"Man Dime vs Fat Swine"--Duzt & DTK

Exoduzt · 03-03-2014, 10:55 AM

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DTK:

I arise with the crack of dawn, envisioning my potential
Hit the iron building a back of brawn, exhibiting the grind of metal
Filing down my sculptured frame to display the detailed aesthetics
Zeus's son, the inhuman one.. Like the sculptures of he-males in Venice
Manly men, I walk amongst you mortals in my tank tops swollen
Veins, quads bulging..looking like a dang rock posin
Do my cardio to shred fat and keep the body percentage low
Wearing sweat pants every fuckin day cuz I can't fit into denim clothes
I eat every two hours to stay anabolic, my motivation directs my purpose
Reap the rewards as I inspect my gains, posing in every reflective surface
Eat, sleep, train...eat, rest, repeat..
Repetition, perfect existence, to interconnect the beast
Push through mental battle to exhibit a desired goal
Release the anger from daily existence through an iron pole
Alcohol isn't an option on the weekends, must respect my diet
Keeps body replenished with the necessities and leave the rest to science
In the end it's all you, stay true and keep the credit
Discipline and self betterment, that's the key to aesthetics!

Duzt:

Extra butter and parmesan as the fats just engross my noodles...
a box of Twinkies and Yodels and of course a few Toaster Stroodles!...
Heart burn constantly when it comes to my my chest I knew it was on fire...
whats a diet? T.V's on and my ass is glued to my recliner!...
so be quiet! acne on my neck roll looking like mosquito bumps...
Mustard stains on T shirts not to mention all the Dorito crumbs...
Cheetos and burritos YUM! If your healthy than I cant stand you...
Your just jealous that you cant play with my man boobs...
Chinese buffets are the best cus it's all I can eat for free...
High fives to Mcdonalds fries as they add to my obesity!...
I love Kit Kats and Snickers, Milky Ways and Zingers...
three Musketears a couple beers it's whats for dinner!...
A couple meatballs with cheese and a porter house steak for me...
No eggs. I'll take the french toast and a glass of bacon grease...
with a straw. shit I'm not a beast i jus' like the sound of it slurppin...
you only live once so I'm gonna make sure that it's worth it...
People say I'm gonna die soon and I should act my age tho...
my heart jus' stopped....nah its back... now pass the mashed potatoes!...

Exoduzt · 03-04-2014, 09:46 AM

anyone?

Lars · 03-04-2014, 09:48 AM

just peeped this at LA

cool ish, sweat pants line was lulzy

rest was cool

good humourous joint, far too many people take their writing too series these days imho

nice to see some braggodocio now and then

keep that pen moving!

Saila · 03-04-2014, 09:54 AM

D
Dope descriptions. It's much harder when it's real stuff you've gotta explain, and finding the right words can become a struggle. You did that perfectly though. Bit of education too for those that aren't in the know. Very motivational.

Ex
Lol @ fat rolls. Brilliant contrast to Ds verse, which is obviously the point - but the humour shone through well and took some of the seriousness away from the subject. Glued to your recliner, glass of bacon grease, Doritos crumbs LOL. Loved the comedic approach you took with this.

Loved this one. Really decent read.

Exoduzt · 03-07-2014, 10:34 AM

thanks fellas

03-03-2014, 10:55 AM	#1
Exoduzt Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 39 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 38	"Man Dime vs Fat Swine"--Duzt & DTK http://anthonymychal.com/wp-content/..._copyright.jpg DTK: I arise with the crack of dawn, envisioning my potential Hit the iron building a back of brawn, exhibiting the grind of metal Filing down my sculptured frame to display the detailed aesthetics Zeus's son, the inhuman one.. Like the sculptures of he-males in Venice Manly men, I walk amongst you mortals in my tank tops swollen Veins, quads bulging..looking like a dang rock posin Do my cardio to shred fat and keep the body percentage low Wearing sweat pants every fuckin day cuz I can't fit into denim clothes I eat every two hours to stay anabolic, my motivation directs my purpose Reap the rewards as I inspect my gains, posing in every reflective surface Eat, sleep, train...eat, rest, repeat.. Repetition, perfect existence, to interconnect the beast Push through mental battle to exhibit a desired goal Release the anger from daily existence through an iron pole Alcohol isn't an option on the weekends, must respect my diet Keeps body replenished with the necessities and leave the rest to science In the end it's all you, stay true and keep the credit Discipline and self betterment, that's the key to aesthetics! Duzt: Extra butter and parmesan as the fats just engross my noodles... a box of Twinkies and Yodels and of course a few Toaster Stroodles!... Heart burn constantly when it comes to my my chest I knew it was on fire... whats a diet? T.V's on and my ass is glued to my recliner!... so be quiet! acne on my neck roll looking like mosquito bumps... Mustard stains on T shirts not to mention all the Dorito crumbs... Cheetos and burritos YUM! If your healthy than I cant stand you... Your just jealous that you cant play with my man boobs... Chinese buffets are the best cus it's all I can eat for free... High fives to Mcdonalds fries as they add to my obesity!... I love Kit Kats and Snickers, Milky Ways and Zingers... three Musketears a couple beers it's whats for dinner!... A couple meatballs with cheese and a porter house steak for me... No eggs. I'll take the french toast and a glass of bacon grease... with a straw. shit I'm not a beast i jus' like the sound of it slurppin... you only live once so I'm gonna make sure that it's worth it... People say I'm gonna die soon and I should act my age tho... my heart jus' stopped....nah its back... now pass the mashed potatoes!... __________________

03-04-2014, 09:46 AM	#2
Exoduzt Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 39 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 38	anyone? __________________

03-04-2014, 09:48 AM	#3
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809298	just peeped this at LA cool ish, sweat pants line was lulzy rest was cool good humourous joint, far too many people take their writing too series these days imho nice to see some braggodocio now and then keep that pen moving! __________________ PROVEN BITER

03-07-2014, 10:34 AM	#5
Exoduzt Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 39 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 38	thanks fellas __________________

03-04-2014, 09:54 AM	#4
Saila Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Posts: 179 Rep Power: 35	D Dope descriptions. It's much harder when it's real stuff you've gotta explain, and finding the right words can become a struggle. You did that perfectly though. Bit of education too for those that aren't in the know. Very motivational. Ex Lol @ fat rolls. Brilliant contrast to Ds verse, which is obviously the point - but the humour shone through well and took some of the seriousness away from the subject. Glued to your recliner, glass of bacon grease, Doritos crumbs LOL. Loved the comedic approach you took with this. Loved this one. Really decent read.