Flo Real vs. Vinzr {Vinzr wins}

[Sn00p]

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@Flo Real @Vinzr

[Vinzr]

check

[Flow]

check for 10

[Flow]

I aint He whose name shall not be spoken but ill leave you speechless whether you post or not
You aint the king of shit but after im finished youll be postin dots
He brought punchlines for dummies to help him get his votes..
But couldnt cough one up even if I force fed him the book and all his notes
Knocked up with shmashmortion, knock you down with chastisement
You remind me of abortion and you breathing is an abortion Advertisement
Have some self respect n leave, your a loser, last loss was no exception
To even show for a W/ is self deception, hes in denial, first stage - acceptance
You lack the bite, your down an out in this league, scamperin on the ground
After this punch knocks veneerz out he'll be bloody, seethin, reachin for my crown

[Vinzr]

We both new comers, it was inevitable that eventually our path would cross
Now let’s be Real for a minute… that’s all it would take to accumulate a loss
I’d like to go off something to use on you but you have no past feats
Closest ur lines ever got to bein sharp was havin his name all over ur verse last week
We all know pianists who work their magic with tunes playing with their heart
But Flo’s horrible skill just goes to show when w saw him struggle to hit a Sharp
He walkin the tight rope, I’d be glad to know that he is taking the wrong steps
This guy was told to take a dive at it, but he went butt first and totally bombed the concept
Pass on the key to him, when this kid sees a girl theres no chance he knows her
He doin’ dog acts and we just makin him our bitch the way we makin Flo showfur

[Sharp]

He brought punchlines for dummies to help him get his votes..
But couldnt cough one up even if I force fed him the book and all his notes

v

We both new comers, it was inevitable that eventually our path would cross
Now let’s be Real for a minute… that’s all it would take to accumulate a loss
I’d like to go off something to use on you but you have no past feats
Closest ur lines ever got to bein sharp was havin his name all over ur verse last week

opener was LOTB, thought using him losing to me twice was a little much


Didn't feel as much here from flo real as I was expecting, but vinzr came pretty nicely. Giving it to him for more quotes and the opener making me chuckle

[Cashius]

Vinzr took this with his first two lines. They were direct and had some impact. Both need to work on creativity and being more aggressive towards their opponent.

Vote vinzr.

[Split]

Force fed book. Dots was nice try,
Vs
Be real, sharp, I KNO I DIDN'T JUST SEE A SHOWFUR LINE

Vinzr. Misses were much much better and wording definitely woulda been enough to give him the W even if all of aflo's lines connected

V vinZr

[Flow]

Lol win for V clearly slot of my concepts just seem lost on you all

[Orc]

NAHH...CONCEPTS WEREN'T LOST ON ME AT ALL. THEY WERE JUST VERY WACK AND POORLY WORDED..GROW UP AND GET BETTER..CRYING IS LAME WHEN YOU'RE NOT EVEN GOOD AT THIS SMDH..ONLY HALF DECENT LINE FROM FLO REAL WAS THE PUNCHLINE FOR DUMMIES..VINZR HAD THE BETTER CONCEPTS AND ALTHOUGH THE OPENER IS AN OBVIOUS NAMEPLAY IT HIT BECAUSE ITS TRUE..BOTH NEED TO COME FRESHER NEXT TIME..VINZR WINS

[Flow]

Originally Posted by -_-

NAHH...CONCEPTS WEREN'T LOST ON ME AT ALL. THEY WERE JUST VERY WACK AND POORLY WORDED..GROW UP AND GET BETTER..CRYING IS LAME WHEN YOU'RE NOT EVEN GOOD AT THIS SMDH..ONLY HALF DECENT LINE FROM FLO REAL WAS THE PUNCHLINE FOR DUMMIES..VINZR HAD THE BETTER CONCEPTS AND ALTHOUGH THE OPENER IS AN OBVIOUS NAMEPLAY IT HIT BECAUSE ITS TRUE..BOTH NEED TO COME FRESHER NEXT TIME..VINZR WINS

Not crying I am entitled to think they are lost by some, especially given the feedback - I have already stated I need to clearly look at my delivery and come back, however I actually have won a number of battles - Your telling me that I am no good at this when you havn't won a single battle yet that wasnt via no show??? Which in it self is 1 I believe...

Do you know what the definition of hypocrite is?

[Sn00p]

Stop freeposting please or I will delete them.

4-0, Vinzr. More votes please.

[Flow]

Give it him snoop im outtie