Sour Joog vs. Unemployed - SOUR JOOG WINS

For Battling · 01-22-2018, 02:49 PM

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 25th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

@Sour joog @Unemployed

Nick James · 01-22-2018, 03:28 PM

12?

Enbombz · 01-23-2018, 06:43 AM

12 is good

Enbombz · 01-24-2018, 08:22 PM

Man i'm gone be beating him bad, this kids the weakest of fags
Fuck top 5 disses ever, you'll never make top 5 disses of the week in the mag
You keep talkin that disrespect, I come to ya crib rocking the tool g
No stopping this uzi, Blow the doors off quicker than a Jim Morrison groupie
Dude talking empty smack, but he don't wanna get me mad,
I'll get my strap..Dude see the cans n wanna be friends like a Pepsi add
I tried to be nice, but if he think he beating me, the truth
He doesn't stand a chance, the rapper in me has "no problem" ethering this fool
Bullets gone spray n rip up his guts, I am giving no fucks
When this kid get lit up, he get tagged by thirteen like chilla n goodz
I'll put the tech to his lips, if he step to the kid
Dude don't want these exit wounds, he wounded enough he can't exit his crib

Nick James · 01-25-2018, 01:17 AM

I kno u readin my threads for personals so now joog feel he got me
of course u pass for a bookworm.. bitch u got the ring n tape ones in ur body
joogs girl got a mean throat shit ill break the neck of this dumb vet
nigga if you catch me slippin its cuz I cant step sumwhere she aint cum yet
ur rlly gay as shit, n' for that reason alone I wont defend the guy
I only know its sour joog when i watch u pucker up to kiss a win goodbye
hoes dont give joog any play these dudes got u gas' d believin u great
when it comes to broads u hearin more no's than a poll for the mid season break
ull always be last in quotes I hate to crash ur hopes
bitch u culdnt win if russia came back n hacked the votes
U aint the king of nothin watch u get beat n pounded
if i pull the crown its cuz I knocked out all the other teeth around it

Joog ur way up outta here nigga

Clout · 01-25-2018, 05:06 AM

Joog got this easialy.

Pepsi add, chance the rapper, top 5 disses, the doors all dope to me.

I wasn't digging unemployment verse at all felt lack it lacked alot of harsh impact. I only liked kiss the win good bye. Rest were eh to me

V joogin

Flow · 01-25-2018, 07:32 AM

Unemployed
Opener light
Slipping was funny
Kiss win good bye was solid
Hacked votes was light
Closer is played af

Joog. P

Opener light
Jim morrison was lotb
Pepsi add was solid
Ethering was ok
Last two bars were meh

Pretty even to me but preferred joogs. Coild go either way

Vote Joog

Barcotic · 01-25-2018, 08:12 AM

Joog

blow the doors off was creative, dope
pepsi joint was coo
exit wounds was aite

Unemployed

opener had a nice concept but the wording made it fall completely flat
catch me slipping was good

v/joog

Amen · 01-25-2018, 08:17 AM

Man i'm gone be beating him bad, this kids the weakest of fags
Fuck top 5 disses ever, you'll never make top 5 disses of the week in the mag
Played but liked the slight flip lol...
You keep talkin that disrespect, I come to ya crib rocking the tool g
No stopping this uzi, Blow the doors off quicker than a Jim Morrison groupie
Dude talking empty smack, but he don't wanna get me mad,
I'll get my strap..Dude see the cans n wanna be friends like a Pepsi add

vs

ur rlly gay as shit, n' for that reason alone I wont defend the guy
I only know its sour joog when i watch u pucker up to kiss a win goodbye

Rest was ass...

I got Joog here...

Problumatic · 01-25-2018, 08:44 AM

I also have Joog taking this one fairly easy.. he was just more consistent, period.

The multis were pretty consistent through out the punches and set ups.
His Jim Morrison/blow doors off line was probably the most memorable of the battle 4 me.
Pepsi line was aight lol .. was actually kinda funny but that’s about the only lines that truly stood out.

