Edgar AlPo 3-3 vs Rayge 3-1 - EDGAR WINS

Defiant · 06-03-2013, 03:04 PM

AOB 1-2 Punch

Rules

Due Dates:
Bars are due THURSDAY 11:59 PM PST.
Voting will end when a clear winner i determined
There will be 2 battles a week
No extensions, but a 12 hour grace period is available to all.

General Rules:
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a bar.

@Edgar AlPo @Rayge

Maximus · 06-03-2013, 03:45 PM

Word

Chyeahhh!!! · 06-03-2013, 10:44 PM

My cherry dumpling is very scrumptious ,catch me buried in her onion
While any lady of rayges can pass........ for an extra in necessary roughness

Maximus · 06-07-2013, 01:48 AM

U're a clone, far from gangstar. You aint a gat blaster
so no one calls Ed OG.. when he's just a faker trynna act like that rapper

Spoken · 06-07-2013, 03:56 AM

rayge tha referance was worded poorly and which pissed me off a little honestly cause it was set up good and was building then it fell flat sorry.... Alpo i thought that necessary roughness bar was pretty tight... comes off a tad forced with the NP in it but it came out strong and solid

Atomic · 06-08-2013, 06:30 AM

^ u forgot to vote.

v/ edgar, both bars were okay/simple. just felt edgars bar connected slightly more/better concept. cool bars guys.

Utmost · 06-08-2013, 08:57 PM

Both had solid nameplays, i think the necessary roughness was worded a bit weird but the punch was still there. Rayge had a better setup, but the punch fell flat to me. I got
Edgar takin it

Defiant · 06-10-2013, 02:16 PM

2-0 upppppp

06-10-2013, 02:36 PM

I have cheayyyyyyyyyhhhhhhhh. I wasn't feeling Rayge's. Felt that edgar could have had better wording but his bar was still solid.

06-03-2013, 03:04 PM	#1
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	Edgar AlPo 3-3 vs Rayge 3-1 - EDGAR WINS AOB 1-2 Punch Rules Due Dates: Bars are due THURSDAY 11:59 PM PST. Voting will end when a clear winner i determined There will be 2 battles a week No extensions, but a 12 hour grace period is available to all. General Rules: 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting, swaying or bitching. A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a bar. @Edgar AlPo @Rayge

06-03-2013, 10:44 PM	#3
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	My cherry dumpling is very scrumptious ,catch me buried in her onion While any lady of rayges can pass........ for an extra in necessary roughness __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff Last edited by Chyeahhh!!!; 06-03-2013 at 11:03 PM.

06-07-2013, 03:56 AM	#5
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	rayge tha referance was worded poorly and which pissed me off a little honestly cause it was set up good and was building then it fell flat sorry.... Alpo i thought that necessary roughness bar was pretty tight... comes off a tad forced with the NP in it but it came out strong and solid __________________ WP Po'ethics

06-03-2013, 03:45 PM	#2
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	Word

06-07-2013, 01:48 AM	#4
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	U're a clone, far from gangstar. You aint a gat blaster so no one calls Ed OG.. when he's just a faker trynna act like that rapper

06-08-2013, 06:30 AM	#6
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	^ u forgot to vote. v/ edgar, both bars were okay/simple. just felt edgars bar connected slightly more/better concept. cool bars guys.

06-08-2013, 08:57 PM	#7
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	Both had solid nameplays, i think the necessary roughness was worded a bit weird but the punch was still there. Rayge had a better setup, but the punch fell flat to me. I got Edgar takin it

06-10-2013, 02:16 PM	#8
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	2-0 upppppp

06-10-2013, 02:36 PM	#9
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	I have cheayyyyyyyyyhhhhhhhh. I wasn't feeling Rayge's. Felt that edgar could have had better wording but his bar was still solid.