-2013, 07:17 PM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Like inno said this looks simple but has great flow. Record this shit it'd be fuckin nice