Netcees  

Go Back   Netcees > Forum > Open Mic Section

User Tag List

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 07-03-2013, 04:55 PM   #261
Void
Senior Member
 
Void's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 221




Rep Power: 0
Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void
Default

Ego broken. Self esteem evolved. Fought against my nature 'cause humans got it wrong. This sickness. They call it survival of the fittest. It isn't. It's systematic extinction. Focused on what others see no sense in seeing. We've destroyed our rivals to sit atop the throne of an empty kingdom. Survival's been internalized. It's an existential fight. I am humanity. My sanity's become the price. I was shown the cusp. Opened up. Refused to sew the cut. Acted as if I hadn't existed before utopia. Battled to see the good in every monster society painted. Poured myself through cracks. Empathized with hatred. I couldn't have just faked it. I had to touch and taste it so I could know its placement. Got lost between the spaces. My mirrors had no faces. Who am I among this matrix? Memories and stories rattle in my breathing. Try to label what I've felt by drawing parallels to Jesus, but no one will ever see it. Even you can only read it.
Void is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2013, 01:24 AM   #262
Coup
Don't believe the hype
 
Coup's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 572
Battle Record: 4-5



Rep Power: 0
Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup
Default

The golden pendulum swung. In my ear drum. Dunn Dun Dun Dunn. Ugh, I hear dumb. Got my mind, um, up motion slumps. So odd how locomotion adrenalin comes. Gentlemen I'm trembling. Ibuprofen what ? Numbs my whole endorphins some. In ocean of neurons swimming fuct. Now time is frozen. Oh look; there goes a bottle-nosed dolphin sunk. Pumped full of bone-marrow lead. Meddling. Peddling. E.T. phone home. When ? I beg. Unsettling on the bottom of an insomniac bed. A maniac, I Drive my inner man to the Adirondacks with a picnic basket. Contemplate dinner and put lipstick on this chick with acid. Close my eyes and gallop back when the pendulum swung. Dunn Dun Dun Dunn. I can't feel my tongue. It's the golden pendulum kettledrum and I'm not welcomed in.
__________________
What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.
Coup is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2013, 07:26 AM   #263
Split
.
 
Join Date: Aug 2013
Posts: 8,898
Battle Record: 27-22



Rep Power: 85899399
Split has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond reputeSplit has a reputation beyond repute
Default

I'm a simpleton synonym list. Infinitely cocky. Vigilante, vigilantly watching women gettin physically raunchy. Bitches additionally kissing me. Zippitty zoppity! By which I mean black bitches be jocking me. Just is, simply, factually, obviously.. With an 'innocent' armory missing a missile monopoly, sickle'ing citizens, sloppily. Slitting their arteries awkwardly. Jiggle my car keys. Jalopy. Javelin, starting the AMC, enabling a hard-to-see vagrancy in eighteen states. Part of me. Love it though. Babbling, marketing Maybelline to juggalos parked on the Artery. Nasally
__________________
http://split8.yolasite.com

Last edited by Split; 07-04-2013 at 07:57 AM.
Split is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2013, 01:34 PM   #264
Void
Senior Member
 
Void's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 221




Rep Power: 0
Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void
Default

lol
Void is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2013, 03:59 PM   #265
CopyPat
Mic Check
 
CopyPat's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
Posts: 708
Battle Record: 13-10



Rep Power: 3742225
CopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to CopyPat
Default

split eight that was sick mate, and i ain't even aussie bro, fire breathing awesome flow, kinda leaves in awe like woah. cold as ice with frozen mics, time to eat this popsicle. in ya mind it seems impossible to be fire breathing frozen treats, but i'm just speaking overheats in times like these i'm cold with speech?
CopyPat is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2013, 06:27 PM   #266
Void
Senior Member
 
Void's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 221




Rep Power: 0
Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void
Default

Get on that pulpit, preach. Make omens with your vocals. Get 'em quoting things you wrote on weed. Travel backstage where you ain't 'posed to see. Where you battle back hate with coke, and drink. They saddle rap saints like they're the chosen. Lead? Please. I'm just trying to flow, not teach, but I wrap it up as such so you zone with me. Messiah? Pariah. I only know the leaks 'cause I don't own a piece. Birdseye view on the world's lives. You? Trying to get the girl, might you trade all you've made just to learn my truth?
Void is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2013, 07:32 PM   #267
Camp Bell
Senior Member
 
Camp Bell's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 733
Battle Record: 10-18



