Round 2: Bags vs. Utmost {Bags wins by NS}

God Of War · 07-31-2013, 09:39 PM

This Round Consists Of your ability to write stories.
Stories have been a part of hip hop and writing since time began
your goal? out write your opponent!

max lines =30
CHECK INS DUE BY SATURDAY
VERSES DUE -aug 5th

God Of War · 08-02-2013, 10:42 PM

@Bags @Utmost check in

Ghost1 · 08-03-2013, 01:09 AM

Goin 30

Utmost · 08-03-2013, 03:29 AM

word.

08-05-2013, 01:22 PM

@Bags @Utmost

Utmost · 08-06-2013, 01:48 AM

lol kinda forgot this was due today. ext?

God Of War · 08-06-2013, 05:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Utmost

lol kinda forgot this was due today. ext?

EXT GRANTED

Ghost1 · 08-06-2013, 11:59 PM

Wtf i thought this was due thursday!?!?

Im not gonna be able.to.drop till tomorrow

08-07-2013, 12:20 AM

It is tomorrow for you eastern folk.

God Of War · 08-07-2013, 02:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags

Wtf i thought this was due thursday!?!?

Im not gonna be able.to.drop till tomorrow

tomoroe it is for you both

@Utmost @Bags drop yo

Utmost · 08-08-2013, 03:22 AM

"Stiletto to the Back"

.
.
.
Was much later than I anticipated, 8 past 12 or a bit more probably
sleepily sauntered thru the cinema lobby, an usher yawned quiet
while guiding us to the side exit.. pushed the door on autopilot
peered out to the seedy city hub, rifled my pockets n' flicked the ticket stub
bent to my kicks n' fixed a scuff, while at the door...held it for the lady behind me
maybe it was timing, or the way I was brought up manners and refinement
Most likely not though, a particular muscle wanted me to turn the charm on
She gave a curt nod, my eyes warmed over her bodice..yes rather sloppy game i admit
thats when i felt it.. damp spray on my skin, slight precip made way.. for the rain to begin
Her poncho must've felt accomplished, a cock blocking article of clothing..motive to trap
couldnt tell if she was toned or fat.. with that, she grabbed a small umbrella from outta her bag
She offered, I obliged the shelter.. the promise of dryness was attractive now
since the mist turned water marbles, sounding like hi hats launched an attack on the ground
I examined her close as we soaked our way thru the urban sprawl.. thick but not meaty
milky complexion shown way to rosy cheeks, as if graffiti.. we worked toward the cross walk
She faced me...those sweeping green pools told me she was headed opposite my direction
so I nodded and said "it was pleasant." then she retreated back down the cause-way with effort
I forced a last lingering look and began to turn away enroote,
when i see high beams turn outta the alley engage in pursuit.
.
.
.
I fought myself for a while, "its just a car" "coincidence" "she'll manage.." then the lights completely vanish..
Now i had zero vantage to charge in reckless abandon with hero antics
Rushed back to the boulervard full of heart..saw the car put in park, shadows in the distance
attention was my mission, I approached the vehicle ina instant.. they had left the door ajar
they homed in on the girl... last resort, the horn was a good enuff.... !!!ALARM!!!
piercing silence like a serated edge, the captors whirled their wayward heads
and the spooked doe they were after...escaped instead, Now they started down on me
but I was much more elusive prey..darted off the streets into the fray, a gloomy maze
These back roads were unfamiliar. heart racing, splashed footsteps reverberated drastic
off old bricks causing a certain phaser'd racket. Muffled voices oxygenated the space
still locked in the chase for what seemed hours each step
but i needed to stop for a sec to cough in another breath.
Panting furiously, I surveyed the scene...disoriented trying to get the lay of things
no inkling where i was, but someone did though. a sharp metal echo saturated my ears
inconsistent in its haunting melody, fear prominent and readily whatever may near
mind molded noise to visual as I envisioned a pipe holding individual berating
striking the wall occasionally, slower and more pronounced.. i hear it.
1 tap after another, no footsteps which was weird as IT drew nigh
I began to dread that steel sonata..It was do or die, I edged out carefully from cover..
improvised a cutter amongst rubble and made ready to strike
bounding around the corner i leapt into action..
the struggled ended upon realization, that me and the metal wailing
would finally meet seeing what
....it was the gentle ms. holding her broken heel up
.
.
.

Cashius · 08-08-2013, 08:40 AM

Lol...bracket already has Bags moving on.

Ghost1 · 08-08-2013, 09:00 AM

I sent my 30

B4 deadline.....

Ur 30min late.....annnnnd if i actually wrote i wouldnt care.....but i sent just numbers....soooo im gonna take the win.

Peace.

veritas · 08-08-2013, 09:19 AM

^colavitofaggotryofepiccolavitoness.

