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This a cutthroat symphony; gun smoke & infamy. Rip your guts open, literally... I keep the pump holstered religiously. Love don't exist to me; a young soldier's blood oath epiphany. My lungs hold slugs that unload limitlessly w/ snubnose trajectory. While you couldn't afford a shot glass, I'm pourin cognac w/ foreign contacts in Beijing. It's mortal combat, my blade swing & your fuckin corpse'll frog splash the HD. When I'm gauge grippin, I break limits... frames split from reality. Clay pigeon ya family. My stage presence like Rain's finisher, transitioned into a game-ending Fatality. The lyrics're God status, this shit lookin like America's Got Talent. Shut down the system like a heroin shot, y'all hear what you want; I'm here to tear up ya HOF ballots. You're terrible, off balance; they're preparin the pall-bearers. This an aerial assault blasting like Barrett w/ arm calibers. Still that Type O negative psycho terrorist. Bioweaponsmith w/ the rhinestone leather grip. Cyclone crescent kick, battle rap not even Zygote's pen could script. Got lines like Pete Carroll spliced w/ Green Arrow in an Ivy League flannel. Cut w/ Bison's genes, on a Sniper Spree; splatter blood. Fightin me's like tryna weave Tiger Knees, standin up into Iron Sheik's Camel Clutch. Or standing w/ Klitschko in the staggering grip of Anderson's clinch hold. Got box control like a classic Nintendo that'll shatter your ribs in a massive crescendo. My swag lives forever, keep the mask & Beretta w/ a flask full'a Devil's Cut. Plus, the strap where the weapon's hung got more rounds than Allen from Metal Slug. The sawed-off I'm grippin launchin intestines on the walls of ya kitchen. Flawless precision. I should be locked in a prison like Auschwitz victims, no Shawshank Redemption. Or double entendres; I'm a fuckin monstrosity. Get off-topic, my thought process gave Jungian philosophy a frontal lobotomy.
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I'm outta breath just reading this. shit was that intense. holy. neigh adding a little more slantz to ur steez, i like that. not so perfect with the syllables and rhymes, i been doing that a little too, its cooler i think, haha. reads more interestingly at the very least. dopeness bud, pretty classic neigh spit, except slammed into a paragraph. y the fuck havent we collabd yet, duh..the long awaited
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magical
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this was chock full.of semi obscure references..n lord knows ima fan of.those
digging the lines culminating in the metal slug ref. and that closer was just redic as a whole the piece didnt read as smoothly as expected but the content eclipses w.e gripes i have good read.would.quote but. gayphone
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Opening lines were great. Didnt finish reading, just wanted to say, I'm glad you wrote in this format. I might do something like this just to show you. Just kidding. You're my dude. I like the zygote diss.
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Wasn't a diss lol
Zy's dope Appreciate the feed
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- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
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I LIKE THE FUCKING ZYGOTE DISS.
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Clay pigeon ya family. My stage presence like Rain's finisher, transitioned into a game-ending Fatality.
Cyclone crescent kick, battle rap not even Zygote's pen could script. Fightin me's like tryna weave Tiger Knees, standin up into Iron Sheik's Camel Clutch. Or standing w/ Klitschko in the staggering grip of Anderson's clinch hold. Got box control like a classic Nintendo that'll shatter your ribs in a massive crescendo. My swag lives forever, keep the mask & Beretta w/ a flask full'a Devil's Cut. my thought process gave Jungian philosophy a frontal lobotomy. woof. probably one of your best yet. i actually had skimmed it until i hit that last line and it was the reason i decided to re-read closely and really discover the gemstones above. really ridiculous rhyme-work
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LOL that metal slug line was dope
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Fire bro
Write more
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neigh stay killing em
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This was nice, paragraph format slayage, this was a lot more entertaining then most of the nerds that do it
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Rhinestone leather grip lol
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Dope work.
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gritty.
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Damn, thanks for all the responses
Kinda threw this together, gotta shake the rust off somehow
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^ i feel the same yo. what the fuck, i havnt even really considered writing at all in a while. i need to get back into this shit and start recording again. fuck. been letting myself go in a bad way. im on fight back mode now. fuk it
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Interested in seeing as to what you think of my writing. The K2 piece when you have a chance.
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