ever seen this concept before???

detour · 05-23-2013, 07:24 PM

play-the-diva, i'm rearrangin ur facial features.. pump out the ride
the gauge'll leave ya, hung out to dry, like my favorite t-shirt at an asian cleaners
but since two words all it takes-for-me-to get ur fiancee to leave ya
i'm-a fuck that bitch raw till her hips sprawl an i break her femur
so when the doc's give her a cane, it ain't katrina

her a cane/hurricane/ when the doc's/windy docks an etc...just curious if y'all have seen that in the text world...i'm-a still use it against breakneck the mage when we battle next month, either way...

StarFaggot · 05-23-2013, 07:27 PM

Yea the wordplays been done but it'll come across nice live.

detour · 05-23-2013, 07:33 PM

word @ aero...i figure just about every double meaning u can make has been done in text, just wasn't sure how played out it's been...

Geno · 05-23-2013, 07:33 PM

I've never personally seen/heard it. Its possible its been done though, just like anything else. Good shit imo

detour · 05-23-2013, 07:34 PM

thanks genocide...strangely enough i use more text-style wordplay in live battles than i ever did when i actually did the text thing...

Cashius · 05-23-2013, 07:56 PM

When the doc's/windy docks seems stretched to me. Even live.

detour · 05-23-2013, 08:04 PM

not if u pronounce it when dee docks...which isn't too far of a stretch live...iono we'll see how it comes out...the hurricane/her a cane/katrina shit was the main part i was concerned about...but i feel what ur sayin fam, no doubt...

Ghost1 · 05-23-2013, 08:05 PM

Wword windy docks/when the docs os not gonna work....docks/docs sure....bit windy/when the.....lmfao even in hebrew that shit dont work. Her a cane is cool tho

TYSON · 05-23-2013, 08:12 PM

I thought it was cool to me and not played in my opinion but I don't battle anymore and from wat niggas say I never did it right. So from a listener who only listens and not knee deep in the battle scene, that would be fresh.

detour · 05-23-2013, 08:30 PM

lol the windy docks/when the doc's is really just subtle wordplay in there for people to either catch it or not...tbh tho' i think it'll be a lot smoother live than y'all thinkin it will, but maybe that's just me...appreciate the feedback tho'...

mainly the hurricane part i'm thinkin of...i kinda have to use a katrina bar lol i did this thing where i said gimme thirty likes in two hours an i'll s/o one of y'all an use ur name in a scheme...katrina was the best name i got to use tbh lol...

Poe · 05-23-2013, 09:11 PM

WHEN THE ...AND WINDY works.....I don't say WHEN DUHH, I say WHEN THEEE.

It could def. work.

Dope girl · 05-23-2013, 09:17 PM

idk.....

Ghost1 · 05-23-2013, 09:27 PM

Ole lookin like ya titties start where ur elbows crease ass bish.

Maximus · 05-24-2013, 02:19 AM

Ive seen some her a cane/hurricane wordplay in the past but this aint bad and yes the windy docks will work perfectly, doesnt sound stretched to me at all

Sharp · 05-24-2013, 02:32 AM

hurricane/her a cane is all you need for that one IMO and that one definitely works

detour · 05-24-2013, 04:39 AM

word...so long as the Katrina part hits the windy docks is just there for added impact if u catch it...

I still like the frankie wapps bar "how u not see if he high then man frank is an addict...nooooo how u nazi if he hidin Anne frank in his attic"

just me tho...I suck...

...the Nagger · 05-24-2013, 10:48 AM

lol thats gonna be hot

too bad you couldn't make it Sandy instead of Katrina tho

anime_boners · 05-24-2013, 01:44 PM

DO A SLOW IT DOWN AFTER TO MAKE SURE EVERYONE GETS IT

Greed · 05-24-2013, 01:54 PM

Don't repeat yourself this time. Mean it the first time.

