Round 3: Strikta vs Sn00p {Sn00p wins}

[God Of War]

HOUSE RULES APPLY


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VERSES DUE SUNDAY THE 17TH

[Strikta]

What's up family?

12 cool?

[Sn00p]

'sup, fam. 12's fine. g'luck.

[Strikta]

I sent 14 bro, match it.

[Sn00p]

Originally Posted by Strikta

I sent 14 bro, match it.

i will, but i'mma need the ext. had guests over the whole wkend. sorry

[Sn00p]

u're generic as fuck. every1 would say u're a real herb
cuz ur verses ain't direct'or personnel...& mine are scorsese collaborating w/ spielberg
plus we germans had cruel ways to leave jews and such deceased
but if u kill some1 w/ 'gas, strik'...it stems from that area of ur body, u disgusting freak
& dude's working in a restaurant. but for this bitch, it's decent
his american dream: from dishwasher to dishwasher not addicted to kitchen cleaners
dirty bitch. u wanted to join a jamaican posse & everyone gave u hell
they said stay away from the shower. ur pics show u followed that advice way too well
plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts
see, i'm edgy cuz my old girl won't accept she must now fly solo
...the only kind of denying ex tension YOU know is the way u won ur 1st rd by noshow
& strik knows what a real redneck has to do after getting down w/ a hottie
he doesn't care who that Horus. he'll just Falcon punch the kid outta her body

[Strikta]

Ayo..
U wack whore, I'd get my passport & show up to ya spot cock sucka'
Get outlined in chalk, on ya street in da middle of ya block like a hopscotch numba'
Notable W's under my belt. Ya lady'd suck me & gag til she choked
U ain't got a notch yet, funny, I'd hear those 2 words b4 I nut in da back of her throat
I get fine bitches at casinos, but it's no secret ya night plans are dumb
Mine comp fuckin' hotel rooms, while u watch Mein Kampf fucking ur right hand in 1
I won't take it easy on u, ur gettin' crushed, & look I tried to warn ya
Nothing here s'all good man, but ya bones'll be breaking bad & crooked like the lawyer
This is war ur in today, splittin' brains even if a storm gets in my way
So in tent on u dyin', I'd set up camp over ur almost lifeless body before u drift away
I hope Christ is ya savior, cuz AOB knows u ain't nice, ur a lame brah
Actually ya verses are garbage we're Will in Tibet, like Fresh Prince sightings in Asia
When u go out to bars drinkin', I bet EVERYONE sees ur goofy & nerdy
This rd ya favorite beer's on me. Ironically, u gon' recieve da boot from this tourney

g/l

Originally Posted by Sn00p

u're generic as fuck. every1 would say u're a real herb
cuz ur verses ain't direct'or personnel...& mine are scorsese collaborating w/ spielberg
--cool
plus we germans had cruel ways to leave jews and such deceased
but if u kill some1 w/ 'gas, strik'...it stems from that area of ur body, u disgusting freak
--nice, dug it
& dude's working in a restaurant. but for this bitch, it's decent
his american dream: from dishwasher to dishwasher not addicted to kitchen cleaners
--neh
dirty bitch. u wanted to join a jamaican posse & everyone gave u hell
they said stay away from the shower. ur pics show u followed that advice way too well
--lol
plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts
--ok
see, i'm edgy cuz my old girl won't accept she must now fly solo
...the only kind of denying ex tension YOU know is the way u won ur 1st rd by noshow
--it was ok. i would have liked it better but the wp was a bit forced for me
& strik knows what a real redneck has to do after getting down w/ a hottie
he doesn't care who that Horus. he'll just Falcon punch the kid outta her body
--ok

Originally Posted by Strikta

Ayo..
U wack whore, I'd get my passport & show up to ya spot cock sucka'
Get outlined in chalk, on ya street in da middle of ya block like a hopscotch numba'
--cool
Notable W's under my belt. Ya lady'd suck me & gag til she choked
U ain't got a notch yet, funny, I'd hear those 2 words b4 I nut in da back of her throat
--dig it
I get fine bitches at casinos, but it's no secret ya night plans are dumb
Mine comp fuckin' hotel rooms, while u watch Mein Kampf fucking ur right hand in 1
--lol
I won't take it easy on u, ur gettin' crushed, & look I tried to warn ya
Nothing here s'all good man, but ya bones'll be breaking bad & crooked like the lawyer
--nah
This is war ur in today, splittin' brains even if a storm gets in my way
So in tent on u dyin', I'd set up camp over ur almost lifeless body before u drift away
wp is too old/generic
I hope Christ is ya savior, cuz AOB knows u ain't nice, ur a lame brah
Actually ya verses are garbage we're Will in Tibet, like Fresh Prince sightings in Asia
--cool
When u go out to bars drinkin', I bet EVERYONE sees ur goofy & nerdy
This rd ya favorite beer's on me. Ironically, u gon' recieve da boot from this tourney
--not feeling