Vs

The opener was dope if it was set up to a better extent.
Russia/Hacked the votes was pretty aight

Just wasn’t a lot of power or cleverness behind your set ups and select content to really pivot off of going into your next bar.

V/Joog

Nick James · 01-25-2018, 04:49 PM

Thats wassup @ the tips

I aint battled in a hot min so fuck it lol

classickERBL · 01-25-2018, 05:00 PM

joog - had the pepsi bar i like
unemployed that ring and tapeworm concept was cool ,win goodbye was cool... russia votes was funny , overall unemployed got better concepts
v - unemployed

Nick James · 01-26-2018, 12:10 AM

5-1 joog

Schadenfreude · 01-26-2018, 01:03 AM

SOUR JOOG
Decent battle, respectable showings from both, Unemployed you were aight, just way too many old concepts. Joog you had a couple misses as well, but the punches that did land hit hard & Doors was easily LOTB.

Pinot Grij · 01-26-2018, 01:21 PM

Joog

Opener light but cool
Doors line is hot.
Pepsi ad is fuckin' dope to me. Great imagery.
No problem line was choppy and lost its effect.
Chilla n Goodz line is dope -- thought I'd see more of this this week.. I wish it rhymed better, but the execution was cool.
Exit Wounds is cool

vs

Unemployed

Worm wp is stretched and not that effective.
Cum line is gross as shit but cool, I guess.
Pucker line is cool, I thought you could've taken it in a stronger direction tho.
I didn't know there was a poll, lol. Line is ok though.
Russia line is cool but feels a little out of date.
Crown line is aight too.

Good battle. Joog was solid. Unemployed was really good too but it almost seemed like the lines missed that little extra oomph and x-factor. That was the difference.. Joog just had a little more shine.

Vote -- Sour Joog

For Battling · 01-27-2018, 09:36 AM

Sour Joog Wins 7-1

01-22-2018, 02:49 PM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Sour Joog vs. Unemployed - SOUR JOOG WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Jan 25th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Sour joog @Unemployed

01-25-2018, 01:17 AM	#5
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423718	I kno u readin my threads for personals so now joog feel he got me of course u pass for a bookworm.. bitch u got the ring n tape ones in ur body joogs girl got a mean throat shit ill break the neck of this dumb vet nigga if you catch me slippin its cuz I cant step sumwhere she aint cum yet ur rlly gay as shit, n' for that reason alone I wont defend the guy I only know its sour joog when i watch u pucker up to kiss a win goodbye hoes dont give joog any play these dudes got u gas' d believin u great when it comes to broads u hearin more no's than a poll for the mid season break ull always be last in quotes I hate to crash ur hopes bitch u culdnt win if russia came back n hacked the votes U aint the king of nothin watch u get beat n pounded if i pull the crown its cuz I knocked out all the other teeth around it Joog ur way up outta here nigga Last edited by Nick James; 01-25-2018 at 05:52 AM.

01-26-2018, 01:03 AM	#14
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049084	SOUR JOOG Decent battle, respectable showings from both, Unemployed you were aight, just way too many old concepts. Joog you had a couple misses as well, but the punches that did land hit hard & Doors was easily LOTB. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

01-26-2018, 01:21 PM	#15
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Joog Opener light but cool Doors line is hot. Pepsi ad is fuckin' dope to me. Great imagery. No problem line was choppy and lost its effect. Chilla n Goodz line is dope -- thought I'd see more of this this week.. I wish it rhymed better, but the execution was cool. Exit Wounds is cool vs Unemployed Worm wp is stretched and not that effective. Cum line is gross as shit but cool, I guess. Pucker line is cool, I thought you could've taken it in a stronger direction tho. I didn't know there was a poll, lol. Line is ok though. Russia line is cool but feels a little out of date. Crown line is aight too. Good battle. Joog was solid. Unemployed was really good too but it almost seemed like the lines missed that little extra oomph and x-factor. That was the difference.. Joog just had a little more shine. Vote -- Sour Joog __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

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01-22-2018, 03:28 PM	#2
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423718	12?

