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Old 02-04-2013, 02:59 PM   #1
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Old 02-05-2013, 02:54 AM   #2
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this was dope as fuck!..
iono how but yall kept the same flow throughout...it was a bit choppy but thats expected with
each person being different. dopest collab so far tho, hands down

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A hip hip resident not hesitant to represent my pen and writs
Sane is multie tasking while my punchlines is ending this
Never commend a bitch I will hurt and extend a diss.


You get the gist? Respect this shit, you’re just another desperate clique
Writin like dyslexic kids on mescaline; quit sippin that depressant sip
I’m attention-deficit, obsessive—which became an epileptic glitch


those are my faves from your first verses...
cuz the second verses were all dope and better than you first
good shit.
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Old 01-04-2014, 07:16 AM   #3
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Old 01-04-2014, 10:29 AM   #4
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Together we write for nothin but our individual betterment

The weaker get hit, leak liters of blood, fill the beakers and shit
I'm the grim reaper with speakers you pricks just eat what i dish
I'm at the peak of this at least for the rest of the week you bitch...< lol. nice


Rap is my lyrical medicine using similes and mettas with
My cleverness cause ever since I was born it was embedded in
A hip hop resident not hesitant to represent my pen and writs


^^i like how that's like one long continuing statement. i do that a lot and don't see it much. i think hip hop resident could be reworded to keep the flow as fluid as the rest..but it's still nice as it is.

Plead the fifth you give me every reason to leave you ripped
Scream and wish that I don't unleash this legion of demon fists


Makin paraplegics flip, dissolvin the puke on a bulimic’s chin
Darken up every anemic’s tint while followers of Jesus strip
This writing could almost make a policeman hip…Almost
Open up your spleen and shit until our feces stick
So at least you can be someone even as a piece of shit
Agreed, I’m sick. Forever diseased with fits of this seasoned spit
Breathin in the spliff and releasin wisps of hits as it’s seepin in
Sneakin fire back from these elitist tricks, label me Prometheus


solid verse to end it with..

good collab y'all. not much bad to say...sections included were my fave's from each person. cool how ya kepth the same rhymes almost all the way through..isn't too easy. for it to be a 3 person collab it held together pretty well. good shit.
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Old 01-04-2014, 02:04 PM   #5
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Lol wtf?

How is this the.best bodey verse i ever read.....and she collabed woth these two idiots and blew it....haha


Bodey outshined these two other lames ......by a lot
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Old 01-04-2014, 02:20 PM   #6
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Makin paraplegics flip, dissolvin the puke on a bulimic’s chin
Darken up every anemic’s tint while followers of Jesus strip
lol - that was vicious. cool collaboration.
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