Truth

CopyPat · 06-20-2013, 02:06 PM

Yo I never once claimed to take this shit serious
Get a gun aim and rape a bitch either it’s
Just not in my character, talkin bout Deringers
Ya better come straight to make a sick lyricist
Really now, I’m not hard in the least bit
But it’s silly how I rock bars like a precinct
Starting to see this is all for fun
Retarded mc’s get it all in a bunch
Yes I’m talkin bout they panties
Locked without the damn keys
Cause most rappers stuck
And they not about to stand free
Look, I’m practically 30 years old
And it took some practicing to murder pure flows
Heard a beards bro? Ya I got one a those
Court appearance though? Nah, I’m not one a those
Cause I never been arrested, never been neglected
Medicine was present when my head was in distress this
Is Real Shit. I’m talkin genuine dookie
Feel tits, Copy getting that nookie
But only if you mean I was caught in a headlock
And the only tits I see is when I log into xbox
Cause I got web browser on that mothafuckin shit
And the screens way bigger, that’s humongous fuckin tits!!
And I didn’t really mean to swear this much
But ya didn’t really seem to care so fuck
Shit... ass... cunt and bitch
When I spit... raps… I’m such a dick
But enough a this cursing language
My mother would flip if she heard me say it

Sequel to Lies
Audio coming soon on this and others

Advocate · 06-20-2013, 07:57 PM

I must say, I enjoy reading alot of your drops. You got dope lyrics and a good flow. I like the combination of styles you use also. Keep em coming.

Geno · 06-20-2013, 10:52 PM

I could tell you were just playiing here. Lines like the "rock bars like a precinct" shit.. well, that's a very used metaphor.. definitely have seen you come way fresher @CopyPat. Just seemed like a flex,, you made quick work of it and it rolled out smoothly, might have had one or two choppy transition, but for the most part it was a chillin little drop. Almost seemed like you just wrote it just cause you needed to shake a little rust or were bored or something. Didn't really feel that passion or flame behind it like I have in other reads from you. But fuck it, I'm glad you put something down. Keep writing man, 1

Eŋg · 06-23-2013, 12:22 AM

This was ok to me. Just felt a bit too off-key, and normally that ain't a problem, but I found it hard to vibe. I'm not sure about the beards-something-line before it, but this:

Court appearance though? Nah, I’m not one a those
Cause I never been arrested, never been neglected
Medicine was present when my head was in distress this
Is Real Shit.

this was tight. But then it fell off right afterward. You probably didn't put much effort into this piece. It was ok to me.

06-20-2013, 02:06 PM	#1
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	Truth Yo I never once claimed to take this shit serious Get a gun aim and rape a bitch either it’s Just not in my character, talkin bout Deringers Ya better come straight to make a sick lyricist Really now, I’m not hard in the least bit But it’s silly how I rock bars like a precinct Starting to see this is all for fun Retarded mc’s get it all in a bunch Yes I’m talkin bout they panties Locked without the damn keys Cause most rappers stuck And they not about to stand free Look, I’m practically 30 years old And it took some practicing to murder pure flows Heard a beards bro? Ya I got one a those Court appearance though? Nah, I’m not one a those Cause I never been arrested, never been neglected Medicine was present when my head was in distress this Is Real Shit. I’m talkin genuine dookie Feel tits, Copy getting that nookie But only if you mean I was caught in a headlock And the only tits I see is when I log into xbox Cause I got web browser on that mothafuckin shit And the screens way bigger, that’s humongous fuckin tits!! And I didn’t really mean to swear this much But ya didn’t really seem to care so fuck Shit... ass... cunt and bitch When I spit... raps… I’m such a dick But enough a this cursing language My mother would flip if she heard me say it Sequel to Lies Audio coming soon on this and others

06-20-2013, 10:52 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	I could tell you were just playiing here. Lines like the "rock bars like a precinct" shit.. well, that's a very used metaphor.. definitely have seen you come way fresher @CopyPat. Just seemed like a flex,, you made quick work of it and it rolled out smoothly, might have had one or two choppy transition, but for the most part it was a chillin little drop. Almost seemed like you just wrote it just cause you needed to shake a little rust or were bored or something. Didn't really feel that passion or flame behind it like I have in other reads from you. But fuck it, I'm glad you put something down. Keep writing man, 1 __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-20-2013, 07:57 PM	#2
Advocate Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Harlem, NY Posts: 57 Rep Power: 37	I must say, I enjoy reading alot of your drops. You got dope lyrics and a good flow. I like the combination of styles you use also. Keep em coming.

06-23-2013, 12:22 AM	#4
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	This was ok to me. Just felt a bit too off-key, and normally that ain't a problem, but I found it hard to vibe. I'm not sure about the beards-something-line before it, but this: Court appearance though? Nah, I’m not one a those Cause I never been arrested, never been neglected Medicine was present when my head was in distress this Is Real Shit. this was tight. But then it fell off right afterward. You probably didn't put much effort into this piece. It was ok to me.