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Whats the difference between Metropia and revolver? Whats the difference between my mind and a flying saucer? Question your existence and you will find their lying coffer That’s why you stay thirsty in a water world like Costner My mind is diamond, so it’s easy to drill, or auger Silently kill, then chill and use your grill to pop the top of my lager Innocent in court, and on the court I’m a baller The truth is that I would be dunking if I was taller Andromedean king, in the ring, pile driving Kaufmann’s like Lawler On earth my ancient kin buried in the tombs of OLLAM FODHLA Still pimping, pulling hoes by their collar Foes know my prose can disclose their squalor Now you see me, now you don’t….Night crawler When the nuclear bombs release their EMP You gon see that KOS always had that ESP While you prepping for ZOM’s peeping the CDC And lacking the will or skill to stand up for WHO U BE. The overused cliché, neo, the matrix, blah blah blah Just preaching Revelations, oh Si Vous Plait Never look the gift horseman of the apocalypse in the mouth…cal-ig-u-la I keep it logical, they all emotional and limbic, Ah-mig-da-la I don’t need to romanticize I get specific when I counsel Brah You aint smart or original, here smoke this ounce of duh Then overdose on the conclusions of this strenuous lecture Remember the age after the age after this one, before you step to the Rev sir Cuz it aint a thing to toss your entire mind into a blender Control-Alt-Delete…..Enter.
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This was pretty smooth a very different approach then your previous piece
I enjoyed a majority of this because of the flow the Kaufman drop was smooth the ending was smooth too I thought the saucer line was cool too...nice work V keep it up
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Thanks fam good looks.
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