Rep Power: 0
Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell Camp Bell
Default

you wanna know the truth?...
blow a few potent fumes til you so confused
ur open to a menage wit nicki&sojourner too
@'n god cuz yall dont know whos burning who
orgasmic drops?....nah, im jus hot an bored, its coo
gothic lord in gothics war, my contra soldiers move!
__________________
get high. write rhymes.
Camp Bell is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-04-2013, 08:28 PM   #268
Void
Senior Member
 
Void's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 221




Rep Power: 0
Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void Void
Default

I spew too cohesive for you few who read it. The rude loon who's tweaking. Ideas more coup coup than Egypt. Every blue moon my genius chews through adhesives and wrestles my soul for legible hold. The loose screwed behemoth. Incredible Hulk.
Void is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 12:26 AM   #269
Coup
Don't believe the hype
 
Coup's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 572
Battle Record: 4-5



Rep Power: 0
Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup
Default

What's stupid ? Sniffing life's shoe glue fluids. Lucid sewage just shot up your flute fluent. Little drummer boy phoenix like. Just a cohesive void in this diluted psych. Who knew justice ? Riddled with ripples, types your office off with Mona Lisa lips. Sinus satellite with little elbow room fixed. Sunshine joy with a toned nudest voice; up your bone crease full of noise. I mean it. Mind Zenith. Find Jesus ? Makes you act nut-nuts and sneeze dumb stuff. Double helix on ice; Red-Rum backward now your screws loose boys. MURDERED. Days are spliced; I'm sure it's fervor. Reversed Answers ? Like your crews screwed hurt. Reword these verbs into couplets. Coup gets it. All because DNA coils RNA to deliver NWA to slay this soliloquy.
__________________
What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.

Last edited by Coup; 07-05-2013 at 12:29 AM.
Coup is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 03:01 AM   #270
CopyPat
Mic Check
 
CopyPat's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
Posts: 708
Battle Record: 13-10



Rep Power: 3742225
CopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to CopyPat
Default

^thats some random fuckin gibberish, and i've had enough im sick of it. but we can't get fuckin rid of it unless we man enough to figure it... out. sick a ur mouth, flappin up that silly shit. legitimate thought holder, to idiots. non smoker. but i'de rather puff a cigarette than have another single sec to watch over what you faggots must just think is text
CopyPat is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 11:09 AM   #271
Just Write
Senior Member
 
Just Write's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,709
Battle Record: 9-12



Rep Power: 4997617
Just Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant future
Default

let me redirect my aim till i see your seat eject from plane, leave you leakin out'cha brain till you plumit n' ur ass combusts in flames, you see i'm past this fuckin phase, the so-called lovey dovey stage where we hug and play those games like we're just some happy case. cuz if the truth remains the same i'm a ruthless kid of satan spewin putrid stints of statements like the crucible or pagans.
__________________
Just Write is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 01:44 PM   #272
Coup
Don't believe the hype
 
Coup's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 572
Battle Record: 4-5



Rep Power: 0
Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup
Default

Ha! Pat. Feels bad man.
Sorry Pat. That's Sloppy cat. This faggot can't cypher. A forum lifer. Get a new hobby and copy that. I can't stand rats like you. Points out cryptic shit in a cypher, and wants a cookie. Give this bully one, props jolly man. Then shit your diaper. Fuck you, quasi fag. You just ruined it. Let's be friends tho. I like your audio. And ya pretty cool in feed back. Respect, you feel that ? Stick to dick-riding, cause I'm trying to improve and you just mad me mad. I'm going to kill myself. Copy pat ?
__________________
What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.
Coup is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 03:22 PM   #273
Just Write
Senior Member
 
Just Write's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,709
Battle Record: 9-12



Rep Power: 4997617
Just Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant future
Default

get your sloppy trash off my walking path. we too godly pat, for kids talking trash. to evolved to crash... got a problem? watch me solve the math. i'm the bomb; iran. you just seen a bomb n' ran. too strong to damn.. call me the don of wrath, puttin metal to bones since the dawn of man.
__________________
Just Write is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 03:54 PM   #274
CopyPat
Mic Check
 
CopyPat's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Location: Calgary Alberta Canada
Posts: 708
Battle Record: 13-10



