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08-23-2013, 12:12 PM
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Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
Champed - BA Rookie Tourney
- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9
Rep Power: 24894581   |
Writers league drop (no showed)
Task: no co-ordinate conjunctions
This is me... I'm electrified, I'm seething, a personified dragon, fire breathing. Leaving tense eyes; ten guys screaming away evening night sky's. I bleed demons, eat screamin heathens; I love despair. Wielding evil, beating honest men's souls; leaving empty vessels there.. Taking vicious twists splits apart innocent life, leaving souls in abyss. Taking Intricate motions; showing devotion to infinite intimate cuts to their wrists. Raging, breaking free, chains separate, links escape, this is me.. My half human born heart torn apart successfully, Indefinitely; imprisoned within a continuous mission to bring death. Envision living a life ineptly, emptied of love, no rest just stress left, this Is me..... I am depression, the shadow encompassing distressing obsession, The unwilling unwanted possession, surpressing ambitions, leaving defeated expressions. The shadow chiseling self belief away; the sorrow sea against rocks. this is me......... I am, i am pandoras box. |
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08-26-2013, 09:23 PM
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White Earl
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
Posts: 12,354
Battle Record: 10-15
Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x)
Champed - Netcees Writers League
- Write Week I
- Write Week 8
Rep Power: 50036761  |
kinda soft man.
you need a lot of work, mechanically. scheming is a good place to start, then concepts up
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