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Old 08-26-2014, 08:02 PM   #1
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Seven shots rang out and caused a shift in the system
while a few of the targets were marked, 6 intermissions
a few months back I sat there with my 5th symphony
ready..conduct what came forth in our mixed symmetry
it's sick misery, twisted but also a gift given with dignity
only a third of the country would be granted this discrepancy
what has the world come to...now this makes no sense to me
why am I the one to be caught up in my minds melody..
I rock, roll, and create fire with a green lantern
a green goblin, with a ewok, a sheep and a deep sea hobbit
I may seem pompous, but it only means I need a target
a Wookie making a vase, that's Harry Potter...
I'm bored but make sense of the senseless
make pence out of water & Parkinson penmanship
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if I had the cash I'd prolly pave way in a Mercedes
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touche...you made it...amazing :)
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Old 08-26-2014, 09:23 PM   #2
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Good to see u back droppin homie.
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Old 08-26-2014, 09:25 PM   #3
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Seven shots rang out and caused a shift in the system
while a few of the targets were marked, 6 intermissions
a few months back I sat there with my 5th symphony
ready..conduct what came forth in our mixed symmetry

Dope flow. Good.

it's sick misery, twisted but also a gift given with dignity
only a third of the country would be granted this discrepancy

Hard.

what has the world come to...now this makes no sense to me
why am I the one to be caught up in my minds melody..
I rock, roll, and create fire with a green lantern
a green goblin, with a ewok, a sheep and a deep sea hobbit

Okay.

I may seem pompous, but it only means I need a target
a Wookie making a vase, that's Harry Potter...
I'm bored but make sense of the senseless
make pence out of water & Parkinson penmanship
I forget...I forget...sometimes I forget I'm blessed as shit
that's a cross in your tight end a hail mary to end it quick

This was dope. Liked this alot.

I dance with the devil, I groove with Hades
I deserve a medal...why? I'm smooth with the ladies
I create that mood for babies, I'm oozing with Rabies
I'm Bruce Wayne in the 80's, I'm new wave & crazy
I forget sometimes...I've made way for you crazies
if I had the cash I'd prolly pave way in a Mercedes
I'm sorry I forget what it is I'm supposed to say to you ladies
touche...you made it...amazing :)

Lol. Nice drop J.
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Old 08-26-2014, 10:04 PM   #4
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bruce wayne in the 80's i like that. i like ur condensed insanity and satire, not bad
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Old 09-02-2014, 05:16 PM   #5
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Thanx breh
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