Language of Reality

[Figgly Wiggly]

Linguistic sequences encapsulate our wreathing realities....
(OUR reality. The ego there's as present as malady!)
... but uh... objective nature is conceptual fallacy...
so... syntax is a messenger that's constantly fractling
in a manner that denounces enormity... absorbed are we.
Buried within fragments that our magic is quartering
(the verbiage rains discursive till the flowers have drowned.
give them the semblance of an exit from the rising dust cloud)
It's like... bottle, blanket, lady: mommy, aunty. Anomalies
in the eyes of infants trying to subside the ***ophony.
The blur. Within this struggle, we are given the word.
The absurd is given order. A telepathy's learned.
Verbally spurning, we slowly murder and desert what's occurring
(like what's occurring in this verse is being lost in the wording?)
See then, our state of being is a metaphor. Breathing.
Seemingly undergoing methods of understanding it's meaning.
The objects of nature's poetry, retracing ourselves.
This message is manifested in our language as well.
And while every person's a database of delicate lexicon,
the friction of opposing diction heats up increscent thoughts.
Actively sharing vocabulary. Sentencing God.
Or pseudo empathetic nods made in reticent fog.
Expand the scope. In that, retract all presuppositions;
Insolence in art can hardly be regarded as wisdom.
All schism's are prison. Nature is the symbolic grace.
In this way, no answer's given, only cautiously placed.

[Figgly Wiggly]

I'll return the feed

may take me a little, but I'll do it by God

[C Raw]

Them words too big for a simple person like me lol
But it made you think. And focus and I looked up a couple words.

It kept me intrigued to keep reading. Good job

[Split]

I think if you made this less dense and a little crisper/ selective in setting up ur rhymes it would sound like very mature writing

Your stuff is always entertaining to page through. Id agree with C Raw. all the big words made me more interested in what u were saying

unless you are @namix most people have a tough time getting readers to sit through their discourse on Zen and the Art of Multisyllable Maintenance (someone out their will get this joke and have a hearty laugh, maybe @dead man )

dont forget to feed, young Swagawan

[143]

I'm liking the vocab and the direction you took with this little verse. I know it will definitely go over people's head as the common man will never attain a commonality to the verbiage listed without a brief reference to the dictionary. You kept a cool flow with the drop and had a good tie to the topic. Nothing really lacking to me, good shit.

[Certain]

Fig Jr. translator says: Language explains our circling reality, which is not to say we own it. We can't be objective enough to explain it, nor can we grasp the size of the issue, so there is no explanation. Instead we are trapped by our own flaws, which we perceive to be special. Because we can't see our own faults, we explain the beauty out of the world, with no escape from our own egotism and self-centered nature. By defining things, we limit ourselves. Words are meaningless, but we give them definition and accept those definitions as complete. Communication itself is flawed, as a concept. And while we hope to bring ourselves together with it, instead we often drive wedges in humanity. The only solution is to allow yourself to become one with the world and embrace its language-less beauty. Then you will find the meaning of life.

So this is a series of words stating that series of words are ruining the world. Well, at least they were good words. You started off a bit slow, stuck using bloviated words. But by about the sixth line, you really were taking off in expressing your ideas. I don't agree with much of the above paragraph, but I appreciate the way you conveyed those thoughts. I particularly liked the parenthetical addressing the paradox of the piece. I also liked the series of words about the infant and the mother and how you followed that up with a connected, logical thought. Really, the impressive part here as opposed to your other open mic verses I've read is that you stayed very focused on the content.

Since you have such a keen interest in big words, it would be nice to see you using them in more original ways. The content here was fine, but you expressed it so directly. The moments of wit and levity were the best parts, and I think you reflect your sense of humor and your ability to observe to make for more biting social commentary. You also could stand to toy around with rhymes a bit more, as the schemes were simple.

But this verse marks a major improvement from the last I had read from you. Keep it up, young man.

[Natural]

I gotta agree with the big wording. Bravo to those able to fully grasp this in it's entirety.
however from the time I first read a drop from you to now...
I see a huuuge improvement.

I'm mainly complimenting you're rhyme ability and scheming.
And to be honest that's all anyone can really expect is elevation
I think you got skill and could be a competitive force to be reckoned with
With some minor revision to you're steeze.
Anyways enjoyed the read. 1

[Objective]

Actively sharing vocabulary. Sentencing God.
Or pseudo empathetic nods made in reticent fog.
^ Dopeness!

And thanks to Certain for clearing up a few things, haha. Kinda tired so I didn't really give the verse itself the attention it deserved to fully understand it after just one read-through, I'll probably come back to give it a better read later on, if I got anything more to add I'll post it up. Either way I agree with Natural, been some time since I last read something by you (if you're Figurative) and I can definitely see improvement here. Cool shit.

[Certain]

Fig Jr. and I have a special connection.

[Figgly Wiggly]

Originally Posted by Certain

Fig Jr. and I have a special connection.

Mom stop

I'm fucking shy

[trap.]

My retinas are burned. Certain laid it down very eloquently. But yeah this had a long of large words for such a simple meaning. I was feeling it. Could see Buck65 over this.

[Wise Wiggles]

Cool only read first few lines then lost interest rapidly :/