g/l

cool battle. i got quotes 4-3 in favor of strik but snoop was more consistent and had better misses. I dont know, could go either way. Strik had a couple that made me lol so Im edging it to him. Good shit

V/ Strikta

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Sn00p

u're generic as fuck. every1 would say u're a real herb
cuz ur verses ain't direct'or personnel...& mine are scorsese collaborating w/ spielberg
nice, like this
plus we germans had cruel ways to leave jews and such deceased
but if u kill some1 w/ 'gas, strik'...it stems from that area of ur body, u disgusting freak
[/B]lol good nameplay[/B]
& dude's working in a restaurant. but for this bitch, it's decent
his american dream: from dishwasher to dishwasher not addicted to kitchen cleaners
okay
dirty bitch. u wanted to join a jamaican posse & everyone gave u hell
they said stay away from the shower. ur pics show u followed that advice way too well
lol
plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts
okay
see, i'm edgy cuz my old girl won't accept she must now fly solo
...the only kind of denying ex tension YOU know is the way u won ur 1st rd by noshow
wow lol really solid
& strik knows what a real redneck has to do after getting down w/ a hottie
he doesn't care who that Horus. he'll just Falcon punch the kid outta her body
not as good, but still chuckled

Originally Posted by Strikta

Ayo..
U wack whore, I'd get my passport & show up to ya spot cock sucka'
Get outlined in chalk, on ya street in da middle of ya block like a hopscotch numba'
I thought this was done really well but kind of corny
Notable W's under my belt. Ya lady'd suck me & gag til she choked
U ain't got a notch yet, funny, I'd hear those 2 words b4 I nut in da back of her throat
lol nice
I get fine bitches at casinos, but it's no secret ya night plans are dumb
Mine comp fuckin' hotel rooms, while u watch Mein Kampf fucking ur right hand in 1
Solid, like the mine comp/mein kampf idea
I won't take it easy on u, ur gettin' crushed, & look I tried to warn ya
Nothing here s'all good man, but ya bones'll be breaking bad & crooked like the lawyer
alright
This is war ur in today, splittin' brains even if a storm gets in my way
So in tent on u dyin', I'd set up camp over ur almost lifeless body before u drift away
okay
I hope Christ is ya savior, cuz AOB knows u ain't nice, ur a lame brah
Actually ya verses are garbage we're Will in Tibet, like Fresh Prince sightings in Asia
lol
When u go out to bars drinkin', I bet EVERYONE sees ur goofy & nerdy
This rd ya favorite beer's on me. Ironically, u gon' recieve da boot from this tourney
pretty sure it was das boot, but that didnt really affect your bar, just making it clear for my own sake
g/l

wow, dope battle. I feel like it could down to preference on some of these lines but I found sn00p's verse more effective as a whole... some of those personals were well constructed and really funny. Strik had some dope lines and lols as well, but I thought sn00p was a little harder so I have to edge it to him

again, wow. I originally abstained from voting just because this was such a high-level battle it deserved higher tier votes, but shit, someone gotta vote

V/ Sn00p

[Dominate]

Tryna sneakily do this from work so I might have to do it in parts

Strik:

