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Like I always have a way to intensify certaiin punches
If u read with understand and can somewhat catch the flow, which I can tell who does based off how they break my verse down, the punch will just HIT seemingly at perfect timing. Its gone seem like the best shit ever |
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Not underdstanding
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I start with nameplays. Try to get 1-2 of em and get my mind thinkin creative. Thats about it.
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No gameplan.
I just write when A) I have the time and B) When I'm in the mood to write for who I'm battling. Normally it will just be an idea for a play that will pop up in my head, then the rest just starts to fall into place from that idea.. |
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I gather concepts first
Without good concepts u ain't shit Then I magically word them shits and then y'all druel
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U suck so no one gives a fuck
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Do u read thru the verse and order it a certain way?
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How does it feel to be horrible? Cuz I honestly do not know
Old jokes are just like ur lines, wack as fuck
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String them together n make it all connect
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I think everyone does that tbh. Like a lot of people will put their best punches at the beginning and end of their verses.
If it's a track will shift and move lines so the verse has a cohesive progression, especially if it's a story piece. |
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Imagine someone on this site taking tips from just c
Hahahhahah Picture that
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Imagine Nika ducking an audio battle from me then crawling back under his rock like the scary fag he is.....Nvm that actually happened.
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Lol I did audio and performed when u were sucking ur moms titty... Grow up, u ain't going no where
U suck, rhymes are wack as fuck
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I notice that a lot of ppl here suck at voting
It seems like certain ppl think certain ways when writing, which is cool But if u absolutely don't fuck with a certain type of style a) u won't be looking for/noticing that style b)giving the credit due when u notice the style When I say style I mean things like misdirection punches, vs like word association, etc Back when writing was fun to do, u had discussions about writing. Maybe its just me, but we don't discuss writing on this board I think more discussions would make votng better overall. Writing too, an appreciation of the writings being presented |
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Although u topical tree story tellers seem to still discuss writing
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U ducked my pink slip... Why would I record for someone who sucks at writing? Time waster lol
Ur writing sucks imagine ur songs Grow outta that stage bro ure going nowhere in a hurry
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