Word?

[oats]

everything is relative, perspective is cluttered
cuz even after feasting you'll be destined to hunger
plus, my resumé will never say I'm better with numbers
so I'm hiding my intentions with each letter I cover

whether it's thunder or another hidden part of the puzzle
it's an excuse to push on through, please pardon the struggle
do I contradict myself? very well, I'm too large to be subtle
so I'm drafting every shred like locking arms in a huddle

I am a sharpening bubble for your starved entertainment
I am the shadows of my callouses carved in the pavement
I am a masochistic Aslan leading armies of Satan
the diamond ring around your neck accepting karma's engagement

carnal, complacent, calmly enraged with your mom in the basement
Locked in Hades' sauna while she's jogging in place
the roof is on fire, yo! the party is blazin!
ever since we lit the chron and set the martyrs aflame

see it's just part of the game, come and witness the magic
flow like delinquents on a bridge steady pissing in traffic
My mind's the 9 to 5 grind with weekend trips to Atlantis
Painting pictures of my prison while I drift in the canvas

My tolerance for all this shit's at critical mass
If you're calculating probability, you're missing your chance
Another hipster with his lens capped gripping his camera
Claiming refusal to produce questions digital standards

I'm an ADHD Apollo on a mission to manic
Where pandora's locked inside her box - I hear the chrysalis laughing
So I mimic it, reliving every minute that's passed
till I can stand atop her shoulders or sit in her lap

[Geno]

I am a sharpening bubble for your starved entertainment I am the shadows of my callouses carved in the pavement I am a masochisticAslan leading armiesof Satan the diamond ring around your neck accepting karma's engagement

Loved this segmednt the most as a whole

My mind's the 9 to 5 grind with weekend trips to Atlantis Painting pictures of my prison while I drift in the canvas

Something about that shit was ill to me


Whole piece had touches of brilliance. Mechanics were dope as usual oats. Enjoyed this read man. W/b to the active roster.

[Dope girl]

Another dope head, the whole was dope as hell... I dig it.

[CopyPat]

HOLY shit man. this is dope as fugggggggg to be honest. u really need to be getting more feed on this, hopefully some more people read this asap. first of all the flow was technical yet smooth, so thats one of the best combinations and hardest thing to do scheming wise.. you just made it look easy. The content was so original and thoughtful man. your wordplays were outta control right from the very first stanza.. i'm not gonna bother quoting cause u obviously know what they are. just super super impressive man. you have a knack for coming off very intelligent with ur style but not being condescending or alienating readers with references that are way to far fetched overly complex. shits just really really smooth. i've always enjoyed your material. was cool to see you on a little more positive vibe than some of the shit i've read from u in the past.

Top notch shit here man. major props to u, keep it up
hit me back with some feed on my times up drop if u get a chance bro thanks

[Just Write]

This was a really great @oats. I don't know why it didnt get that much feed. Genocide already quoted my favorite parts but I just wanted to say good piece and up it for you, ive been reading a bunch of these old pieces and this is one of the ones that stuck out so props. Peace

[Illume]

Originally Posted by oats

everything is relative, perspective is cluttered
cuz even after feasting you'll be destined to hunger
plus, my resumé will never say I'm better with numbers
so I'm hiding my intentions with each letter I cover

whether it's thunder or another hidden part of the puzzle
it's an excuse to push on through, please pardon the struggle
do I contradict myself? very well, I'm too large to be subtle
so I'm drafting every shred like locking arms in a huddle

I am a sharpening bubble for your starved entertainment
I am the shadows of my callouses carved in the pavement
I am a masochistic Aslan leading armies of Satan
the diamond ring around your neck accepting karma's engagement

carnal, complacent, calmly enraged with your mom in the basement
Locked in Hades' sauna while she's jogging in place
the roof is on fire, yo! the party is blazin!
ever since we lit the chron and set the martyrs aflame

see it's just part of the game, come and witness the magic
flow like delinquents on a bridge steady pissing in traffic
My mind's the 9 to 5 grind with weekend trips to Atlantis
Painting pictures of my prison while I drift in the canvas

My tolerance for all this shit's at critical mass
If you're calculating probability, you're missing your chance
Another hipster with his lens capped gripping his camera
Claiming refusal to produce questions digital standards

I'm an ADHD Apollo on a mission to manic
Where pandora's locked inside her box - I hear the chrysalis laughing
So I mimic it, reliving every minute that's passed
till I can stand atop her shoulders or sit in her lap

This is just. What? Class.

Usually I see you doing lengthier schemes in more compound times but this had a simple beat to it in my mind and flowed like water off a duck's back.

Some of the one liners aswell. How do you come up with this shit? The whole thing was some witty, intelligent writing.