aiight - REAL feedback time. CRITERIA INSIDE.

namix · 06-22-2014, 09:57 PM

I will provide feedback, break-down style, to at least the first ten works that meet the following criteria:
- post a link in this thread to somethin you dropped on netcees which was written on or after May 1, 2014 (i don't want to read some old 'personal classics'.......... necessarily**)
- ** IF it was written before 5/1, but is something particularly important to you, simply tell me when it was written and why you want a fresh read and objective breakdown from me.

substance wins in a vacuum, recency wins in the dustpan.

so to summarize, RESPOND WITH:
A) link, which should B) dated, and if before 5/1, C) all of the above

drop 'em if you got 'em.

------------------------------- closed -------------------------------
01. zenland - "yaya"
02. veritas - "your 7th universe"

------------------------------- open -------------------------------
03. fig - "bleeding intention"
04. ydk - "humanity smoked up in a gravity bong"
05. dead man - "from, a lighthouse in wilderness"
06. vulgar - "visitors"
07. mike wrecka - "We Have Awoke a Sleeping Giant"
08. oats - "Catharsis"
09.
10.

Zen · 06-22-2014, 10:12 PM

Appreciate it.

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=78978

Dropped it early this morning.

namix · 06-22-2014, 10:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zenland

Appreciate it.

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=78978

Dropped it early this morning.

nice, first on this list pawtna (~48 hours, because i will be killed by some post vacay email here lol)

veritas · 06-22-2014, 10:24 PM

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=67070

StarFaggot · 06-22-2014, 10:27 PM

Yea bc this will make up for your wrongs.

namix · 06-22-2014, 10:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero the Apex

Yea bc this will make up for your wrongs.

if it is wrong not to check the internet for 6 days straight while vacationing at the beach, then i don't want to be right yo lol

do you have a link to some fresh material, Aero?

StarFaggot · 06-22-2014, 10:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by namix

if it is wrong not to check the internet for 6 days straight while vacationing at the beach, then i don't want to be right yo lol

do you have a link to some fresh material, Aero?

If when you don't check YOUR site it goes down for 3 days it's a problem. You made a business model for NC and failed it in EVERY way.

At least go to a reputable beach.

namix · 06-22-2014, 10:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero the Apex

If when you don't check YOUR site it goes down for 3 days it's a problem. You made a business model for NC and failed it in EVERY way.

At least go to a reputable beach.

lol, naw man... i made a leverage model, then made a side business with my real business which co-created real busy-ness.

so word, i am just a sugar daddy --- i consider dudes like pancake, certain, and sharp in charge, with others as well.

holla if you're interested in running an aero-branded tourney or something, i am more than willing to learn from your dedication and attention to detail yo

Greed · 06-22-2014, 10:48 PM

Change faggot back to knuck

Fig · 06-23-2014, 12:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed

Change faggot back to knuck

StarFaggot · 06-22-2014, 10:48 PM

I'm interested in being this site's sugar daddy.

Vulgar · 06-22-2014, 10:53 PM

Inspiring

namix · 06-22-2014, 11:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vulgar

Inspiring

you got anything semi-recent V? appreciate that worldview as you know yo.

Fig · 06-22-2014, 11:03 PM

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=69404

Please and thank you

namix · 06-22-2014, 11:06 PM

crazy - i just noticed we don't have a canonical domain up in this beeeyotch. with a "www." in the url, it opened a new tab to www.netcees.co with the default skin and not logged in lol.

you just posting a link for feedback will ultimately lead to an improved site, Fig. Thank you for your continued efforts, intentional and unintentional alike ;)

YDK · 06-22-2014, 11:07 PM

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=77639

Thanks bro

dead man · 06-22-2014, 11:12 PM

sure why not

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=78635

Vulgar · 06-22-2014, 11:17 PM

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=75800

Mike Wrecka · 06-23-2014, 12:07 AM

posted on 5/1/2014 . good shit namo

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=69253

Fig · 06-23-2014, 12:54 AM

So who else is going to pledge to feed those pieces?

I know I will probably

06-22-2014, 09:57 PM	#1
namix been that, done there. Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 2,259 Battle Record: 2-1 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 85246655	aiight - REAL feedback time. CRITERIA INSIDE. I will provide feedback, break-down style, to at least the first ten works that meet the following criteria: - post a link in this thread to somethin you dropped on netcees which was written on or after May 1, 2014 (i don't want to read some old 'personal classics'.......... necessarily) - IF it was written before 5/1, but is something particularly important to you, simply tell me when it was written and why you want a fresh read and objective breakdown from me. substance wins in a vacuum, recency wins in the dustpan. so to summarize, RESPOND WITH: A) link, which should B) dated, and if before 5/1, C) all of the above drop 'em if you got 'em. ------------------------------- closed ------------------------------- 01. zenland - "yaya" 02. veritas - "your 7th universe" ------------------------------- open ------------------------------- 03. fig - "bleeding intention" 04. ydk - "humanity smoked up in a gravity bong" 05. dead man - "from, a lighthouse in wilderness" 06. vulgar - "visitors" 07. mike wrecka - "We Have Awoke a Sleeping Giant" 08. oats - "Catharsis" 09. 10. __________________ well fed.

06-22-2014, 10:27 PM	#5
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Yea bc this will make up for your wrongs. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

06-22-2014, 10:48 PM	#11
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	I'm interested in being this site's sugar daddy. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

06-22-2014, 11:03 PM	#14
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=69404 Please and thank you __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

06-22-2014, 11:06 PM	#15
namix been that, done there. Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 2,259 Battle Record: 2-1 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 85246655	crazy - i just noticed we don't have a canonical domain up in this beeeyotch. with a "www." in the url, it opened a new tab to www.netcees.co with the default skin and not logged in lol. you just posting a link for feedback will ultimately lead to an improved site, Fig. Thank you for your continued efforts, intentional and unintentional alike ;) __________________ well fed.

06-22-2014, 10:12 PM	#2
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Appreciate it. http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=78978 Dropped it early this morning.

06-22-2014, 10:48 PM	#9
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Change faggot back to knuck

06-22-2014, 10:53 PM	#12
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Inspiring

06-22-2014, 11:07 PM	#16
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=77639 Thanks bro __________________

06-22-2014, 11:12 PM	#17
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	sure why not http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=78635 __________________ Zack Wicks for president

06-22-2014, 11:17 PM	#18
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=75800

06-23-2014, 12:07 AM	#19
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	posted on 5/1/2014 . good shit namo http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=69253 __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

06-23-2014, 12:54 AM	#20
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	So who else is going to pledge to feed those pieces? I know I will probably __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15