...the Nagger · 05-24-2013, 01:57 PM

you better not do a slow it down tho. that would be so corny, not to mention a slow it down would require katrina to be a double entendre or it would make him look completely retarded

05-23-2013, 07:24 PM	#1
detour Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 598 Accomplishments - Beat Diz (via Real Deal Handshake) Rep Power: 690963	ever seen this concept before??? play-the-diva, i'm rearrangin ur facial features.. pump out the ride the gauge'll leave ya, hung out to dry, like my favorite t-shirt at an asian cleaners but since two words all it takes-for-me-to get ur fiancee to leave ya i'm-a fuck that bitch raw till her hips sprawl an i break her femur so when the doc's give her a cane, it ain't katrina her a cane/hurricane/ when the doc's/windy docks an etc...just curious if y'all have seen that in the text world...i'm-a still use it against breakneck the mage when we battle next month, either way... Last edited by detour; 05-23-2013 at 07:34 PM.

05-23-2013, 07:27 PM	#2
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Yea the wordplays been done but it'll come across nice live. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

05-23-2013, 07:33 PM	#4
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05-24-2013, 01:44 PM	#18
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05-23-2013, 07:34 PM	#5
detour Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 598 Accomplishments - Beat Diz (via Real Deal Handshake) Rep Power: 690963	thanks genocide...strangely enough i use more text-style wordplay in live battles than i ever did when i actually did the text thing...

05-23-2013, 07:56 PM	#6
Cashius I'M A MONSTER! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,555 Battle Record: 77-13 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - The Quick & The Dead II - BA Swag & Flow Tournament - 1-2 Season 3 - NBL Season 6 - The Elements - Fall Brawl II - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Season 9 - Summer Classic VII - 50+ Wins - The Winter Classic - Tag Team Tourney -1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20257523	When the doc's/windy docks seems stretched to me. Even live.

05-23-2013, 08:04 PM	#7
detour Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 598 Accomplishments - Beat Diz (via Real Deal Handshake) Rep Power: 690963	not if u pronounce it when dee docks...which isn't too far of a stretch live...iono we'll see how it comes out...the hurricane/her a cane/katrina shit was the main part i was concerned about...but i feel what ur sayin fam, no doubt...

05-23-2013, 08:12 PM	#9
TYSON IN LOVE WITH A STRIPPER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,967 Battle Record: 10-15 Rep Power: 23089122	I thought it was cool to me and not played in my opinion but I don't battle anymore and from wat niggas say I never did it right. So from a listener who only listens and not knee deep in the battle scene, that would be fresh.

05-23-2013, 08:30 PM	#10
detour Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 598 Accomplishments - Beat Diz (via Real Deal Handshake) Rep Power: 690963	lol the windy docks/when the doc's is really just subtle wordplay in there for people to either catch it or not...tbh tho' i think it'll be a lot smoother live than y'all thinkin it will, but maybe that's just me...appreciate the feedback tho'... mainly the hurricane part i'm thinkin of...i kinda have to use a katrina bar lol i did this thing where i said gimme thirty likes in two hours an i'll s/o one of y'all an use ur name in a scheme...katrina was the best name i got to use tbh lol...

05-23-2013, 09:11 PM	#11
Poe Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 19 Rep Power: 37	WHEN THE ...AND WINDY works.....I don't say WHEN DUHH, I say WHEN THEEE. It could def. work.

05-23-2013, 09:17 PM	#12
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	idk.....

05-24-2013, 02:19 AM	#14
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	Ive seen some her a cane/hurricane wordplay in the past but this aint bad and yes the windy docks will work perfectly, doesnt sound stretched to me at all

05-24-2013, 04:39 AM	#16
detour Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 598 Accomplishments - Beat Diz (via Real Deal Handshake) Rep Power: 690963	word...so long as the Katrina part hits the windy docks is just there for added impact if u catch it... I still like the frankie wapps bar "how u not see if he high then man frank is an addict...nooooo how u nazi if he hidin Anne frank in his attic" just me tho...I suck...

05-24-2013, 10:48 AM	#17
...the Nagger Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 2,856 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 15781387	lol thats gonna be hot too bad you couldn't make it Sandy instead of Katrina tho

05-24-2013, 01:54 PM	#19
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Don't repeat yourself this time. Mean it the first time.

05-24-2013, 01:57 PM	#20
...the Nagger Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 2,856 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 15781387	you better not do a slow it down tho. that would be so corny, not to mention a slow it down would require katrina to be a double entendre or it would make him look completely retarded