Rep Power: 3742225
CopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant futureCopyPat has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to CopyPat
Default

hahaha

solve it man, ain't no problems and yeah i'm down for buddies. i'm no hater, i just flow greater, don't be frowning grumpy! see the truth is....mc's is ruthless but beef is stupid so i just keep it loose'ish.... jeez confusion, i really only rap for fun, i just flowed what rhymed. silly homie.. relax im done. control ya minds, sitting home and pass the buds. only time im gritty bro is sand in butt, from rolling tides and getting soaked in canada....Just mad beach sittin on vacation chillin, i rap each syllable stay safe, i'm killin em
CopyPat is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 04:01 PM   #275
Coup
Don't believe the hype
 
Coup's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 572
Battle Record: 4-5



Rep Power: 0
Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup
Default

Just write. Sucks men, fucks right. Get off pat's dick. Your lust's sick, bitch sodomite. You meat bag. A body rag. A expendable fag for the most evil man. In the world god damn. You pretend you exceptional. OH NO. Who are you ? Cos I'm skeptical. Pick a rose...He loves me, Loves me not. It's in your verse; it's hilarity. "I'm a emo nerd, please remember me" I don't cause you suck. Don't write for therapy...go kill yourself.
__________________
What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.
Coup is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 04:07 PM   #276
Just Write
Senior Member
 
Just Write's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,709
Battle Record: 9-12



Rep Power: 4997617
Just Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant future
Default

you just a cumquat, a fruit. who cum swaps with bruce. you dumb lost its true,i heard you suck cock in groups and fuck lots of dudes.

:)
__________________
Just Write is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 04:18 PM   #277
Coup
Don't believe the hype
 
Coup's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 572
Battle Record: 4-5



Rep Power: 0
Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup Coup
Default

Here's a tip. You need it. Leave Coup alone don't feed him...like that Britney video. You don't know ? Infinity complexity ego hold. Who am I ? I'll tell you hoe. I'm the author of your favorite book. Law and order, a pauper on the paper tucked, a lawyer on the table torture. A kid with bigger fish to fry. Look me in the eye...yeah, what I thought.
__________________
What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope.
Coup is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 04:40 PM   #278
Fig
Om
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 6,461
Battle Record: 8-16



Rep Power: 84181562
Fig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant futureFig has a brilliant future
Default

why cant we be friends?
why cant we see men?
__________________
BIRDHORSE 8-15
Fig is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 04:44 PM   #279
Vulgar
Razor-thin derision
 
Vulgar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25

Accomplishments
- OM HOF

Champed
- Fight Night LIV
- Gimmick Battle League (2x)
- Write Week II
- Art of Writing League
- Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament
- STI
- Haiku Writer Challenge
- GWL Picture Challenge(2x)

Rep Power: 49604320
Vulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant futureVulgar has a brilliant future
Default

A kid with bigger fish to fry, or prehistoric bird brains
Everyone's got their hands on your stash - pass around the church change
Collapsed accounts invert reins to the banks, vast amounts of word slang
spray from our angst... that's why we lay in front of tanks
Join the Fight Club, Tyler Durden's graven itch
I read your Zodiac in Se7en ways, now you might get David Lynched
Disgraced in stints, cancerous. Mind resists? Kill the klutz.
Bucket lists filled with blood. Hydralisks built this hut.
Elmer Fudd's bullet casings litter every rabbit hole
Itinerary ballots show a cannon blows at literary Alamo
Bloody Mary's marriage prone, she was a huge fan of love quotes
"Who'd ever thought looking into the mirror could be so cutthroat?"
I caught you lames. On your high horse barstools when your costume's plain
This is the rise of the rickshaws... and I'm the monsoon rains.
I'ma monster, mane. I truly, really mean it
Copypat.... has a puny little penis.
Vulgar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 07-05-2013, 04:58 PM   #280
Just Write
Senior Member
 
Just Write's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,709
Battle Record: 9-12



Rep Power: 4997617
Just Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant future
Default

What i write can't be taught, i shoot to kill. catch coup slippin n split two clips between his lips, n the whip Of his coupe de ville. Kid the proof is real, son you just stupid, chill. Compared to you my skills is stupid ill like a gruesome deal. And you just sound like how a justin beiber groupie squeals.
__________________

Last edited by Just Write; 07-05-2013 at 10:48 PM.
Just Write is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Tags
aero is successful in life, billion syllable syllabus, comanchero, dexlabb infinte whackness, fig didn't make this tag, fig made this tag, frank stoppable hof, gillionaire girls club, i also made that tag - fig, if frank aint hof, lars absolute fire, no pacifier, premature, sinacog is a great writer

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:46 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2025 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
Google+