U wack whore, I'd get my passport & show up to ya spot cock sucka'
Get outlined in chalk, on ya street in da middle of ya block like a hopscotch numba'
not bad. cool imagery.
Notable W's under my belt. Ya lady'd suck me & gag til she choked
U ain't got a notch yet, funny, I'd hear those 2 words b4 I nut in da back of her throat
heh, cool
I get fine bitches at casinos, but it's no secret ya night plans are dumb
Mine comp fuckin' hotel rooms, while u watch Mein Kampf fucking ur right hand in 1
hah, pretty good. Good execution putting an f work after comp. Woulda been forced without it.
I won't take it easy on u, ur gettin' crushed, & look I tried to warn ya
Nothing here s'all good man, but ya bones'll be breaking bad & crooked like the lawyer
concept's nice, feel like the way you included 'sall goodman' was a little awkward but I still dug it
This is war ur in today, splittin' brains even if a storm gets in my way
So in tent on u dyin', I'd set up camp over ur almost lifeless body before u drift away
ehh nah. wp is a bit familiar and the punch wasn't anything to compansate
I hope Christ is ya savior, cuz AOB knows u ain't nice, ur a lame brah
Actually ya verses are garbage we're Will in Tibet, like Fresh Prince sightings in Asia
ehh no... again the wp is a bit familiar. I've used Tibet/to bet before for example
When u go out to bars drinkin', I bet EVERYONE sees ur goofy & nerdy
This rd ya favorite beer's on me. Ironically, u gon' recieve da boot from this tourney
I don't get it. Did a quick google for a beer brand called Daboot but nothing doing... assuming that's how this bar works it's good technically but obv the impact was lost

Overall good swag and rhyming throughout, some good concepts, couple corny/familiar ones but overall a pretty solid showing. Well done

[Dominate]

Sn00p:

u're generic as fuck. every1 would say u're a real herb
cuz ur verses ain't direct'or personnel...& mine are scorsese collaborating w/ spielberg
coo, general personal.. wp a bit familiar/generic... flip was more creative
plus we germans had cruel ways to leave jews and such deceased
but if u kill some1 w/ 'gas, strik'...it stems from that area of ur body, u disgusting freak
really dig the concept but 'u disgusting freak' sounds really corny imo.. still liked but dissapointed with how you worded for the punch
& dude's working in a restaurant. but for this bitch, it's decent
his american dream: from dishwasher to dishwasher not addicted to kitchen cleaners
unless I'm missing something this is a bit meh to me. Not bad I guess, just didn't do anything for me.
dirty bitch. u wanted to join a jamaican posse & everyone gave u hell
they said stay away from the shower. ur pics show u followed that advice way too well
ha, good. and personal. Worded well for punch
plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts
cool, is this a personal? If so it's good, if not... OK
see, i'm edgy cuz my old girl won't accept she must now fly solo
...the only kind of denying ex tension YOU know is the way u won ur 1st rd by noshow
ha. Good. Punch hit hard. Well set up and worded
& strik knows what a real redneck has to do after getting down w/ a hottie
he doesn't care who that Horus. he'll just Falcon punch the kid outta her body
ehhh... Seen Horus/whore is wp before... although flip was a bit funny and more creative

Overall good swag besides the 'u disgusting freak'... some good lines, lotta personals... solid verse, well done

[Dominate]

This is really close. Sorry guys I'm gonna have to postpone my actual vote til later when I'm not at work. I'll edit this and tag you both when I do


Edit: @Sn00p @Strikta

OK, sorry for the delay.... as I said this is really really close... reading both through again I still don't have a gut feeling as to who won... really you guys should consider this a draw regardless of who ends us with more votes.... but I know tie votes are lame, someone's gotta get the dub, so....

best bars of the battle were Jamaican shower, denying extension & mein kampf

good bars were gastric, notch yet, sall goodman,

didn't like fresh prince line or in tent on u dying line... horus line and direct'or line weren't far behind

the other bars weren't bad but didn't do anything for me

OK with that breakdown done I guess I have to give it to Snoop... also he came a bit more personal...

Good battle guys


v/- Sn00p

[Flow]

u're generic as fuck. every1 would say u're a real herb
cuz ur verses ain't direct'or personnel...& mine are scorsese collaborating w/ spielberg
Not a great punch but it still worked as an opener
plus we germans had cruel ways to leave jews and such deceased
but if u kill some1 w/ 'gas, strik'...it stems from that area of ur body, u disgusting freak
lol
& dude's working in a restaurant. but for this bitch, it's decent
his american dream: from dishwasher to dishwasher not addicted to kitchen cleaners
eh?
dirty bitch. u wanted to join a jamaican posse & everyone gave u hell
they said stay away from the shower. ur pics show u followed that advice way too well
Lol best one so far nice personal
plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts
I like this one, but i feel it works only if this is a personal...Still nice concept
see, i'm edgy cuz my old girl won't accept she must now fly solo
...the only kind of denying ex tension YOU know is the way u won ur 1st rd by noshow
lol another nice one but wasnt feeling that first line
& strik knows what a real redneck has to do after getting down w/ a hottie
he doesn't care who that Horus. he'll just Falcon punch the kid outta her body
ok but not the strongest close
VS

