Diss #2

Dope girl · 11-02-2013, 02:38 PM

When other emcees see me their eyes fill with fear,
Listen up everyone, I'm not just another Poetry.
I'm the modern day shakespeare,
I see no reason for you 2 yell on the Microphone.
Speaking out treason, now see your mind get blown,
you are WaQ but seeing is believing seem like Mind controling.
See your flows is debatable,
Stop trying you not capable.
you are unintelligent & you rhyme irrelevant,
It's evident you have been negligent.

I hope ya'll like it!

Zen · 11-02-2013, 03:02 PM

That Shakespeare line was fuckin ill.

Dope girl · 11-02-2013, 03:10 PM

Thanks for reading.

Neighbor · 11-02-2013, 05:17 PM

Robranda is Rudge1?

Wise Wiggles · 11-02-2013, 06:51 PM

Not bad. Keep practicing and you'll get better lines.

Dope girl · 11-02-2013, 07:04 PM

thanks

Sho Money EMG · 11-02-2013, 08:26 PM

Keep practicing not bad.

Dope girl · 11-03-2013, 01:00 PM

thanks love!

Brian Bryan · 11-04-2013, 10:59 AM

LISTEN UP EVERYONE, I'M NOT JUST ANOTHER POETRY

Scripter · 11-04-2013, 01:11 PM

I think if you just took a little more time with what you wrote you would have solid bars. If you are just starting out it sounds pretty good. You just have to put everything you have into it, the best pieces come from your heart and soul put more thought into it.

For example
"When other emcees see me their eyes fill with fear,
Listen up everyone, I'm not just another Poetry.
I'm the modern day shakespeare,"

here you could of said something like "Listen up everyone, I'm not just another smoe with average flow"
Keep writing!

KennyCerealBowl · 11-04-2013, 01:44 PM

This is actually not bad. Nice job homie

e11even · 11-04-2013, 01:51 PM

That was your best drop. You get better every entry! Keep doing your thing, troll or no-troll.

Dope girl · 11-04-2013, 03:39 PM

thanks for the feeedbacks!

Pakistani Hand Cannon · 11-05-2013, 10:57 PM

lmfaooo

KwaL!ty · 11-07-2013, 11:31 AM

there was no real diss here .. nothing that went towards any body .. no direction no nothing special .. i guess good effort keep trying ...

Dope girl · 11-07-2013, 04:51 PM

thanks love!

Geno · 11-07-2013, 06:47 PM

Listen up everyone, I'm not just another Poetry.

Fire!

Mike Wrecka · 11-07-2013, 07:17 PM

robranda cant be real. I refuse to accept this as reality

Dope girl · 11-07-2013, 07:36 PM

just fun diss, Anyways, Thanks for the feedback G!

Mr. J · 11-07-2013, 08:02 PM

needs more this & that

11-02-2013, 02:38 PM	#1
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Diss #2 When other emcees see me their eyes fill with fear, Listen up everyone, I'm not just another Poetry. I'm the modern day shakespeare, I see no reason for you 2 yell on the Microphone. Speaking out treason, now see your mind get blown, you are WaQ but seeing is believing seem like Mind controling. See your flows is debatable, Stop trying you not capable. you are unintelligent & you rhyme irrelevant, It's evident you have been negligent. I hope ya'll like it!

11-02-2013, 05:17 PM	#4
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11-02-2013, 06:51 PM	#5
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Not bad. Keep practicing and you'll get better lines. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

11-02-2013, 08:26 PM	#7
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11-04-2013, 01:11 PM	#10
Scripter _Al_GO_RYTHMIC Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 644 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 0	I think if you just took a little more time with what you wrote you would have solid bars. If you are just starting out it sounds pretty good. You just have to put everything you have into it, the best pieces come from your heart and soul put more thought into it. For example "When other emcees see me their eyes fill with fear, Listen up everyone, I'm not just another Poetry. I'm the modern day shakespeare," here you could of said something like "Listen up everyone, I'm not just another smoe with average flow" Keep writing! __________________ http://www.youtube.com/user/toadill Ⓖⓔⓣ ⓘⓝ ⓣⓗⓔ ⓑⓞⓦⓛ I CAN’T LIVE WITHOUT ╔══════╦═╗╔═╦═══╦═╦═══╗ ║░╔╗╔╗░║░║║░║╚══╣░║░╔═╝ ║░║╚╝║░║░╚╝░╠══╗║░║░╚═╗ ╚═╝░░╚═╩════╩═══╩═╩═══╝ ¸.•¨•♫♪¸.•¨•♫♪¸.•¨•♫♪¸.•¨•♫♪ ◕MUSIC◕LOVE◕LIVE◕LAUGH◕ ☯█▄█ █ █▀█ █▄█ █▀█ █▀█ ♬ ♬█▀█ █ █▀▀ █▀█ █▄█ █▀▀ ☯ ❤ ♡ ❤ ♡ ❤♡ ❤ ♡ ❤ ♡ ❤ ♡ ❤♡

11-02-2013, 03:02 PM	#2
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	That Shakespeare line was fuckin ill.

11-02-2013, 03:10 PM	#3
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Thanks for reading.

11-02-2013, 07:04 PM	#6
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	thanks

11-03-2013, 01:00 PM	#8
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	thanks love!

11-04-2013, 10:59 AM	#9
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	LISTEN UP EVERYONE, I'M NOT JUST ANOTHER POETRY

11-04-2013, 01:44 PM	#11
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	This is actually not bad. Nice job homie __________________

11-04-2013, 01:51 PM	#12
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	That was your best drop. You get better every entry! Keep doing your thing, troll or no-troll. __________________ Ahem.

11-04-2013, 03:39 PM	#13
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	thanks for the feeedbacks!

11-05-2013, 10:57 PM	#14
Pakistani Hand Cannon Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,230 Rep Power: 5303583	lmfaooo

11-07-2013, 11:31 AM	#15
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	there was no real diss here .. nothing that went towards any body .. no direction no nothing special .. i guess good effort keep trying ...

11-07-2013, 04:51 PM	#16
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	thanks love!

11-07-2013, 06:47 PM	#17
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11-07-2013, 07:17 PM	#18
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	robranda cant be real. I refuse to accept this as reality __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

11-07-2013, 07:36 PM	#19
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	just fun diss, Anyways, Thanks for the feedback G!

11-07-2013, 08:02 PM	#20
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	needs more this & that __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you