Orc · 08-08-2013, 10:51 AM

You gotta post in the thread saying u sent a verse tho lol

Cashius · 08-08-2013, 12:42 PM

Lol. You crazy for this one!

R!canTheoryz · 08-08-2013, 03:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orc

You gotta post in the thread saying u sent a verse tho lol

True ^ lol @ bags being a lazy grandpa faggot

Ghost1 · 08-08-2013, 03:56 PM

Rican why?

Im spearheading the teamrican2013 campaign

Also that is not a rule. Show it to me.

Orc · 08-08-2013, 04:17 PM

Definitely was a rule on NC. Lama dqd me over it thats how I know lol

Ghost1 · 08-08-2013, 04:25 PM

May lama rot in hell.

07-31-2013, 09:39 PM	#1
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,822 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493983	Round 2: Bags vs. Utmost {Bags wins by NS} This Round Consists Of your ability to write stories. Stories have been a part of hip hop and writing since time began your goal? out write your opponent! max lines =30 CHECK INS DUE BY SATURDAY VERSES DUE -aug 5th

08-06-2013, 01:48 AM	#6
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	lol kinda forgot this was due today. ext? Last edited by Utmost; 08-06-2013 at 04:03 AM.

08-08-2013, 03:22 AM	#11
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	"Stiletto to the Back" . . . Was much later than I anticipated, 8 past 12 or a bit more probably sleepily sauntered thru the cinema lobby, an usher yawned quiet while guiding us to the side exit.. pushed the door on autopilot peered out to the seedy city hub, rifled my pockets n' flicked the ticket stub bent to my kicks n' fixed a scuff, while at the door...held it for the lady behind me maybe it was timing, or the way I was brought up manners and refinement Most likely not though, a particular muscle wanted me to turn the charm on She gave a curt nod, my eyes warmed over her bodice..yes rather sloppy game i admit thats when i felt it.. damp spray on my skin, slight precip made way.. for the rain to begin Her poncho must've felt accomplished, a cock blocking article of clothing..motive to trap couldnt tell if she was toned or fat.. with that, she grabbed a small umbrella from outta her bag She offered, I obliged the shelter.. the promise of dryness was attractive now since the mist turned water marbles, sounding like hi hats launched an attack on the ground I examined her close as we soaked our way thru the urban sprawl.. thick but not meaty milky complexion shown way to rosy cheeks, as if graffiti.. we worked toward the cross walk She faced me...those sweeping green pools told me she was headed opposite my direction so I nodded and said "it was pleasant." then she retreated back down the cause-way with effort I forced a last lingering look and began to turn away enroote, when i see high beams turn outta the alley engage in pursuit. . . . I fought myself for a while, "its just a car" "coincidence" "she'll manage.." then the lights completely vanish.. Now i had zero vantage to charge in reckless abandon with hero antics Rushed back to the boulervard full of heart..saw the car put in park, shadows in the distance attention was my mission, I approached the vehicle ina instant.. they had left the door ajar they homed in on the girl... last resort, the horn was a good enuff.... !!!ALARM!!! piercing silence like a serated edge, the captors whirled their wayward heads and the spooked doe they were after...escaped instead, Now they started down on me but I was much more elusive prey..darted off the streets into the fray, a gloomy maze These back roads were unfamiliar. heart racing, splashed footsteps reverberated drastic off old bricks causing a certain phaser'd racket. Muffled voices oxygenated the space still locked in the chase for what seemed hours each step but i needed to stop for a sec to cough in another breath. Panting furiously, I surveyed the scene...disoriented trying to get the lay of things no inkling where i was, but someone did though. a sharp metal echo saturated my ears inconsistent in its haunting melody, fear prominent and readily whatever may near mind molded noise to visual as I envisioned a pipe holding individual berating striking the wall occasionally, slower and more pronounced.. i hear it. 1 tap after another, no footsteps which was weird as IT drew nigh I began to dread that steel sonata..It was do or die, I edged out carefully from cover.. improvised a cutter amongst rubble and made ready to strike bounding around the corner i leapt into action.. the struggled ended upon realization, that me and the metal wailing would finally meet seeing what ....it was the gentle ms. holding her broken heel up . . . Last edited by Utmost; 08-08-2013 at 04:49 AM.

08-02-2013, 10:42 PM	#2
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,822 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493983	@Bags @Utmost check in

08-03-2013, 03:29 AM	#4
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	word.

08-07-2013, 12:20 AM	#9
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	It is tomorrow for you eastern folk.

08-08-2013, 08:40 AM	#12
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	Lol...bracket already has Bags moving on.

08-08-2013, 10:51 AM	#15
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	You gotta post in the thread saying u sent a verse tho lol

08-08-2013, 12:42 PM	#16
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	Lol. You crazy for this one!

08-08-2013, 04:17 PM	#19
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	Definitely was a rule on NC. Lama dqd me over it thats how I know lol