Ayo..
U wack whore, I'd get my passport & show up to ya spot cock sucka'
Get outlined in chalk, on ya street in da middle of ya block like a hopscotch numba'
lol bit played though
Notable W's under my belt. Ya lady'd suck me & gag til she choked
U ain't got a notch yet, funny, I'd hear those 2 words b4 I nut in da back of her throat
lol again played but then again made me laugh
I get fine bitches at casinos, but it's no secret ya night plans are dumb
Mine comp fuckin' hotel rooms, while u watch Mein Kampf fucking ur right hand in 1
Really clever and well worded
I won't take it easy on u, ur gettin' crushed, & look I tried to warn ya
Nothing here s'all good man, but ya bones'll be breaking bad & crooked like the lawyer
mmm not for me sorry
This is war ur in today, splittin' brains even if a storm gets in my way
So in tent on u dyin', I'd set up camp over ur almost lifeless body before u drift away
didnt feel this hit hard enough
I hope Christ is ya savior, cuz AOB knows u ain't nice, ur a lame brah
Actually ya verses are garbage we're Will in Tibet, like Fresh Prince sightings in Asia
thought this was pretty clever i just dont feel its hitting hard enough
When u go out to bars drinkin', I bet EVERYONE sees ur goofy & nerdy
This rd ya favorite beer's on me. Ironically, u gon' recieve da boot from this tourney
not the best close

This is a hard one for me...I think snoop was more consistent but I def had more laughs at Striks and even where he wasnt hitting hard enough for me his concepts were good different attempts...

EDIT: Actually after rereading I think Snoop takes this on consistency. No hate @Strikta its a close one but just wasnt feeling the sting in to many of your punches

V/Snoop

[Ox]

u're generic as fuck. every1 would say u're a real herb
cuz ur verses ain't direct'or personnel...& mine are scorsese collaborating w/ spielberg
plus we germans had cruel ways to leave jews and such deceased
but if u kill some1 w/ 'gas, strik'...it stems from that area of ur body, u disgusting freak
plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts
see, i'm edgy cuz my old girl won't accept she must now fly solo
...the only kind of denying ex tension YOU know is the way u won ur 1st rd by noshow

vs

Notable W's under my belt. Ya lady'd suck me & gag til she choked
U ain't got a notch yet, funny, I'd hear those 2 words b4 I nut in da back of her throat
I get fine bitches at casinos, but it's no secret ya night plans are dumb
Mine comp fuckin' hotel rooms, while u watch Mein Kampf fucking ur right hand in 1
I hope Christ is ya savior, cuz AOB knows u ain't nice, ur a lame brah
Actually ya verses are garbage we're Will in Tibet, like Fresh Prince sightings in Asia[ur best bar imo]

I liked Snoops punches better this was close but Snoops were better i didnt care for the dishwahser bit or stikta opener but i feel like snoop was a bit more polished with his bars hit harder used personals very nicely to construct his quips good job fellas

v/Sn00p

[Frank]

vote - snoop

Some clever shit. eg. the gastric and extension line. django line was pretty funny.

strika had the will in tibet line which was dope but generic too.

[Swerve]

& dude's working in a restaurant. but for this bitch, it's decent
his american dream: from dishwasher to dishwasher not addicted to kitchen cleaners
plus getting beat up for the n-word doesn't make u strong or hard
i bet u loved watching the django premiere, but cheered at all the wrongest parts
& strik knows what a real redneck has to do after getting down w/ a hottie
he doesn't care who that Horus. he'll just Falcon punch the kid outta her body

vs.

Notable W's under my belt. Ya lady'd suck me & gag til she choked
U ain't got a notch yet, funny, I'd hear those 2 words b4 I nut in da back of her throat
I get fine bitches at casinos, but it's no secret ya night plans are dumb
Mine comp fuckin' hotel rooms, while u watch Mein Kampf fucking ur right hand in 1


3-2 in quotes, but Strik's 2 were just bangers. Not yet and Mein Kampf were fire. However, Snoop just ended up coming more consistent with it. Both had a solid number of played things, but Snoop went more personal and saved himself there and that's what really got him the dub.

Vote - Snoop