01-23-2018, 06:43 AM	#3
Enbombz Not Joog Join Date: Nov 2016 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 9-5 Rep Power: 5907772	12 is good

01-24-2018, 08:22 PM	#4
Enbombz Not Joog Join Date: Nov 2016 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 9-5 Rep Power: 5907772	Man i'm gone be beating him bad, this kids the weakest of fags Fuck top 5 disses ever, you'll never make top 5 disses of the week in the mag You keep talkin that disrespect, I come to ya crib rocking the tool g No stopping this uzi, Blow the doors off quicker than a Jim Morrison groupie Dude talking empty smack, but he don't wanna get me mad, I'll get my strap..Dude see the cans n wanna be friends like a Pepsi add I tried to be nice, but if he think he beating me, the truth He doesn't stand a chance, the rapper in me has "no problem" ethering this fool Bullets gone spray n rip up his guts, I am giving no fucks When this kid get lit up, he get tagged by thirteen like chilla n goodz I'll put the tech to his lips, if he step to the kid Dude don't want these exit wounds, he wounded enough he can't exit his crib

01-25-2018, 05:06 AM	#6
Clout Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 846 Battle Record: 1-0 Rep Power: 6428575	Joog got this easialy. Pepsi add, chance the rapper, top 5 disses, the doors all dope to me. I wasn't digging unemployment verse at all felt lack it lacked alot of harsh impact. I only liked kiss the win good bye. Rest were eh to me V joogin

01-25-2018, 07:32 AM	#7
Flow Upset Champion Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: West Mids Posts: 3,861 Battle Record: 57-49 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Rookie Tourney - 1-2 Punch League (x2) - Pandemonium Cypher - 1-2 Punch league Season 9 Rep Power: 24894581	Unemployed Opener light Slipping was funny Kiss win good bye was solid Hacked votes was light Closer is played af Joog. P Opener light Jim morrison was lotb Pepsi add was solid Ethering was ok Last two bars were meh Pretty even to me but preferred joogs. Coild go either way Vote Joog

01-25-2018, 08:12 AM	#8
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,496 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061968	Joog blow the doors off was creative, dope pepsi joint was coo exit wounds was aite Unemployed opener had a nice concept but the wording made it fall completely flat catch me slipping was good v/joog

01-25-2018, 08:17 AM	#9
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,462 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Man i'm gone be beating him bad, this kids the weakest of fags Fuck top 5 disses ever, you'll never make top 5 disses of the week in the mag Played but liked the slight flip lol... You keep talkin that disrespect, I come to ya crib rocking the tool g No stopping this uzi, Blow the doors off quicker than a Jim Morrison groupie Dude talking empty smack, but he don't wanna get me mad, I'll get my strap..Dude see the cans n wanna be friends like a Pepsi add vs ur rlly gay as shit, n' for that reason alone I wont defend the guy I only know its sour joog when i watch u pucker up to kiss a win goodbye Rest was ass... I got Joog here...

01-25-2018, 08:44 AM	#10
Problumatic Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 79 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 6797934	I also have Joog taking this one fairly easy.. he was just more consistent, period. The multis were pretty consistent through out the punches and set ups. His Jim Morrison/blow doors off line was probably the most memorable of the battle 4 me. Pepsi line was aight lol .. was actually kinda funny but that’s about the only lines that truly stood out. Vs The opener was dope if it was set up to a better extent. Russia/Hacked the votes was pretty aight Just wasn’t a lot of power or cleverness behind your set ups and select content to really pivot off of going into your next bar. V/Joog

01-25-2018, 04:49 PM	#11
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423718	Thats wassup @ the tips I aint battled in a hot min so fuck it lol

01-25-2018, 05:00 PM	#12
classickERBL Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 52 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 91818	joog - had the pepsi bar i like unemployed that ring and tapeworm concept was cool ,win goodbye was cool... russia votes was funny , overall unemployed got better concepts v - unemployed

01-26-2018, 12:10 AM	#13
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423718	5-1 joog

01-27-2018, 09:36 AM	#16
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Sour Joog Wins 7-1