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Old 02-08-2013, 03:07 AM   #1
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I wrote this over "Insp-her-ation" by Dj Premier

Droppin my rhymes smooth, so you domn't think this song is rough,
You tryna act strong n tough, I doubt you could kill me bitch,
never spitting wronger stuff, so you better Feel me kid
Lived dirt poor long enough so now I should be filthy rich,
Develish lyrics, like I'm rapping through a cursed mic,
Fuck Writing raps I prefer the unrehearsed type
I'm ill cause minds sick, At least I'm not the worst right,
I'l rap to a blind chick, still be love at first sight,
Spit a verse tight, Jealousy makes you verge on misery,
Inform you that I'm god, to clear every church mystery
My lyrics confuse you like I converge Trickery
I'l try to make it clear like every teens search history,
Inflict worse injury, When I'm high off adreneline,
Attacking feminine gentlemen Producing too much estrogen,
I'm a genuine specimine right down to my skeleton,
When I kill ya, I'l see ya coffin, like you ran out of medicine,

@namix I wrote this a while back it was the only rap I had saved.

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Old 02-10-2013, 08:46 AM   #2
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good looks brotha - breakdown to come in our ultimate writers private forum!
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Old 02-11-2013, 03:01 PM   #3
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Imo it seemed like your flow was a little spotty in certain parts of this drop. The wording in some of the lines through that off a little bit to me. All in all I thought it was decent but keep droppin man.
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